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Posted: 18 years ago
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shiv fainted 😆 😆 😆no doubt he got so excited 😉 awesome update 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😆 shiv got fainting spells!!!! great part!!!by the way was shiv in love with her be4 marriage itself and thts y he made shashank run away???and another doubt, have they told each other tht they love each other???pls continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow, what a sweet update, the b'day surprise and then the fainting spell... 😆
keep it coming girl.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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tahnk u all so much... a msg to all my silent readers..pls reply atleast once so that i can know how many of u r reading...just once...pls do reply..to know what u think abt my ff....pls guys...


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Posted: 18 years ago
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yaar nandu.....this is the first ff where i read male lead faints when he learns he is going to become a dad.....and shiv such a strong one fainted....i loved the way u make him faint.....yaar nandu u should have made shiv present with gauri in delivery room so that doctors would have attended him instead of gauri 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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shiv!!fainted??lol...tht was sooo shweett...amazing work yaar...i luv shiv 😃he is the shweeest hubby ever...lol...update soon plz
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks for ur comments....well i must say that i'm not satisfied with my readers....atleast a thank you....is it so hard to reply....but i wont stop writing....but if gets worse i'll have to stop....i hope i dont have to as i enjoy writing for you...



CHAPTER SIX

recap: gauri told nikhila abt the incident when shiv fainted when he came to know that gauri was pregnant......shiv came to visit gauri and knew that she had not eaten anything till now...he goes in search of nikhila....


" yeh shiv bhi na...poori baat nahi sune..usse pehle hi chale gaye....aapke papa hamesha aise hi hain.." she looked at her daughter..." poori baat nahi sunthe uske pehle hi gussa ho jaathe hain ya chale jaathe hain...lekhin bahut khayaal rakthe the mere...bahut..aur aapki bhi....woh chahthe the ki unhe ladka ho...par kismat mein kuch aur hi likha hai...." and she remembered the day when she told shiv that it was a girl..."

*FLASHBACK*

this one is for you of what all happened till gauri was eight months pregnant....
gauri's pregnancy was informed in their house...all were very happy...they celebrated it by going for dinner with the whole family....shiv was very happy...he made sure that gauri was always happy...gave her medicines in time...even if she forgot he would not....he tried taking her out for dinner and drive but he couldnt as gauri had frequent vomiting and fainted frequntly......he did not how to help her when she was vomiting....every time she does that he feels very bad for her....whenever he goes with her for check up the first thing he would ask is to give some medicine to stop this vomiting....but got disappointed when the dr. said that it could not be avoided....gauri did not eat well for abt the first 3 months as the taste on her tongue was not gud....she often got scoldings from shiv for not eating well...at five months gauri's stomach started cuming out...shiv teased her by walking like how she walks pushing her stomach a bit in the front..it was like in the heaven for gauri..everyone took very gud care of her..and eapecially shiv....he took spl care of her...suddenly he will cum home from office and check if she had her fud and then leave...gauri was so happy those days...she could never forget them.......

