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Posted: 18 years ago
gud update friend 👏 finally shiv's proposal was accepted thank god gauri's father didn't accept shashank's propasal n finally very gud update friend n very gud work keep it up friend 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: mintfresh

just read ur last 2 parts
it's awesum
atlast shiv-gauri got engaged.hope this happiness stays for a while. keep up with ur good work.
eagerly waiting for next part. pls update ur title


thanks yaar. i am glad u like it. i will try my best to keep them together. thanks for reminding me about the title. 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: soniayk6

gud update friend 👏 finally shiv's proposal was accepted thank god gauri's father didn't accept shashank's propasal n finally very gud update friend n very gud work keep it up friend 👏


thanks saniya yeah thank god they took so long to decide. yeah well they had no other way guess her jiju fixed things. thanks i will try my best😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
only two replies sab log chuti pe gaye hain kya. 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
nice update maira,atlast shiv and gauri got engaged.

uuff hamare gauri bani jhansi ki rani so shashank is after her.

waiting for next update please. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sum2005

nice update maira,atlast shiv and gauri got engaged.

uuff hamare gauri bani jhansi ki rani so shashank is after her.

waiting for next update please. 👏


thanks sumi di. finally i got a reply i was waiting for that. mujeh laga shayad update me kuch garbar hai. do replies dekh ke to me dar hi gayi thi. i know she had to act smart and slap him and make him follow u for rest of the life😆 i wil try my best to update soon😆😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
sry sry dear...im ver bad at replying to FF these days..cos i dnt get time to read FF these days
read them when i c them 😳 😳 😳

anyway....amazing..gauri giving bahashan here also 😆
nw shiv is abt to kick her out in the seies cos of her bahashan...nw she might find her way out even b4 she gets married if she continue to give bahashan to shiv also
poor shashank had to listen to the whole thing 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ash9

sry sry dear...im ver bad at replying to FF these days.. i can understand. it was just making me worried ke maybe i did something wrong in the updatecos i dnt get time to read FF these days
read them when i c them 😳 😳 😳

anyway....amazing..gauri giving bahashan here also i was thinking that i wil get this comment. kya karon raha nahi gaya. after all she is mrs all talk no work 😆
nw shiv is abt to kick her out in the seies cos of her bahashan i know she should learn well lets see where does her bhashan leads her in the ff...nw she might find her way out even b4 she gets married hmmm lets see what happens. u r right if she keep giving him bhshan like that he wil divorce her before he marries her if she continue to give bahashan to shiv also
poor shashank had to listen to the whole thing hmm well he is taking revenge now she says sorry but he does not forgive her😆

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Posted: 18 years ago


well continue soon..im going to look at all the other FF i missed.....abt 100 more😆 me n my FF addiction😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
part 12


"aao di app ko bhi mehendi laga dein," said kaya. "nahi tum hi lagao mujeh nahi achi lagti yeh mehendi waghaira." I rejected her request. ""be chari ka dil tor diya." said sameena "lagwa lo tum bhi" "tum chup karke lagwao" another cousin of mine said. "wo apni bari pe lagwaye gi" every one had a huge laugh at what she said. Shiv and asad bhai came up for while. They were watching sameena getting her mehendi done. And sameena's eyes were raining like the cloud of the rainy season. (ok that was just sad) sameena with her covered hands with mehendi cried while hugging them. And both of them being them cried. Not taking into account their manhood. My eyes got moistened. It was scene. Even di and bhabhi came. She separated them. "yeh kya pagal pan hai?" smeena hugged di and started crying. Di started to comfort shiv and asad bhai. But asad bhai just would not stop crying. "asad bhai, jab appp baji ki biyah kar laye the tab to itna nahi hoye hon ge. Akhir wo bhi kissi ki behen kissi ke beti thi." asked my younger sister swati. And room filled with laughter. Even asas bhai started to laugh.

