hello everyone....i am starting a new ff kabhi kabhi for gauri and shiv(iqbal of course)...hope u all like it....its my first ff on KAA forum......i'm only a beginner so pls forgive my mistakes if any.....and do comment on my ff.........so here goes.........
CHAPTER ONE
in the city of mumbai there lived a girl(GAURI CHATTERJEE) sweet and innocent who loved her father(ALOK) and sister(KAYA) a lot. she loves them more than anything even more than her mother who passed away when she was 9 and when her little sister was 6.her father lived a very hard life to grow these 2 children. but he was raised by his dear friend Mahen who was a a very big businessman. he saw both gauri and kaya as his own daughters. gauri leads a very busy life. she teaches classical and cinematic dance for children in a very known institute of dance. she was proud to work there. and her sister had the dream of becoming a doctor and was studying medicine final year. alok was retired. the family fully depended on gauri's salary. but Mahen helped them a lot.
mahen had arranged gauri's marriage with Shashank an employee in his company. even the marriage date was fixed. gauri was very happy and alok was thankful to mahen. but everything shattered when shashank ran away from the mandap without telling anyone. gauri was heart broken. alok was shattered. mahen apologised to alok as it was all his fault this happened. but nuthing could b done. and just then nikhila announced that this marriage will be done. what happend if the groom had ran away. she has a new groom and he will marry gauri. mahen and alok looked at Nikhila(mahen's wife) with a very confused look. mahen asked her what was she saying and she said that the groom is ready. and from behind nikhila comes out SHIV KAPOOR(mahen's son) dressed as a groom. mahen asked what was going on for which nikhila replied that bcos of them a girl's marriage was going to break and she did not want that to happen and so to make it correct she is going to bring gauri to her own house not as bahu. mahen agreed to that but alok said what was the need for that. but mahen convinced him and he agreed.
gauri was informed that the groom was back by kaya. gauri looked up at her with a smile all over her face. kaya said" haan didi, aapki shaadi zaroor hogi, dulha toh mil gaya." gauri was so happy that shashank had come back. and then she wiped her tears and made her make up. and was ready to be taken downstairs.
down at the mandap shiv stood with anger all over his face which clearly showed that he was not happy with thi marriage. but no one noticed it. gauri was brought down and was taken around shiv. she slowly moved the leaves she was holding down and opened her eyes and was shocked to see shiv..she whispered to herself"SHIV????"
with a confused look she turned towards her father who looked at her smiling. and with a few lines he explained what happened. he siad" mein khush hoon gauri ki tumhe shashank se bhi ek achcha pati milne waala hai aur tum ek aisi ghar mein jaa rahi ho jahaan log sirf tumse pyaar karthein hain aur kuch bhi nahi." gauri felt her father's feelings. she thought that he was very happy about this marriage and also thought of shiv's courage to marry her at this moment. with tears running down her cheeks she looked at kaya. and kaya spoke up" didi, mein jaanti hoon ki yeh aapke liye bahut badi shock hei, par abh mujhe lagta hai ki baghwaan ne shaayad aapke liye yahi lika hai.. shaayad aap iss ghar mein itni pyaar aur khushi paayengi ki aap bagwaan ko shukriyaada karenge jiske wajaah se aaj yeh shaadi hone waali hai. " gsuri was helpless. no one thought of her pain. she thought for a moment and decided." shaayad kaya teek keh rahi hai. shaayad yahi meri kismat mein likhi hai, shiv se shaadi karna. kya patha, hum donon ki yeh rishta safal ho jaayegi. apne liye toh nahi, lekhin baba aur kaya ke liye hi sahi, mein unke khushi ke liye yeh shaadi karthi hoon"she thought and looked towards shiv who was standing expressionless. she thought that may be it is a very big shock to him too and thats why he is standing like this. without wasting a sec she put the garland around his neck and shiv put the garland on her neck. all the marriage things were going on like the saat pheri, the mangal sootr, the kumkum and other stuffs.
gauri and shiv are going in the car to shiv's house. gauri was looking out through her window and shiv through his. gauri was thinking: yeh maine kya kar diya hai. meine shiv se shaadi kar li apne baba aur kaya ke liye lekhin kabhi shiv se nahi poocha ki usse yeh shaadi pasand hai ya nahi. kya patha woh bade papa aur badi ma ke force karne ke wajaah se mujhse shaadi kiya ho??? abh kya faayda?? mujhe unse shaadi ke pehle poochna chahiye tha. khair joh bhi meri kismat mein likha hai wahi hoga.
and then she looked at her feet..
gauri was given a grand entry into the kapoor house. everyone showed her love and affection. she was introduced to all their relatives who were called suddenly for this marriage and who lived close by. some of them were not intersted and some of them were happy for gauri. dadi, nikhila, palak, shyla, maya; everone made sure that gauri felt comfortable. and she was comfortable but unhappy. and then she was taken upstairs by nikhila and shyla to shiv's bedroom which was very well decorated. the bed was full of rose petals and loads of flowers were hanging round the bed. gauri did not know what to do. they made her sit on the bed. and when nikhila was about to leave gauri got hold of her wrist. she said" badi maa, mujhe darr lag raha hai" nikhila laughed and " darr lag raha??? kis baat ke liye???? shiv se darr??? come on gauri, abh woh tumaara pati hai.. aur suhaag raat ke samay aisa darr aata hai lekhin chinta math karo. woh bahut achcha hai. bahut pyaar karega tujse..abhi toh shuruvaad hai. mein shiv ko samja doongi, teek hai??? abh mein chalthi hoon.." and she left a very tensed gauri behind her whose BP was increasing. every 10 secs she would look towards the door if he was cuming. her blood had bcome cold... she started shivering and suddenly she heard the door knob turn and looked at the door which was slowly opening....................
precap: shiv came near her. she could hear him breathing heavily. he slowly takes off her earings..he moves forward close to her ears and whispers with a husky voice which made goosebumps in her body" GAURI"........................................
well hope it was gud...pls tell me if it was gud and if i should continue or not.....
and i'll be updating it once in every 2 days........
pls do post in ur comments..
chapter 2 (page 2) : http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=600471&T PN=2
chapter 3 (page 4) : http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=600471&T PN=4
chapter 4 (page 5) : http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=600471&T PN=5
chapter 5 (page 6) : http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=600471&T PN=6
chapter 6 (page 7) : http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=600471&T PN=7
chapter 7 (page 9) : http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=600471&T PN=9
chapter 8 (page 13) : http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=600471&T PN=13
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