Kismat Ka Khel ff updated pt33 pg91 - Page 11

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: prab_rockinn

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wonderful work...........
hope machan does the needful and clears the confusion.....
varni is definitely gonna bring them closer......


thanks prab. yeah mee too beacuse that big headed shiv will not even want to find out. lazy a** wants people to do work for him. lets see who brings them closer varni or machan or perhaps someone else
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: shivgauri

๐Ÿ‘ great part!!!i like manchan, he genuienly cares for shiv!!!hope shiv finds out the truth.pls continue soon


thanks yaar. i know i like him too only in my ff. don't like him in the soap. he is a useless character in the soap. i will do my best to bring them closer. bear with me
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Posted: 18 years ago
part8

shiv and gauri came to the car gauri again sat at he back. shiv started driving machan's word ringing in his ear. "aunti chahti hai ke tumhari shadi ho jaye." he could not think of marrying anyone. how could he. how could he betray ipshita like. and he knew what ipshita said when she died. she asked him to marry only gauri she did not trusted anyone. how could he trust anyone. he did not even trusted gauri. he didn't know why ipshita felt that gauri could be a nice mother. she knew all about gauri's plan. and what she was doing. the only thing she did not know was about gauri's affair. would she had made a different decision if she knew about gauri's affair. "khabhi khbahi mujeh bhi to aisa lagta hai na ke gauri waisi nahi hai jaisa ke mama ne bataya hai. but why do behave so harshly when she is in front of me. my instinct tells me that she is bad. but why would she be so nice for his daughter. she is probably doing all this for money." "shiv plz ahista chaliye" shiv came out of his thoughts when he heard gauri's voice. he did not intantly react. "shiv varni dar rahi hai plz" shiv slowed down. he would not do anything to hurt his daughter. they arrived home. once the car stopped shiv came out and opened the door for gauri. gauri came out and said thanks to which shiv did not reply. he took the baby bag and locked the car. they walked in together. palak and maya gota shock. this was the first time they had seen them together. what shocked them the most was gauri holding varni. "bua lagta hai bhai pagal ho gaye hain yaan gauri ne in pe apna jadu chala diya hai" dadi gave them a angry stare and they went away from there. dadi took varni from gauri. she was sleeping right now. due to injection. "shiv kya kaha doctor ne" "doctor ne medicine di hai or bola hai ke every two hours deni hai. or yeh bhi kaha hai ke eik room me rahe infection hone ka khatra hai. doctor said that she is havinga severe cold. raat ko tang kare gi. it is important to give her milk and the medicine at the right time. and have to keep an eye on her." dadi was pleased by that she gave varni back to gauri. gauri took her in her arms carefully as if holding a fragile thing. shiv noticed that. he thanked god that she would not think of hurting his daughter. shiv than takes varni fom gauri and takes her to his room. varni wakes up and starts crying shiv gave her milk but she would not drink it. she kept crying. shiv tried so hard. he did not wanted to give varni back to gauri. he looked at ipshita's