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Posted: 18 years ago
wad a great update simply brillant 👏 👏 , shiv is so so so sweet😛 make a long update next time ok plzzzzzzzzzzzz 😭 😭 and plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do cont soon i will be waiting 😃 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
sorry for the delay...so much to study......well here's my next update...silent readers i'm still watching.....


Chapter nine

recap: shiv decides to tell gauri everything..he is decorating the bedroom wiht his childhood stuffs...


" abh mein isse lagaoon ya nahi.....???" he thought holding the picture of a baby.." lagao na bhayya...." shiv turned with surprise..it was vivaan.." vivaan?? tum yahaa kya kar rahe ho???? mandir nahi gaye kya????" " nahi bhayya, woh kya hai ki mujhe kisise milne jaana tha, toh mein wahaan chala gaya..aur mera kaam khatam ho gayi thi toh mein yahaan aa gaya...." " achcha!!!!" " waise bhayya, aap yahaan kya kar rahen hain??" " woh mein gauri aur shaanti ke liye humaare kamre ko decorate kar raha tha..." " shaanti????" " haan meri beti ki naam hai...lekhin tum usse cuckoo bhi keh sakthe ho...." " nahi nahi shaanti is better..." shiv looked at him and " kyun? cuckoo mein kya kharaabi hai??" " kuch nahi, just that its very odd...woh sab chodiye..mein aapka madad kartha hoon kamre ko decorate karne ke liye.." and he moves forwrd...he helps shiv take some pics and when he entered the room..." oh my god..bhayya, yeh aapne kya karke rakha hai????" " kyun?? bura hai kya??" " bura nahi, lekhin neat nahi hai...but dont worry abhi teek kara detha hoon..tab tak aap yeh thasveeron ko laga deejiye..." " ok..." they started on their work and after abotu ten minutes completed everything...." finished...thank god..thanks vivaan.." " its ok shiv bhayya..." just then they heard sound of the cars arriving.." lagta hai woh log aa gaye..." vivaan and shiv leave the room and vivaan runs downstairs while shiv simply walks slowly...he sees that dadi and nikhila entered the house and maya, shyla and gauri were about to enter..." ek minute ruko gauri..." b4 gauri kept her leg inside shiv spoke aloud.....gauri thought" lagta hai shiv gusse mein hain..kam se kam mujhe toh unhe phone karke kehna chahiye tha ki meri discharge ho gayi hai..." she looked at him while he came near them...



" gauri tum andar nahi aogi.." nikhila asked him why" kyunki, abhi tak kisi ne tumaari aur shaanti ka aarti nahi liya hai...." gauri and the others let out a sigh.." bas itni si baat...tumne toh hum sabko dara hi diya.." " aur nahi toh kya??dadi aap bhi??? aap kaise bhool sakti hain??" " maaf kar do na iss boodi dadi ko!!" " teek teek hai, jaldi se lekar aayiye..." " abhi lekar aati hoon.." saying this maya went inside to take aarti....she came bak and they took their aarti ...." shiv, tum gauri ko apne kamre mein lekar jao...." he nodded hi shead and took her upsatirs..b4 reaching the bedroom..." gauri ek minute.." " abh kya hua shiv???" " apne aanken bandh karo.." " aankhein?? lekhin kyun???" " sawaal math poocho..bas mein keh raha hoon na.." " teek hai teek hai..." she closed her eyes and he escorted her to the room, opened the door and took her inside.." abh apne aankh kholo.." she opened her eyes slowly and soon her eyes were wide open and her mouth was open wide...." shiv?????" she looked around the room..it was so much different..a small cradle on the side where gauri slept...wallpapers of pink color..many photos were hanging on the wall...she put the baby in the cradle and went to take a closer look at the photos..." shiv..bahut sundar hai.....its so beautiful...lekhin appko yeh sab karna ki kya zaroorat thi??" " are, mein apne biwi aur beti ke liye nahi karoonaga, toh aur kisliye karoonga??" " wow...this baby is so cute..." she touched the photo of the baby's pic that hung in the centre of the wall...." bahut khoobsoorat hai...." she kissed that baby..." achcha...toh sirf thasveer ko kiss karoge??? uss thasveer mein joh bachcha hai, usse nahi....." he looked at her closely..." lekhin shiv, yeh bachcha hai kahaan????" " yahaan...." he opened his arms to her....gauri smiled ...she went near him, kissed his cheek and hugged him..........

" hem hem......sorry to interupt.." both shiv and gauri turned to see palak..." are palak tum????" " woh shiv bayya, mom aapko neeche bula rahi hain..." " teek hai tum chalo, mein abhi aatha hoon...." palak smiled and went downstairs....shiv looked at gauri who was now going to feed shaanti..." usse abh kahoon, ya raat ko!!!! nahi raat hi teek hoga...." he went downstairs.......

