Khamoshiyon Ki Zubaan ff...END p.86 - Page 67

Originally posted by: ash9

its over?? 😕
nice ending 😊 😊
nw let me go n read tht other FF......i forgot the story already 😳 😳 😳

Ashu... yep... it's done...

Thanks for the immense support always!

As for the other one... damn, I need to skim over to see what the heck I was doing too!😆

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: prab_rockinn

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Beautiful end.......
thx for such a lovely ff.......

Thanks Pabu... you're one of my rocks... *mwuahh*

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: Catwoman

sorry dc was in a rush and never commented..... 😳 I just posted it yesterday Di... no worries!

you change the sytle of writting in the end and it felt as if in the flow the journey was still on going...i never wanted it to end ...but u said u would!!...so u did!! 👏 ... ending are hard work! 👏

I sometimes feel you know more of what I write than I do... actually in honesty, you probably do as I forget!😆 Thanks for noticing the little things and throwing out your thoughts at me... Yep, all good (or bad😆) things come to an end... and yes, I just didn't know what else to write... and didn't want to drag it. Indeed, endings are very hard!

This was one of the first ff i read ever and it has been a rollcaster ride of emotions like the serial Haha... yeah, its been a ride alright😕... As for emotions, jahan dil hain... wahan jazbaat toh hote hain.... the part which hit me the most was the kicten when the lights went out.. i can read that so many times... you caputed it to tht "T"....infact you cature gauri her feeling wickedly... her pain and her love...the dream and then finally him...."WoW!! Kitchen part?... Wasn't that way back when....? Holy crow, you're still clinging to it?! You make me want to go and read it... Shall I risk it?😆

i am looking forward to devotion.... 😳 *rolf*... thought so! and honestly... I think I am too😃😳

Kat

Kat Di... you've always been a pillar of support for me. Undoubtedly, you have been a great inspiration and being such a talent hogger yourself😆 Seriously though, you're a charmer and much more! Thanks for everything... and yeah, Devotion... *coughs*😆

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: mansi1219

😭 ... oye, roh kyun rayi hai?😕

u ended it?? nahiiinnn... yeh nahin ho sakta... 😆 .. that was teh filmi me.. ok neway.. wow.. u ended it.. i m trying to take that in... i wud have loved to read more..

yep... its done... I know, to tell you the truth... I can't believe it either... its been so long... *sighs*... lol, filmi is my middle name😆😆

kya yaar.. they had the baby already... she is such a cutie pie.. i loved the name! sho cute.. and also shiv and her relationship was very sweet...

Yep... bacha is there already... thanks for liking the name... I think it means "reflection", and so I kinda stuck with it.😳 And her and Shiv's relationship was something I found difficult to capture, and heres what I came up with... glad u liked it!

awesome job wit the ending.. i had a feeling it was hte end... as kat said.. u really did an amazingly beautiful job at capturing the emotions in gauri..

Thank you... You guys floor me with all your kind words...

my next mission is to figure out exactly how many leaps u took throughout this ff.. 😆 .. i wonder if i will ever figure it out.. 😕 .. but itw ud be awesome if i did!

lmao 😆😆 I don't even know! what was it, like three?😕 *scratches head*... you're willing to go through it all over?😆

neway.. cant wait to read ur other ones!! shidat for sure.. j-b not sure.. i have this wierd thing of seeing the couple on screen before i can imagine.. so will try to read.. i m sure u will have plenty of people to appreciate u.. u really are a wonderful writer with immense talent.. and i mean it!

Ah, Shiddat... lol, phir hui shuru woh kahani... I understand your feelings in regards to the other one, no probs... If you like Jn'B then do so, if not... then its fine too...

Thank you for your commentos yaar! I'm speechless... *bows humbly*

ok i will shut the box now.. c u at the next ff! 😳

Lol... will do!

Cheers,

dc

luv mansi

Originally posted by: abhilashasharma

oh my god... finished... but not disappointed becoz i kno u will give a nice treat later... havent read yet.. but i wud add 1 thing...

Abhilasha, seems like tumhe jhatka laga😆 yep its over... aww, you're so sweet! Yep, "Shiddat" is starting again soon... just lemme breathe for a moment😆

The title was very appropriate to the story and the flow of it... u know what .. i needed to verify it.. so i copied it to a word doc and highlighted the dialogues of S-G alone... it not even covered one-tenth of the total story text...

You're serious?!😲 I didn't realize how much in depth you all looked into it... I'm SPEECHLESS... lolz, not a tenth eh?😆😆 *coughs*... was just trying to justify the title like you said😳

big hug, hearty thanks and congrats... i really loved ur style... itna soft romantic love sttory aaj kal padne ko miltha kahaan hai.... sigh.. sigh...

You're a total mittu! Thank you for everything... 🤗

Cheers,

dc

hope to c ur shiddat soon...

Originally posted by: desi chic

DC what are you on about??...i read reports and have to pay serious attentions to the small prints of contracts..hence i notice the sytle change which can only be a good thing...i am sure your readers to have noticed....

Pillar of support cheer no one never called me concerte before😕😆😆...cheers!! need to add that one to the list!! jk.....

I am sure u will amaze us as you do!👏

Billo😳