now gauri's flashback....
gauri's stomach was very big now..she was eight months...she was trying to take the earring that had fallen under the table with her leg...but she couldnt reach it..and still she was trying hard to take it...just then shiv came inside who had gone shopping to buy new clothes for gauri, loose ones bcos her dress wont fit her as her stomach was very big..he saw her putting the leg under the table..." gauri?? kya kar rahi ho???" " shiv meri woh earrings ghir gayi isliye usse lene ki koshish kar rahi hoon.." " usse apne haathon se le lo na?? paav se kyun koshish kar rahi ho??" " shiv, kya aapko lagtha hai ki mein iss haalat mein apne haathon se le sakthi hoon.." " ohh..sorry....wait..i'll take it.." be bend down the table took the earrings and while getting up he hit his head hard on the table.." ouch..." " shiv?? sambaalke...chot toh nahi lagi na??" he got up rubbing his head..." no...its....ok..i'mmmmm....ok...." " par mujhe toh aisa nahi lagtha...chaliye, yahaan baitiye..." she makes him sit on the bed and rubs his head very well .." shiv aap na bilkul bachchon ki tharah hain..aap dek kar utt nahi sakthe kya??" he did not reply but was enjoying the way gauri rubbed his head...it was so soothing...." abh teek ho gaya..." she had finished and he felt much relieved..." ouch..ahhhh...." " kya hua gauri??" gauri kept her hand on her stomach and slowly sat on the bed...shiv helped her to sit..." kya hua gauri????" " shiv!!!! its kicking..." " what??" " our baby shiv..its kicking..mein mehsoos kar sakthi hoon...apna haath deejiye.." she took his hand and kept his hand on her tummy..." kahaan gauri?? i cant feel it..oh man...abh hua...hey its actually kicking..naughty boy...." " boy shiv????" " haan, mujhe toh ladka hi chahiye aur zaroor ladka hi hoga..." " shiv???? mein aapse kuch kehna bhool gayi.." " kya?? " " kal subah mein check up ke liye gayi thi shyla chachi ke saat..." " toh?? kya kaha dr. ne..everything is alright na??" " haan..par scanning reports mein likha tha ki bachchi ladki hai..." " toh kya hua..??" shiv acted normal..." aapko toh ladka chahiye tha.." " hey, aisa nahi...ladki ho rahi hai, i'm very happy...ladka hua hota na, toh i would have been much more happy....lekhin she will be daddy's girl.." " dekhthe hain..ki woh mummy's girl hai ya daddy's girl???" just then nikhila was calling gauri.." gauri beta zaraa neeche aao na.." " ji badi ma, abhi aayi...shiv, mein abhi aayi.." she got up from the bed with gr8 difficulty.." are yeh kya..mom tumhe neeche kyun bula rahen hain??" " kuch kaam hogi shiv, mein abhi aayi..." " kaam?? aisi haalat mein?? rukho gauri..tum neeche nahi jaoge..mein poochtha hoon ki baat kya hai??" " lekhin shiv..." " chup..maine keh diya na??" he went downstairs..." mom?? aapne gauri ko kyun balaaya.." " are shiv, khaana khaane ke liye.." " khaana?? usse aap upar toh bej sakthi thi..aisi haalat mein usse neeche kyun bula rahi hain???" " shiv, tum nahi jaanthe..aat maheene ho gaye..usse abh kuch kaam karna hai, tabhi usse normal delivery hogi nahi toh operationg karna padega..." " nahi nahi aisa kuch nahi hoga..aap gauri ke khaana mujhe deejiye..i'll take it.." " lekhin shiv.." " mom, please..usse bhook lag rahi hogi, aur meri bachche ko bhi..." nikhila knew that it was no use argueing with him..she kept gauri's food on the tray and shiv took it upstairs..gauri was not there in the room ..he searched her in the washroom but she was not there..he searched in the balcony and found her there looking down the garden.." gauri?? yahaan kya kar rahi ho??" " dekh rahi hoon shiv..." " kisse???" " humaari beti ko..?" " what?? are you out of your mind??" " wahaan dkhiye na shiv.." she points at the lawn..." woh rahi humaari beti...kehl rahi hai humaare saat.." " gauri?? are u ok???" " abh dekhiye na, woh college mein pad rahi hai aur aapse pocket money maang rahi hai..." " gauri??? sriously, tumhe kuch ho gaya hai.." " shiv??? main sapna dekh rahi hoon shiv, joh jald hi haqeeqat ban jaayegi...itni khoobsoorat sapna joh humaare zindagi ko kushi se bhar dega.." " woh sab teek hai, pehle khaana kaathein hain..chalo.."


*FLASHBACK*

" gauri????" " badi ma???" " tumne shiv se yeh kyun kahaa ki maine tumhaare liye khaane ke kuch bhi nahi diya..woh abh mujhpar chilla raha hai..." " badi mein toh kehne hi waali thi ki aapne abhi abhi mujhe juice diya tham lekhin woh uske pehle hi aapke paas aa gaye..." " shiv entered the room.." kya hua mom?? what, aapne abhi tak usse khaana nahi diya???" " shiv please..badi ma mujhe abhi hi juice di thi, aur maine hi kahaa tha ki main baad mein khaa loongi.." " mom, she has no sense...agar woh keh rahi thi usse nahi chaiye thi, aapko toh usse force karke dena chahiye tha..." knock knock...someone knocked the door...it was shashank..." are shashank tum???" shiv and shashank hugged each other...another lady also came in with shashank....ooppsss

i forgot to tell u...well gauri informed shiv that shashank was getting married....remember, after the party....shiv was very angry but gauri somehow comvinced him and they went for shashank's marriage..he was very happy...his wife's name is sanjana....shashank talked to shiv and told him to tell the reason soon to gauri as if doesnt tell that he will miss many things in life..shiv agreed but never told her..why??? he doesnt know himself....

shiv's cell rang...he excused himself and went outside..nikhila also went outside to bring the food from the car..." toh gauri kaisi ho tum???" teek hoon shashank...waise tum donon yahaan kya kar rahe ho??" " woh actually sanjana is conceived..so uske check up ke liye..." " oh wow congrats.." " thanks...waise shiv ne tumse woh baat keh diya kya???" " kaunsi baat" " woh humaari shaadi kyun rukh gayi thi..." " nahi toh..meine bahut koshish ki lekhin woh kehne ke liye thayyar nahi the..patha nahi..." " what ??? uss idiot ne abhi tak tumse nahi kahaa...abhi khabar letha hoon...and he went to meet shiv outside leaving sanjana and gauri...

PS- shashank and sanjana's marriage was love marriage....so she knows everything............


hope u liked it ..was the update small??? if yes..sorry .....i'm busy...thats why......well post in ur comments...plsssssssssssssss

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Edited by nandini90 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: fida-cute

shiv fainted 😆 😆 😆no doubt he got so excited 😉 awesome update 👏

thank you so much....he was excited for sure..but i was not able to write his feelings properly...as i told u this is my first ff here.....thats why...

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Posted: 18 years ago
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thank you...keep posting ur replies...

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: shivgauri

😆 shiv got fainting spells!!!! great part!!!by the way was shiv in love with her be4 marriage itself and thts y he made shashank run away???and another doubt, have they told each other tht they love each other???pls continue soon

well u r doing a pretty well prediction...but right now i cant tell what had happened...shiv will reveal it himsel..so wait..and keep reading..and they havnt told each other that they love but in one of my updates i had written that gauri loves shiv...isnt it..?? well keep posting ur views...

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