Kismat Ka Khel ff updated pt33 pg91 - Page 10

Originally posted by: Jenna Dutt

Brilliant Update Maria......luved it...cupid has started shooting the arrows already eh..... 😆 Keep it up sweetie.

thanks jenna. yeah its started. but lets see what happens next

great update Maria 👍🏼 , that daiper part was funny 🤣. This shiv doesn't have anything else to think about jab dekho ek hi ratt lagaye rehta hai ke "gauri ko expose karna hai gauri ko expose karna hai" by the way ur shiv doesn't goes to office?? he's always roaming in the house 😆
i wish machan finds out the truth soon so the misunderstanding is removed!!
it was a nice update 😃 n really enjoyed reading it
continue soon 😉

thank u, thank u,very much for updating girl, what sweet update,I have been terribly busy i tell u, but seriously wonderful writing, I love how that nasty shiv's sweet daughter has sense of understanding ppl. hehe, I hope he finds out about his mums lies, she is just so foul, poor Gauri is so scared of shiv don't even wanna go to doctors with the fool, and the machaan need a hiding, 😡, the schmuck, as if the poor gal hasn't got enough to worry about.

👏 brilliant update maria.
hope machan finds the truth of gauri and clear the misunderstandings between shiv and gauri.

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wonderful work...........
hope machan does the needful and clears the confusion.....
varni is definitely gonna bring them closer......

👏 great part!!!i like manchan, he genuienly cares for shiv!!!hope shiv finds out the truth.pls continue soon

Originally posted by: jiya imdad

great update Maria 👍🏼 , that daiper part was funny 🤣. This shiv doesn't have anything else to think about jab dekho ek hi ratt lagaye rehta hai ke "gauri ko expose karna hai gauri ko expose karna hai" by the way ur shiv doesn't goes to office?? he's always roaming in the house 😆
i wish machan finds out the truth soon so the misunderstanding is removed!!
it was a nice update 😃 n really enjoyed reading it
continue soon 😉

hey taht was not funny. most men don't know how to change a diaper. because they cannot be bothered as it is a girl work. well ekta ka kuch to asar pare gawo bhi eik chez ko ghisati hai. the office thing that too i got from ekta. she is always making a man drop on teh girl anytime. mostly when he is suppose to work. anyway making him stay at the office would make it boring. i enjoyed writing. thanks yaar i will cont soon

this nikki 😡 😡 😡 is a gone case send her to a mental hospital she will be happy there 😆 diaper part was really 😆 shiv shud find out the truth as soon as possible but y is nikki doing such thing was it someyhing like she was having a crush with someone whom even gauri's mom loved so dey both had a fight abt it in college 😉 😆 😆 so she is taking badla of dat 😡

Originally posted by: Iqbaladdict

thank u, thank u,very much for updating girl, what sweet update,I have been terribly busy i tell u, but seriously wonderful writing, I love how that nasty shiv's sweet daughter has sense of understanding ppl. hehe, I hope he finds out about his mums lies, she is just so foul, poor Gauri is so scared of shiv don't even wanna go to doctors with the fool, and the machaan need a hiding, 😡, the schmuck, as if the poor gal hasn't got enough to worry about.

you wellcome. you wellcome. thanks yaar i glad you liked it. hey i do my best to make it worth your reading. hahahaha nasty shiv's sweet daughter. yeah she is small and knows love when she sees it. well he do insult her everytime. any girl instead of me would have been scared. i would just have said bring it on honey. lets have fight see who wins. hey machan is not that bad.

Originally posted by: sum2005

👏 brilliant update maria.
hope machan finds the truth of gauri and clear the misunderstandings between shiv and gauri.

thanks sum. yes i hope so too that he finds out about the truth and tells gauri. woo i think he would give anything to find out about the truth lets see if shiv darling believes it or not.😉😉