Short FF: 'MASK'..Last Part: PG1 18/06 - Page 28

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Posted: 18 years ago
OMG guys u liked it i was worried thought i was not able to get the feeling down properly!!... 😳
don't cry natasha (btw i love that name)...ending will be posted soon!!

Kat
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow tat was a very nice surprise...looking forward to the next part...wich sadly is the last part 😕 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
awwwwwww so cute they have a daughter and poor shiv didn't knew about this all these years....awesome part 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
hw many more parts left???
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no twins??? 😕
better luck nxt time ha??? 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
i don't get it 😕 !!!now she is blaming him for leaving her???but wht was he to do😕 ???but great part Kat!!!u have been leaping through out the fanfic 😉 !!!!hope this was the final leap!!1
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Posted: 18 years ago
bhabs what did u eat when u wrote this serious hardcore...dame!! 😆 😆 😆 ....

last part?? come on!! we need to talk 😕
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Posted: 18 years ago
i missed out on the two most beautiful parts so far.....how cud i.....
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absolutely MINDBLOWIN!!!!!!!!
and panji tussi mainu rula rahe ho.... 😭 😭
so much pain,bitterness and beyond that such deep intensified love 😳 ...... how do u do it.....

wow shanti is in it..... so cute......


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Posted: 18 years ago
😭, why is Gauri so adamant about not forgiving him and how cud she keep his child away from him 😕 😕 😕
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sum2005

👏 kat very nice part and the emotions and love they both have to each other is amazing and i hope gauri accepts shiv in her life...so happy family..... 👏

cheers sum...me too😉

Originally posted by: Raihena

omg...dat part was so sad...it almost had me in tears 😭
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xxxxxxx

rai don't cry!!😳.....

Originally posted by: gujibabe

so did they have a 4 year leap or somethin!!!!
im confused 😕
well it was a great part!!!

yes i leaped 4 years and they have a baby shanti!!😳

Originally posted by: natasha kumar

wat a nice and sad part. So, there was a 4 yr leap. Shiv met Gauri on the plane and she has a cute little girl named Shanti, thats really nice. It was also really sad and i started to cry 😭 . Plz dont end these FF, it is amazing. Plz cont soon 👏

Thankooo...don't cry!! have to work on pillowtalk!!😳

Originally posted by: JCluvs srk

wow tat was a very nice surprise...looking forward to the next part...wich sadly is the last part 😕 😭

Cheers JC!!..yes last part!!😳

Originally posted by: Rock_Star

awwwwwww so cute they have a daughter and poor shiv didn't knew about this all these years....awesome part 👏 👏

cheers Star!!...😳where ur hritik sigg? i look forward to see them😕

Originally posted by: ash9

hw many more parts left???
😃
no twins??? 😕
better luck nxt time ha??? 😉

one more...dame forget to add conjointed banana!!😆

Originally posted by: shivgauri

i don't get it 😕 !!!now she is blaming him for leaving her???but wht was he to do😕 ???but great part Kat!!!u have been leaping through out the fanfic 😉 !!!!hope this was the final leap!!1

Gauri has lost it??...final leap no coma!! and last part!!😳

Originally posted by: hardkaur

bhabs what did u eat when u wrote this serious hardcore...dame!! 😆 😆 😆 ....

last part?? come on!! we need to talk 😕

jaz!! not your brothers cookin🤢....😆

Originally posted by: prab_rockinn

i missed out on the two most beautiful parts so far.....how cud i.....
👏
absolutely MINDBLOWIN!!!!!!!!
and panji tussi mainu rula rahe ho.... 😭 😭
so much pain,bitterness and beyond that such deep intensified love 😳 ...... how do u do it.....

wow shanti is in it..... so cute......

ok how did u miss the 2 parts?? hey hey??😕..is'nt pain, bitterness LOVE!!😳

do what? just pen it how it is plus you really have to know love!😉

Originally posted by: Jenna Dutt

😭, why is Gauri so adamant about not forgiving him and how cud she keep his child away from him 😕 😕 😕

JD my rock!! 😳all will be revealled!! in final long part!!😕

OK guys next update on Monday!! have to give you Fanna this week!! 😆snowed at work and not had chance Sorry!! 😳...

Love ya! Kat

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: hardkaur

bhabs what did u eat when u wrote this serious hardcore...dame!! 😆 😆 😆 ....

last part?? come on!! we need to talk 😕

Jaz na? So you're my Billo Rani's what's it called... nanand?😕😆 *ahem* I hear she hasn't told you about the magic of bananas... 😳

And the "last part" bit, yeah "talk" is right... and in depth at that.

Billiye... this last part... *standing ovation*👏👏 It was so beautifully layered with emotions... and this next one is for sure gonna rip my heart out...

Cheers,

dc

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