" kya baat hai mom???" " shiv, woh gauri ki khaana thayyar hai, pls isse upar lekar jao na...." " of course..." he took the tray of food from nikhila and went upstairs...he found her feeding the baby....she had covered the baby's face with a towel....he kept the tray on the bed near her...took a spoon, took some food in it and took it to her mouth...." iski kya zaroorat hai??? mein baad mein khaa loongi..." " chup...." and he fed her ...she looked at him all time smiling....

*FLASHBACK*

gauri is having mehendi on her hand....she is sitting on the sofa..shiv cums inside with his briefcase..." gauri,....mujhe juice lao na, ..." and he was proceeding towards the stairs......" lekhin shiv, mein nahi kar sakti..." she told him turning her head..." what??? nahi la sakti???" he went near her saw her hands...." oh, mehendi.....its ok...." he went to his room. changed and came downstairs....he saw gauri struggling with the remote to change the channel....he smiled and went to her...took the remote..." kaunsa channel chaahiye..." " Star Plus........abh karam apnaa apnaa..hone wala hai..." " what???? woh serial....nahi gauri....its going to spoil you.......meine suna ki its not so gud.....ok???" " ok..." but her face bcame dull.....
nikhila just then came there with some bowl in her hand..." shiv...thank god tum yahaan ho...zaraa yeh soup gauri ko do na..." "ok mom..." " thanks a lot..mujhe kuch kaam hai..." he fed her the soup.....vivaan came there running to them ......and laughed hard...he then saw the mehendi on her hand....and then laughed much more.....shiv and gauri did not understand....he then burst out..." bhabhi aap bhi..." "vivaan, abh kya ho gaya hai?? tum itne has kyun rahe ho?? aur gauri ne kya kiya...??" " baayi, yeh bhabhi ke haat mein mehendi nahi, pudina ki chutney .....palak keh rahi thi ki mehendi lagane waali hai, toh meine isse banaakar exchange kiya tha....aur abhi abhi palak se bhi kehkar aa raha hoon..aur yahaan bhabhi bhi.......oh my god..." he lughed again.." kya?? pudina???" gauri smelled her hand and he was right...how did she not notice...shiv spoke up.." badmaash...abhi dikaatha hoon..." he ran behind vivaan who was now running about in the house...gauri simply smiled looking at them........

*FLASHBACK*

" kya hua??? kahaan kho gayi???" " nahi kuch nahi....bas aise hi....waise shiv, aapko office nahi jaana kya??" " what office???? gauri aaj tum aur shaanti ghar aaye hain aur mein tum donon ko chodkar kaise jaa saktha hoon...." "lekhin shiv, mein toh bilkul teek hoon..." " wait..mein office nahi jaane waala...so no need to tell me teek hai??" gauri thought it was a waste to argue with him.....he excused himself and took bak the tray downstairs...." shiv beta, woh mahen ki phone aayi thi..tumhe office bula rahe the....kuch zaroori kaam hai..aur tumaari zaroorat hai.." " what mom..aaj gauri aur meri beti ghar aaye hain aur aap mujhe office bej rahe ho??" " toh kya hua..hum sab yahaan hai na....tu chinta kyun kar raha hai??" "lekhin mom.." "please shiv...mere liye.." " ok ok..aap se toh mein srgue bhi nahi kar sakta ......" " thank u so much..." and she left....but shiv was upset..he wanted to stay with gauri....but he had no other option..he told gauri and went to office......


sorry guys for the short update, but i'm so tired...i promise a big chapter next time and i think it will take time...i'm havinf my xams now..so pls bare with me..please 😳 😳 .....i'm really very sorry....but pls do post in ur comments.....
LUV NANDINI



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Posted: 18 years ago
Oh Nandu, what a sweet update, and yes it was too short, but looking forward to a longer one next time. All the best for your exams.
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Posted: 18 years ago
nice update nandu honey......the mehandhi joke was nice .......good idea we can try on someone. 😉 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
very cute flashback....i hope shiv tells gauri soon about the shashank thing...excellent part 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
sooooo cute! poor shiv! continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part!!!Just waiting for Shiv to confess....i hope she is happy with it!!!She better be 😡 He loves her so much😳!!! pls continue soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
mehendi thing was 😆 😆 😆 even karam apna apna going 2 spoil gauri was 😆 😆 hope shiv telss soon 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
wonderful story soo far.. i loved your raaz, very realistic, wished it was t,
simple he real raaz, i loved how you brought shaanti into the story........!!
fantastic, please do continue!!

good luck for your exams!~!

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