Short FF: 'MASK'..Last Part: PG1 18/06 - Page 29

Originally posted by: desi chic

Jaz na? So you're my Billo Rani's what's it called... nanand?😕😆 *ahem* I hear she hasn't told you about the magic of bananas... 😳

And the "last part" bit, yeah "talk" is right... and in depth at that.

Billiye... this last part... *standing ovation*👏👏 It was so beautifully layered with emotions... and this next one is for sure gonna rip my heart out...

Cheers,

dc

yeah jaz is loose ...but the copper's tryin to get her badge and was fooling about on here!!😆...

dc ripp heart out!! come on... i have to write something decent now? *FANNA DAME!*😆

Originally posted by: Catwoman

yeah jaz is loose ...but the copper's tryin to get her badge and was fooling about on here!!😆...copper? hai rabba... di marwaoge tussi!... but I suppose its difficult handling the job of zoo keeper alone... phir bhi, kuch toh socha hota...😆

dc ripp heart out!! come on... i have to write something decent now? *FANNA DAME!*😆 u write like u want billiye... I'm already fanna over your works... and tuhaadi update te full clean?... ho sakda eh?😳jk!😆

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: Iqbaladdict

omg Billo, this part was the most thrilling and exciting, the journey, the kiss, the revelations of him being a father and lil shanti with cute smile and finally the unmasking was so damn good,

where r u f/tips, gonna kiss, gal, u have magic for imagiation, I really can't wait for th end and I just wish it was not the end, lovely lovely work will be saving it into my ff collecction 😳

Rano cheers aweee... u now i had doubts writting this part was not sure if the parted fitted but u all liked it which is great!!....i hope the final part lives up to scratch with u all!!😳

Kat

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Originally posted by: Catwoman

Gauri has lost it??...final leap no coma!! and last part!!😳

Originally posted by: shivgauri

great part Kat!!! 👏 loved it!!! Especially Shanti and Shiv part!!!very sweet!!! great work 👏 👏 👏
P.S: Wasn't Kaya married to Nitesh??? 😕

dame ....Uff corrected!😳