Short FF: 'MASK'..Last Part: PG1 18/06 - Page 31

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ash9

love the last part
gr8 ending.....
very emotional part 😊

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Thank you!🤗

Originally posted by: prab_rockinn

BRILLIANT work!!!!!!!!
i enjoyed readin every bit of this ff........
thanx a tonne billo panji!!!!!!!

the end was so beautiful....... finally their sorrows away and happiness all along their way!!!!!
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will miss it dearly!!!!!!!

Thank you Ba!!😳🤗....

Originally posted by: crystalclear

excellent. i love it as always kat. i have to say i just loved this one. the ending was so nice. 😳

maria thank you 🤗

Originally posted by: Rock_Star

excellent work 👏 👏
beautiful ending...this is my second fav fanfic written by you

Star thank you 🤗 second fav i wrote ...wow *blushing*

Originally posted by: Raihena

wow, kat....beautiful ending...im so sad that its all rapped up now
finally they ended up a happy family
well done 👏 👏
im gonna miss this one too
xxxxx

Rai Thank you!🤗...will it was short n sweet wouldn't you say!😳

JD my rock as always! 🤗

Originally posted by: JCluvs srk

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the perfect ending.....simply perfect.....man i cant believe this fic is over already....i'm gonna miss it.

JC aweee...what a perfect compliment! *blushing*...thank you!🤗

Originally posted by: Iqbaladdict

mar gayay yarra, what a brilliant ending, u r a pure romantic I tell u, billo. kiss from me for that sweet sweet brain of urs 😆 😆 , I love everyword u put down here, going ahead and readig the other one now and know for sure will be thrilled, great piece of art, I proudly announce I love "MASK"

xoxo

Wow kisses from the best romantic writer we have in the forum..."WOW!"..brain still has alot to learn and i hope you and the other writers help me with this writing bug i have!! 😳....thank you!🤗

Originally posted by: desi chic

My Billo Rani,
So hence ends the barrier, and unveils the truth behind the "MASK"? I say, brilliant. All your peices have a unique flair, and this one I shall cherish as one with great passion and emotive capacity. Di, this one was truly very very beautiful in the way you brought out the emotions and all... Cheers to you laday... *blow kiss*
Keep me addicted mishriye~

Cheers,
dc

WOW more puppa 😆😆...DC have said this so many times if i never read your FF, abhita and lardoo i would not have got the courage to write... so *kisses back at ya*... i did say it was intense piece from me! as for the unique flair well i hope i have time to leash my creations ........thank you!🤗

Originally posted by: gujibabe

a very nice ending kat!!!
love this ff, along with all your other ones!!!
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........thank you!🤗...for taking the time to read them!😳

Originally posted by: sum2005

kat,

for once i thaught i am going to die when u wrote shiv is leaving for ever.....relly kat mini cliffhanger....its ok yaar ending is nice....shanthi is cute and smart .

nice ff kat loved it but sad it was over. meet u in pillow talk shiv with obssessed ex-girl friend.....will he survive with her..... 😳 😳 😳

Sorry sum i wanted you all to read it as if it was the last time they saw eachother...*evil*... but i think it worked will as Gauri need to discover on her own what Shiv actually meant to her and Shanti...which is why he didn't want to press the issue any further...but when she said "shanti....Daddy is staying...he can never eat alone!".... hit home!! i hope!....thank you🤗

Well i learnt alot from I hate u but i love you ff and shades and i think as a experimental writer i am improving...see i am trying different styles as i still finding my feet so to speak. I hope you all enjoyed this short tale!! thanks to the boss gifting me am Afrian Mask in the office😆...he told me "it bring good luck!" ...so lets see!😆😆....

