Gharonda... - Page 2

Originally posted by: Catwoman

Wow!! i am speechless!!

Awww, thank you Kattie!!! You leave me speechless now!! 😳

Originally posted by: desi chic

Pardon me, but I cannot seem to come up with words to express my appreciation of your wonderful works! - Good Lord, bless my soul, you've run out of words...??!!!? You are being very kind. I dont derserve that darling... and I am really really humbled that you think so highly of me for penning lines jus express emotions as random lines...

My dearest Di, thank you for finally obliging us with your magic... My dearest Neetz, thank you to you for always being so kind and appreciative and encouraging and its always a pleasure to share my thoughts here... no matter how diverse or at times silly they (my thoughts) seem!

Very beautifully captured, and apt in regards to the current track of KAA. I especially liked the last stanza about losing one's "wajood"... Very poignant.👏👏

Let you on a lil secret here, the last stanza, was what I wrote first and then the rest of it flowed after... and it was done by the time I made my tea...! The last stanza , is my favourite too, its closest to my heart!

Flawless as always... Please do write more often... I am a dear fan! - Merci! I will always try! You do know I write continuously , but its jus that I dont find stuff I write apt now a days fo SG and hence may seem inappropriate to share on this section... will try to write more.. if I can ...😊 Bless me, I have a fan.. haila... !! I am feeling sooo... oh well.. all giggles... a fan.. meri apni pankhi!! *mwwwuaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah*

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: Anisha7

Sorry didn't reply earlier..but that was fantastic! 👏😃

Awwww, Anisha, you dont have to be sorry, cmaawwwn!!! Its so nice of you that you read it and enjoyed it and actually replied ...Thank you sooooooo much! Means much!

Originally posted by: fida-cute

awesome post 👏 song really suites shiv n gauri

Thank you Zainab! So happy you liked it! Well it ain't a song, it well random thughts I had penned , which I found for SG. Gaana mere bas ki baat nahin hai! ...!!

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes

haila. meri dii..

left speechless, very apt for the current situation..!!

too good, you seem to come up with such beautiful lines all the time, wow!!

i dont really have words to tell you what the poem means to me..!

😭

👏

Aaakriti , my dear lil sis, its been so long....

So glad you liked it my dearest ....

I dont know abt all the time part , but I jus write when I feel it very strong! Bas dil se...

Its so humbling to know you could relate to it ... and appreciate it! THanks you and *bowz humbly to applause*

Originally posted by: sareeta

Haath chute hai ...
Aaj apnon se..

Bhikarne laga hai
Gharonda apna..

Khwaab toot ke
Behne lage hai..
Aason mein apne..

Jahan kabhi payaa tha..
Khud ko...
Wahin khoya hai
Aaj wajood apna...

-Sareeta

- Jus some random lines for Shiv and Gauri on their divorce and their state of mind.

The lines jus flowed into my mind...impromptu while at work , and thought the lines were apt for Gauri and Shiv...

Pardon any incorrect usage of hindi words and kindly let me know... so that I may correct them..😊

Originally posted by: smartc

Wow Sareeta.. After such a long time, we finally had a taste of your wonderful writings.. Thank you soooo much Sana.... I should admit , I have been writing , but yeah after a long time, I felt what I had penned could be related to SG as well and thatz why posted it here on KAA! 😊This poem.. As much as it's heartwrenching and sad, it is a bitter reality of not only what's happening to Shiv-Gauri's relationship but to all relationships at the brink of break-ups at this very moment..Very true... As I said, I hadnt written this with SG in mind, the lines jus flowed into my head and I penned them and later realized that it would be apt for them too and posted it! What people keep on forgetting is that "jahan kabhi khud ku paya tha unho ne, aaj wahi cheez un ke liye is kader bai mayeeni (without meanings) ho gayee hai kai ko usse bachana tu door ki baat, uska hissa banna bhi unhe gawara nahi..." (The very relationship which helped you find your identity once has now become so meaningless for u that u don't yearn to save it any longer.. Rather, u don't even want to be a part of it anymore..) Couldnt agree more with ya... You know it really humbles me, that what I had origianlly intended has been so well perceived by one and all who read it and you my dearest friend have read so much into it! I couldnt be more happier , that my true feel for what I had written has indeed be noticed!

Gharonda... One word.. But an entire universe has been summed up inside it.. A universe of someone's trust, love, aspirations and companionship.. A universe where one finds peace. and satisfaction.. A universe that is home.. Takes ages to build a gharonda but takes no time to break one.. Yep, agree , and to tell you the truth, I love the word Gharonda... it always gives me a sense of completeness when you think of home...

Wonderful job Sareeta.. U forced me to even think for a bit after such a long day at work.. Thanks for cheering me up dammit! Gives me faith that not all hope is lost after all.. 😳 Thank you Madamme! Such a sad poem , cheered you up?! Well... Bless my soul... thank you for the kind words!!!

xoxo, Sana~