picture which rested on his side table. he got lost there. he forgot that varni was trying. he was hurt how his daughter would rather stay with gauri than him. "kash tum yahan hoti ipshita to yeh na hota. meri beti us aurat ko apni maa samujhne lagi hai yeh kitni attach ho gayi hai usse. mujeh dar lagta hai ke kahin oi harm na kare varni ko" dadi came inside. "shiv bache kiya kar rahe ho kab se roo rahi hai varni." she takes her from him and tries to feed her. but varni would not let her feed herself. dadi tried that for about five minutes than told shiv that she is taking varni to gauri's room. shiv allowed. with dadio gone he picked up ipshita's pic. "ipshita wapis a jao" a tear escaped his eyes. "shiv me to tumhare passs hon idher dekho." shiv turned to see ipshita standing by the window. he went up to her touched her face to see if she was real she was . she felt alive. shiv hugged her "ipshita tum wapis a gayi. abb mujeh chor ke na jana me tum se bohot pyar karta hon tumhare baghair ji nahi sakta." "nahi shiv tum ne koshish nahi ki. me ne tum se kaha tha na ke humari beti ka khayal rakhna. me ne tums e kaha tha na ke gauri hi meri beti ka khayal rakh sakti hai. me ne dekha hai shiv ke gauri varni se bohot pyar karti hai. me ne us ke andar mamta dekhi hai. shiv wo bohot achi hai. agar achi na hoti to abb tak tumhari beti ko kuch kar deti. shiv apne app me se us ki nafrat ko door kar ke to dekho. shiv me azad hona chahti hoon lakin tum mujeh jane nahi de rahe. me ne kaha tha na ke me tumhe rota nahi dekh sakti. tum roo ge to meri atma dukhi ho gi. dekho shiv tum mujeh dukh de rahe ho." "ipshita me tumhae baghair kissi ka nahi ho sakta. gauri ke bare me tum sab janti ho. tum janti hoo us ka affair tha us ne bacha abort kiya hai" "shiv tum humesha yeh kyun sochte ho ke us ka affair tha. tha bhi to kiya. tum us ko chor ke chale shiv. jab pati saath na ho to kab to wo tumhara intezar karti. shiv apna dekhne ka nazariya badlo. ho sakta hai jo tum ne suna hai wo dokha ho. ho sakta hai gauri begunnah ho." "par mama ne kaha..." "shiv tum ne apni maa pe ankh band kar ke vishwas kiya. par kiya mama ne humari bachi ka khayal kiya. shiv us ka or tumhara rona mujhe tarpata hai. shiv mama ne ajj tak varni ka thek se kahayal nahi rakha. tum un se kitna pyar karte ho. or gauri jis se tum itni nafrat karte ho wo hi humari bachi ka sab se ziyada khayal karti hai. shiv tum ne khabhi socha hai wo humari beti ke saath kiya kar sakti hai. tum ne us ke saath kya kiya. tum ne khabhi socha hai wo us ko meri beti. apni saut ki beti samujh ke uss ke saath kiya sallook kar sakti hai. par us ne aisa kuch nahi kiya shiv. us ko apna lo shiv. mujeh azad kar do shiv. me tumhe khush dekhna chahti hon or janti ho ke tumhari khushi is me hai." shib turned around a that bitter truth. ipshita was right. gauri did not do such thing. she could have killed his daughter but she did not. shiv turned around. there was no one there. "ipshita" he looked everywhere but he was nowhere. hiv then again took his picture. "meri mada kari ipshita me kiya karoon kuch samujh me nahi a raha. tumhari yeh baat mantehoe dil darta hai agar galat kiya to."
gauri was sitting on her bed holding her in her lap. she fed her and gave her medicine. she really had to handle her hard as she kept throwing the medicine. she had dadi hold her arms so she does not throw the spoon. now she was sleeping in her lap and gauri was singing her a song.

