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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks for ur sweet and encouraging words.......sorry for the delay.....



CHAPTER EIGHT

recap: shashank tells shiv to tell gauri the truth.....we cum to know that shiv loved gauri since childhood.....shiv gives his daughter's name as cuckoo and gauri as shanthi....


shiv is sleeping on his bed.....he was very tired...but he had to go to the hospital to bring gauri home...it was her discharge..and what is he doing on the bed..bget ready..shiv opens his eyes slowly and looks at the watch..." OH NO.." it was 8.30 and gauri was getting discharged at 10..he got out of bed and went into the washroom..he looked into the mirror.he was looking dreadful..he washed his face.." kya karoon?? aaj mujhe usse kehna hi padega..kab kahoon?? aate hi?? nahi, she'll be tired..shaam ko?? nahi, sab log ek saat honge..haan..raat ko kehtha hoon..thats the right time..koi bhi nahi hoga humaare saat..thats it..abh shiv kapoor jaldi se thayyar ho jao. tumhe apni biwi aur beti ko ghar laana hai..cum on.." he brushed his teeth, took his bath changed his clothed..and hurried downstairs to find the house completely deserted..." Ramu kaka???" ramu kaka came from the kitchen.."haan shiv beta??" " ramu kaka, ghar mein koi bhi nahi hai?? kahaan hain sab??" " woh sab toh gauri beti aur bachchi ko ghar laane gaye hain??" " WHAT?????" " haan beta..aur woh bhi ek gante pehle hi chale gaye.." " chale gaye?? mujhse bataya thak nahi...aur kisi ne mujhe uttaya bhi nahi.." " shiv beta, nikhila ji aapko uttaane aaye the, lekhin aap bahut achche tharah se so rahe the, isliye woh chale gaye..." pk, fine...mein unn logon se baad mein baat kar loonga..abhi 9 baj gayi hai..and i'm the last to reach the hospital...patha nahi gauri kya sochegi..i hope she is not upset with me.." he goes out without having breakfast and went to the hospital driving fast...on his way...

" are,mujhe gauri aur cockoo ke liye kuch kareedna hai..mein khaali haat wahaan kaise jaa saktha hoon...and its only 9.15..aur gauri ki discharge toh dus bhaje hai....i'll buy sumthing for her.....he goes inside a jewellery shop...he buys 2 bangles and a ring...." abh mein usse yeh kangan doonga aur yeh ring mein usse tab doonga, jab mein usse apne dil ki baat aur sabhi sach ko usse kahoonga..." he smiles and pays the bill..." abh mein cuckoo ke liye kya khareedoonga?? woh toh itni choti hai...deinetly no ornaments...yes ....got it........" he goes into a dress shop and buys baby stuffs and small and tiny clothes..." yeh teek rahega...pls pack this..." he pays evrything.." oh no, 9.35....i should not be late...." he got inside his car and rode to the hospital..he walked to gauri's room with a very big smile..he opened the door to find no one..." are gauri kahaan hai?? aur baaki sab bhi kahaan chale gaye??" he sees a nurse passing by.." excuse me..yahaan ke patient Mrs.gauri kapoor kahaan hain???" " sir unki toh aade gante pehle hi discharge ho chuki hai..." "what?????????thanks so much..." he walked out from the hospital..." mujhse bina bataye...how could they do this..." he took his cell and called nikhila.." mom??? kahaan hain aap sab????" " shiv?? utt gaya kya ?? abh kya hua?? tum kahaan se bol rahe ho??" " mein hospital se..yahaan aakar patha chala ki gauri ki discharge already ho chuki hai?? mujhse bina bataye aap aise kaise??" " sorry shiv...tum bahut gehre neend mein the isliye socha, distrub na karoon.." " teek hai teek hai..abh aap log kahaan hain??" " hum abhi kali maa ke mandir mein hain..tum ek kaam karo ghar chale jao, hum bas aade gante mein wahaan aa jaayenge..." " mom, mein mandir aa jaoon??" " nahi shiv...tumhe toh patha hai ki kali maa ki mandir bahut dhoor hai..isliye u better go home..ok??" " ok......." " bye..." "bye mom.." he cut the cell with a very sad face...

he went home and entered his bedroom...he thought for a while what he wil do and then got an idea...he rushed to a room downstairs...it was locked ..he asked ramu kaka for the keys and opened the door..it was a small room and everything was covered with white sheets...he opened the one which was lieing closest to him..it was a cradle...he opened all the other stuffs...it was all shiv's childhood items....his school stuffs....as he was removing one by one..he saw a toy horse..well decorated size of his palm....he rubbed the dust off form its body...sumthing was written on the paper that was hanging from its neck....he smiled and thought...

*FLASHBACK*

shiv is celebrating his 16th bday......sweet16 i suppose....he was talking with his friends..everyone gave him gifts....big ones...he was laughing with his friends when his attention was dragged to the door..a tall and dark person entered...followed by 2 small girls ....he looked at the taller one...she was wearing a blue frock..laces were hanging from the puffs on her shoulder...she was wearing a white sandal...it was not too costly..but simple..just like how she was....she had tied her hair up into a pony tail...but strands of hair were disturbing her undisturbed face... she moved it with her hands....a small smile on her face...she saw her sister moving into the crowd...she went to her" kaya, wahaan nahi.." she pulled her sister and took her to mahen.." hello bade papa.." " hello gauri beta..." shiv stood there wit his friends watching her waving hands which was holding a small gift...his friends diverted him and he started chatting with them......" SHIV???" a sweet little voice called him from the back....he turned around..there stood the beautiful little princess dressed in blue frock......" HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!" he was like...was it a dream?? did she really talk to him?? she never used to!!!! " THANKS.." he took the gift and then the little girl moved to her father....

*FLASHBACK*

he read the small paper" happy birthday ....from gauri and kaya...." he looked into his watch.." oh no, i'm getting late..jaldi se karna padega..." he picked up saome things and went to his room ..came back and did the same for a couple of minutes...

whats shiv doing????

sorry for the small update.. i hope u all liked it....well pls do comment...silent readers...u r also 1 of the reasons for the delay....
LUV NANDINI
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Posted: 18 years ago
#92
nice update nandu.....hope shiv confess his love to gauri.....he is so sensitive by nature complete opposite of kaa shiv kapoor.....
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Posted: 18 years ago
#93
👏 👏
so he is finally gonna tell her the truth....

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Posted: 18 years ago
#94
i think he is gathering proof to support his story lol!since she is gonna be like WHAT????? and he will be like yea.....its true lol! continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#95
great part!!!!shiv is so in love!!!! pls continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#96
nandani just to let u know im not a silent reader, i had just noticed ur story a couple of days ago and immediately read all the chapters! btw this chapter was none the less, it was excellent, i just loved it, and i can wait to read more, because in the next chapter ur going to show gauri walking in the room, and she notices the room decorated with toys and pictures for their daughter! i just cant wait 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#97
Great update Nandu, is Shiv going to bring out all the childhood pictures, gifts and what not from the store and put them in their room so that he can confess his luv to Gauri 👏 hai kitna sentimental hai 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#98
hey..i simpliee luv ur work..i had a qs though..it is pretty obvious tht shiv luvs gauri but does she luv him too??update soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#99
hey amazing part
shiv is so sweet!!!
continue soon plz
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Posted: 18 years ago
awww...he's taking out all of his childhood things for his daughter...tats so sweet....hopefully he'll tell gauri he luvs her in the next part....cant wait for mor.

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