Thank you all silent reader for taking the time to read this short Fan Fiction Mask ...written by catwoman!😳

Love Kat

Edited by Catwoman - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
perfect endin the whole ff in one page realy short but perfect
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet @s candy

perfect endin the whole ff in one page realy short but perfect

Aweee thank you so much!!😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
haila.. its finished...

mindblowing.. awww. shanti my little cutie pie, soo cute, she tells shiv
that
are you staying, awww.. you could feel the pain of gauri through shanti's
words..!!

brilliant dii.. it was a special ending.. made my eyes water but still i
smiled at
the very end!!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes

haila.. its finished...

mindblowing.. awww. shanti my little cutie pie, soo cute, she tells shiv
that
are you staying, awww.. you could feel the pain of gauri through shanti's
words..!!

brilliant dii.. it was a special ending.. made my eyes water but still i
smiled at
the very end!!
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Aweee... thank you so much ...not bad for someone still getting the hang of writting... "Mask" for me was my best piece i fell!! the emotions where raw and hard hitting... still i have alot to learn!! will get there! i hope!😛

kat😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
That was brilliant... read about an hour ago but had to give myself some time to think of what to say as it left me completely in awe... just like you said it was pretty intense but you wrote it so beautifully tht I could totally feel why Gauri would not want to be with Shiv and then the way you depicted Shiv and Shanti together and the bear story...totally touched my heart... but the best part had to be...when Gauri says... "He can't eat alone!" ... Loved how everything just connected at the end... thank you so much for sending me the link to the fic or else I would have missed out on such great piece of writing... 🤗 ... Keep it up 😃👏👏
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Saregama_fan

That was brilliant... read about an hour ago but had to give myself some time to think of what to say as it left me completely in awe... just like you said it was pretty intense but you wrote it so beautifully tht I could totally feel why Gauri would not want to be with Shiv and then the way you depicted Shiv and Shanti together and the bear story...totally touched my heart... but the best part had to be...when Gauri says... "He can't eat alone!" ... Loved how everything just connected at the end... thank you so much for sending me the link to the fic or else I would have missed out on such great piece of writing... 🤗 ... Keep it up 😃👏👏

***RUBBING EYES***

Omg "The Princess" read the story!.... 😕

****FAINT*****

OK let me read wot u wrote again???... Awe ... Ok first of cheers for finding the time to read my tale...as i now your a busy with banqueets and attending to your public with Will...😉

it was a complete different sytle of writing from me.. as my readers know i try to cater to the age groups on the forum.. well i try my best...😳....hence shooting of ff's....😆

Again your royal highness cheers... *Humble Bow*

Kat😳

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Catwoman

***RUBBING EYES***

Omg "The Princess" read the story!.... 😕

****FAINT*****

OK let me read wot u wrote again???... Awe ... Ok first of cheers for finding the time to read my tale...as i now your a busy with banqueets and attending to your public with Will...😉

it was a complete different sytle of writing from me.. as my readers know i try to cater to the age groups on the forum.. well i try my best...😳....hence shooting of ff's....😆

Again your royal highness cheers... *Humble Bow*

Kat😳

Kitty kat you give me too much credit... calling me Princess... it is not my fault the Prince is after me... 😳... as for your story it was such a delight to read really... you really brought out the correct emotions in the story ...and if this was a new style of writing for you... I suggest you make a regular style of writing soon...b/c it was great... 😊 ...

BTW I forgot to mention when I am queen ... you are going to be getting lots of royal requests for more such great works... so u better stay ready 😳😳

Edited by Saregama_fan - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Saregama_fan

Kitty kat you give me too much credit... calling me Princess... it is not my fault the Prince is after me... 😳... as for your story it was such a delight to read really... you really brought out the correct emotions in the story ...and if this was a new style of writing for you... I suggest you make a regular style of writing soon...b/c it was great... 😊 ...

BTW I forgot to mention when I am queen ... you are going to be getting lots of royal requests for more such great works... so u better stay ready 😳😳

Yes maam! what ever you say but please do not forget your loyal subjects...😕

Well members are requesting another but long story so im giving them "insomina" ...will be intense too... weel not this much!😆

Maam we have news that the UK is currently gripped with Sukhsinda's new tunes!!

shinda - chardi kala

http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=eNnzfXigylo

wangaa shankaa ke

http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=X6_zBuuRAG4

enjoy... not sure if your a punjabi tune fan? but this is the crazy here at the moment...😉

Kat😳

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