Dil Churale O Chaand Se Chehre Wale
Muskurale O Chaand Se Chehre Wale
Din Raat Main Tujhse Pyaar Karoon
Par Kaise Bhala Ikraar Karoon
Tu Na Samjhe Meri Bekarariyaan
Dil Churale O Chaand Se Chehre Wale
Muskurale O Chaand Se Chehre Wale
Dil Churale

Ab To Meri Zindagani Hai Tujhse
Aane Wali Kalki Jawani Hai Tujhse
Meri Chahat Ki Nishani Hai Tujhse
Meri Yaadon Ki Kahani Hai Tujhse
Maine Dekha Tujhko Mehsoos Kar Ke
Meri Saason Ki Rawani Hai Tujhse
Ghum Bhulale O Chaand Se Chehre Wale
Muskurale O Chaand Se Chehre Wale
Dil Churale
she kept singing her the song. she was so lost in it that she did not notice dadi and shiv standing at the door. shiv came here five minutes ago and heard gauri sining she was singing in a low but a beautifull voice. he did not know that gauri could sing so beautifully. he did not even know that she will sing the song for his daughter. he was going to office as an important work came up. he just wanted to see varni and tell dadi to take care of her. he stood there for about five minutes. her voice was magical. a voice in which you would want to get lost. no wonder. varni fell a sleep so easily. she must have liked gauri's singing. shiv noticed that dadi had left. he had been standing there for a while now. gauri had stopped singing ages ago. he cleared his throat. he then came into the room sat on the bed. and kissed varni who was sleeping in gauri's lap. "i love u janu" he said to varni gauri smiled althuogh she was a bit nervous with shvi around. shiv stood up "dadi plz varni ka khayal rakhiye ga is ko room me se na nikaliye ga." saying this he left. while gauri smiled. and outside. dada ji and dadi ji too smiled. shiv actually told gauri to take care of her. but addressed dadi who was not even in the room. once he left dada ji and dadi ji looked at ech other satisfied. "savitri me ajj boht khush hon mujeh aisa lag raha hai jaise shiv badal raha hai. agar wo gauri ko accept kar le to kitni khushiyan a jaye gi is ghar me. jo eik ghootan si hai gahr me yeh bhi chali jaye gi. meri umeed bandh rahi hai ke shiv or gauri eik ho jaye ge. bas abb bhagwan is umeed ko mat toriye ga" "app bilkul sahi ke rahe hain shiv ka attitude badal raha hai gauri ki aur" they came into the room and sat on near gauri. "gauri tumhe pata hai tum bohot acha gati ho. meri to samujh me nahi ata ke tum ne school me teaching kyun ki tumhe to singer hona chahiye tha." gauri smiled. "waise eyh likha kis ne hai" "dada ji kissi ne nahi likha yeh to us din varni ko sulate hoe dhun ban gayi. me to aise hi bol rahi thi." they sat theer talking laughing. which nikhila watched from outside. and she did not like it. she noticed taht shiv was getting attracted by gauri. it had been one hour since shiv left. he phoned home to check on varni. gauri picked up. "hello" came a low beautifull. "hello dadi hain" "ji nahi wo is waqt yahan nahi hai me unhe bola deti honap hold kare" "nahi me ne bas varni ka poochna tha. wo theek hai na" "ji wo so rahi hai. bilkul theek hai " "ok bye" shiv put the phone down shile gauri smiled on the other side. if she picked up the phone a week ago shiv owuld have insulted her.
machan came to gauri's school. he came to meet his son. actually it was a reason to come to know about gauri. machan met the principle and asked her if he could take his on home. she permitted he waited outside. while the peon called his son he looked around no men. his son came and here went the oppertunity of looking around. he took his son. "kiya hoa papa app mujhe lene kyun aye." "waise hi me ne socha ajj kahin chale hai theme park" his son got excited." "acha hoa dad app a gaye ajj gauri maam nahi ayi. bohot boring ho agay atha doosri teacher dant rahi thi gauri mam kissi ko nahi dantati." machan got ineterested may be his son could tell him about the man. "acha nakul tumharay koi male taecher tumhe dante hain" "haan papa wo sir bohot dantete hain" "acha air gauri mam koh jante hain kiya" "ji gauri maam un ki bohot izzat karti hai sab karte hain wo budhe hain na" machan felt as if his heart liked the news. "aur koi teacher" "nahi papa humare school me sirf eik hi male teacher hain. or wo to 65 yan 75 ke hain. bohot sakht hain abb to schol walon ko un ko bhi nikal dena chahiye" machan felt anger bulding up in him. no way gauri would have an affair with an old man. and nikhila said that it was gauri's colleague how could it be if there was only one male taecher in the school old enough to be her father. he wondered if nikhila lied. he phoned her she picked up. "hi aunty me mujhe app se zaroori baat karni hai me soch raha tha ke shiv ke gauri ne involvment kuch ziyada hai. us ka affair kis ke saath tha. us ki age kitni hai. takay me kuch plan kar sakon gauri ko shiv ki zindagi se humesha ke liye door karne ka." "well machan beta wo us ka colleague hai jawan hai umar ka pata nahi. me ne kahin dafa gauri ko us ke saath dekha hai. mere khayal se agar hum kissi bhi larke ko utha ke le aye to bhi chale ga." machan talked with her a little while. he knew the truth now. but would shiv listen now he needed evidence. he told niki aunty to keep quiet about it for now. but now he knew her truth he had to do something. but what.
shiv came home. heput his bag on the bed and went to gauri's room. gauri was palying with varni lying beside her on the bed. varni's small hand were on gauri's face and gauri was talking to her. shiv stood there not wanting to interupt. he wondered how it would have been if ipshita was around she must have done the same. he came in "me varni ko lene aya hon" "shiv wo is ko yahin rehne den app abhi. app naha li jiye. app abhi bahir se aye hain kahin infection na ho jaye." shiv left from there quietly. when he came out of the bathroom. he saw gauri in his bedroom sitting on the floor while varni lied onthe bed holding gauri's hand. shiv went near them and picked up varni. gauri went away from there and came back late with a tray of food. "laiye is ko mujeh de di jiye app khana kha li jiye." shiv gave her to gauri he had not eaten anything the whole day he was so hungry could not be bothered to argue with gauri. gauri again sat on the floor playing with varni. once shiv finished. she gave her to him and went to her room. she came back after two minutes. she made space for her on the bed. gauri held varni shile shiv gave her the medicine. and varni satrted crying. gauri quietened her and shiv told her to take varni with her as she wil not stop crying with him gauri follwed his order and took varni with him. "mera pass or koi raasta nahi jab tak varni theek nahi ho jati bad me dekhta hai ke kiya karna hai" and he went to sleep.