He made a cute face and said. "haan guriya, iss waqt to me itna nahi roya tha. Shayad waqti tor par bohot khudh tha. Lakin us waqt se abb tak ro raha hon." the room filled with yet another strong laughter. "kyun humari baji itni buri hai?" swati became serious. ""nahi. Itni buri to nahi" said asad bhai with fake seriousness. " albuta thori si buri zaroor hain, thori si zidi, thori si khubsurat, thori si." before he could finish the sentence di dragged him out. Every one was still laughing. Bhabhi was about to go to. "bhabhi ap nahi lagwaye gi mehendi." shouted kaya "nahi chanda" her answer was short. "majeed bhai ke kapre kaharab hon ke" sameena added. Then even bhabhi started laughing. "kuch sharam karo." bhabhi started saying. "shiv bhai bethe hain aur tum log aur kuch nahi to in ka hi lehaz kar lo" shiv was sitting in a corner. Enjoying the conversation. And joking with every one. And not forgetting to comment on me. "wase shiv bhai ap yahan kya kar rahe hain" asked kaya "bari ke Intisar me " kiss cheez ka intezar "mehendi lagwabe ke" he said with such innocence that every one started laughing. I signalled him with my eyes to go out from here.

The wedding was over I did not get time to write the diary but I wrote some detail that I remembered into it last night. Like when I found shiv crying in the room I was staying in. " shiv tum ro kyun rahe ho" "gauri wo meri behen thi. Sagi na sahi lakin behen to thi na" "kya matlab thi wo abb bhi hai. Or roo nahi tum rotay hoe bilkul ache nahi lagte" "acha agar na roon to acha lagon ga." he asked so innocently that I started laughing. "mujeh to tum har hal me achi lagti ho hasti hoi roti hoi" "khuda na kare tum kabhi roo" he added with such truthfulness.

"gauri" asad bhai came into the kitchen. "asad bhai me tayar hon kab jana hai" "me issi silsle me tum se baat karne aya tha" he spoke "sameena kal tak yahin hai. Agar gunjaish ho to kal tak yahin rok jao. Agar nahi to bura na mano to shiv ke saath chli jao usse bhi ajj lazmi Delhi jana hai." I was confused. I did not know what to do. Every one now knew that me and shiv were going to be married. Would it be ok I if go with him alone. Abu was in Mumbai but mum she was in Delhi. I thought about it for a few moment. Then decided that I will go with him. Because I trust myself and shiv. "jis tarhan ap munasib samujhien." I told asad bhai. I met everyone and then with gifts I was away. On the way home we talked a lot. About everything. Our life together. Our future. Our home. I requested shiv to let me complete my studies first. But he wanted me to take a final decision. He wanted us to get married. Do nikah and then I could finish off my studies. He did not want to me to go away from him.

"phir app kahe ge ke bas shadi hon jaye to parti rehna" " me wada karta hon gauri, me khabhi tumhari taleem me rukawat bano ga na bache." "kya" I looked at him questioningly. "saaf keh raah hon tum part rehna bache me sambhal lon ga" he smiled. "shiv" I said with fake anger. "baz a jao aisi baton se. chalo kam az kam mujeh tumhari neeyat ka to andaza ho gaya. Abbkarwana zara mujeh se nikah" "me to dil ke ikrar ka kayel ho jab tum ne mujeh accept kar liya to me tumgara tum meri. Phir chahe zaman kuch bhi kare. Yeh sab to dunyavi rasmien hai me to tumhare haqooq apne naam Mahfouz karana chahta hon." he was serious now. " he stopped the car. He put his hands on my shoulder and then turned me to face him. " gauri.. Ei bar keh do tum humehsa meri raho gi, meri ho, kal bhi meri theen." "theek hai ab gari chalao" I was scared of his madness. "pehle meri baat ka jawab do kya tum sirf meri ho" "haan" I said it finally "yhe kya hoa haan naa. Pori baat kaho tum meri ho" "haan me tumhari hon" I said it and rested my head on my knees. While his hands were busy opening my plait on my back. " waise meri eik baat ka jawab do to." he made me face him again. " tumhare is tarhan teen dafa iqrar karbe s asoolan to mera aur tumhara nikah ho gaya hai" "shiv please" I was getting scared " abb gari chalao"



enjoy every one. but this time i want more comments. jitne kam comments honge i wil triple them in days........................... 😆
Edited by crystalclear - 18 years ago

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