Mini FF- Mohobat- part 14 page30

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hi guys i am back from my break with a short ff and i will be continuing kismat ka khel. so all you friends there keep you eyes open.


Mohobat

this story revolves around gauri. a muslim girl ~(sorry for those who are offended by it. but i cant change the name. it is necessary for her to be a muslim in order for my story to succeed.) it is a love story which is complete without being complete. (if that make sense. didn't to me.) her love is shiv. (muslim tooo. what can i do it was the story which inspired me was on a muslim girl and boy so i am taking that.)

No one know what exactly love is. its is a feeling which cannot be put into words. To define love, one has to also include the risks and the dark sides. As much as love can incite great poetry, build bonds between two opposing people, and turn a sour old man into a laughing teenager again. It also has it's dangerous after effects. Be it the feeling of desperation when it ends, anywhere from a week to months of sitting on the couch dead in the heart. To possibly getting taken advantage of for being blinded by love. There are always risks involved, that's the whole point of the game.
Is love really worth it. why does one loves another so much that he/she is ready to give his/her life for the loved ones.
Gauri lived only to love and be loved. shiv loved her to no extent. she loved him back with just as much as passion. But will their love story be complete or will it be incomplete.

Every character is from the soap, but will be presented in different way.

If anyone does not like it plz tell me now. sorry if i hurt anyone's feeling. Plz tell me if i should write the story or just leave it.

part1 page4 16/06/07
promo page 5
promo page6
part2 page7 20/06/07
part3 page9 22/06/07
part4 page10 28/06/07
part5 page13 04/07/07
part6 page16 05/07/07
part7 page18 07/07/07
part8 page19 10/07/07
part9 page21 16/07/07
part10 page23 25/07/07
part11 page23 31/07/07
part12 page18 05/08/07
part13 page29 15/08/07
part14 page30 20/12/2007

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sum2005 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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maria......welcome back.

wow new ff....and a love story.....come girl update it....introduction is very awsome.....come on jaldi fatafat update kar.....

👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow...nice intro defo continue with it
being a muslim gal myself, im guessing there's gonna be sum trouble in this love story 😆
xxxx
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Maria we are all from different back grounds here and respect eachother... so write your story how you feel...

kat
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Posted: 18 years ago
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heyy awesome girl being myself a muslim girl
i think tht we all respect our and others religions
so i dont think any ones feeling will be hurt




afshaaa
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: afshaa!!!

heyy awesome girl being myself a muslim girl
i think tht we all respect our and others religions
so i dont think any ones feeling will be hurt




afshaaa


hey thanks for assuring but you may have read the story somewhere. i likes it and thought of transfering it in my own style. so i've got my fingers crossed and praying that no one has read it before.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Catwoman

Maria we are all from different back grounds here and respect eachother... so write your story how you feel...

kat


thanks kat i am glad that it doesn't offend anyone. i will surely write.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: sum2005

maria......welcome back.

wow new ff....and a love story.....come girl update it....introduction is very awsome.....come on jaldi fatafat update kar.....

👏


sumi di thank you. 🤗🤗🤗yes i am back. sumi hum intezar karane walon me se hain or app ko thora intezar karna pare ga. abhi sirf introduction se kaam chaliyen.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Raihena

wow...nice intro defo continue with it
being a muslim gal myself, im guessing there's gonna be sum trouble in this love story 😆
xxxx


thanks raihana yeah trouble is all i write about. but it will be one heck of a trouble. you may have read it before. i read it in a magazine. it was very touching so i thought of converting. another way of sharing my knowledge
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Posted: 18 years ago
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~~~~~~ PROMO ~~~~~~



I went out for dinner with my bhaiya and bhabhi. they came especially to see me. I've been pikced up from hostel. how could i eat when i saw shashank sitting only two table away chatting with his mates. i was in shock. i never saw him around the college. i have never seen him for three months. which helped me not to think about him. But the last frightening moments and conversation we had scared the hell out of me. The only thing i could do when i remember those words was to assure my self that only Allah will get find a way out of this problem.
i had been staring at the table in which he was sitting with his mates for too long. Bhaiya and bhabhi had followed my gaze. they knew what had got my attention. why i became so pale as if i had seen a ghost. i could not do anything to control my feeling. Then he stood uo paid the bill and left with his mates. i took control on myself but i was scared. Something inside me kept telling me something is going to be wrong. my sister was more worried than i was. Everyone was thinking what can be done about the matter. A million dollar question in everyone's mind. And i was left with only fear in my heart. he had come back into her life. To take what was not his.
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