Edited by crystalclear - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
well shiv is really mean. Even if listened to his mother he has no right to play a game of marriage with guari.
If guari was shiv's father favorite, it was not her fault. Though little vani might seem to play cupid, I do not think it will be fair for gauri to get love like that, as if she was begging for it.
A suggestion, is can you introduce a new good guy for guari and guari and him start loving each other, then shiv realises her importance.
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Posted: 18 years ago

great going Maria ๐Ÿ‘

it was a wonderful update especially where ipshy tells shiv to marry gauri, poor guy his mind is playing with him๐Ÿ˜†, and varni is soo damn cute she has surely started playing cupid๐Ÿ˜ณ. Machan is also on his way to remove the misunderstanding as he's close to the truth , shiv will soon find out that nikky is behind all this๐Ÿ˜ก
so at last u included the office part hun ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
continue soon ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Edited by jiya imdad - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

omg what a long update maria and it is very very nice,at last machan foundout that gauri dint have an affair,nikki passi .
varni wow bringing her mom i mean gauri and dad together.

๐Ÿ‘ very very nice update maria.

Edited by sum2005 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
hi maria, another wonderful update darling, Ireally was so looking forward to it, btw that machaan did turn out to be okay didn't he, by the way i've been so busy and seems like going through a writerss block at this mo, but will try seeing ur updates getting me motivated too,hehe, no truly u r doing a superb job, intresting story, i am going to the ff award post and altering mine fot this one to be the best story i read , can't wait hun, do another one tomorrow for me pleeeeeaaasssssssseeeeeeeee, ๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
oh man nikhilia is GOING DOWN!!!!!!! lol continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wonderful....
finally this shiv is gonna get some sense(courtesy machan and ippi ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† )
hope everythin turns out well...........
nikki ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก is definitely gonna get kicked out of the house ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰......



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Posted: 18 years ago
wow...long update ๐Ÿ˜Š
hope nikhila dn go n kill poor machan.... ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
she can do anything to get wht she wants.....
lets jst hope shiv use his brain this time ๐Ÿ˜Š

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