Khamoshiyon Ki Zubaan ff...END p.86 - Page 65

Originally posted by: hardkaur

u write beautifully!! *sigh* bhabs said u were good she was right 😉

Jaz ji... bhabhs? Right... my schexy billi😆 She referred you? Lolz, discount!😆 (dunno on what though😕)... She's just too kind... and now you do the same. I'm humbled and appreciate your time!

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: Catwoman

omg DC how can u say that was boring...so well written...

btw hk i told u sjhe was good nah!! 😉

Haha Di... tussi humesha evenh kende oh😆 But you leave me in all scmiles😃 Thanku!

Haha... so you brought in another poor soul to tolerate my ramblings... But she's quite sweet...

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: prab_rockinn

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Beautiful!!!!!!!!
can't add more......

jus one request yaar change the title to indicate u've updated next time......

thanks pabu! sorry yaar, jaldi jaldi mein bhool hi gayi... will happen no more! *holds ears*😳

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: nyzbabigyal

tu bhi na.. sautan ji.. or beemari buddy..how am i suppose to know u updated.. damn it.. likha bhi nahin .. i just came here.. to tell u to update.. 😆 😆 😆 and realized.. its already been done.. oops.. 😕 😆 this means i should hurry up and update right🤔.. sighhh..

will catch up lata on tonight or tomorrow.. 😳 😳 😳

maaf karde na... galati hogayee... hunn nayi hovegi... hehe, I read ur mind😆 are u reading mines *coughs* update*coughs*... hehe, do it when u can... I know... and read when u can...

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: amneet89

well how r u di?and this was an awsome update u have awsome writing skills.u jus take me to another world

waiting for next update
🤗

Amnu darl'in... I'm fine kudiye, tu das... how's your hand?... thanks for the comments... and as for another world... *laughs*

I'm posting in a few mins... thanks for the japphi putt😳😆

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: akaur

that wz gr8 yaar

thank you so much yaar!

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: nyzbabigyal

not fair.. not fair... not fair.. NOT fair.. *stomping feet*.. so not fair 😭 hunn ki hoya??

its already d bridal shower 😭 😭 😭 .. abhi tak mujhe.. i mean dr. navs ko 😳 😳 😳 dabba nahin mila..mithai wala dabba 😭 😭 😭 .. itni badhi khush khabri di.. meri sautan ne (that means u.. ms. writer 😳 😳 ).. aur mujhe abhi tak mithai nahin khilayi 😭

*slaps hand on forehead*... how could I forget... tehr, I'll fetch some right now😃

how is it??😆 even has ladoos... oye, don'tcha start thinking other things.😆

ahem.. for now.. i'll let it pass 😃 😃 .. moving on.. haye haye wat a part.. had me blushing thru out.. 😳 😳 😳

lolz.. tu bhi na... ab isme shayad tera bhi kya kasoor... beemari buddy😳

and u used.. shayad yehi toh pyar hai... and here i was thinkin u'd use d other one.. haila.. either way.. beautiful lyrics.. so cute 👏

yeah... it seemed to fit in better with the context... I know, its a very beautiful song...😳

awwwwww he was restin his head on her lap 😳 .. that whole scene.. and d rest was too adorable.. leaving her a note.. makin sure she eats/drinks on time.. cho chweet 😳 😳 😳

ab hassa toh phassa na😆 yep, he's the one and only... shivvy kapoor haazir for his wife😃 glad u liked it.

and then wat he said.. sighhhh.. *hand on heart*.. 😳 😳 😳 ahem ahem.. shivy seems to leave no chance in makin her blush 😉 😉 😉 especially since he knows d kinda affect he has on her.. 😉 😳 😳 lage raho shiv.. lage raho.. 😉 😉

what did he say?😕 oh right... the whisper in her ear part... ye, he may look all serious and stuff, but we know our naughty shivvy.😳

i mean u know baad mein bacha aa jayega.. phir chance shayad na mile 😆 cuz d baby's gonna want full attention nah.. toh kya karein 😆 😆 anythin can happen.. 😆 😆

ek dum se! he's a fast thinker😆 but then she's his gauri... and sg are forever😉

anupam's full comedy.. pitega ek din.. i can already imagine it happening 😆

I know eh... I love him... that stupid ipshit (in the show)... she's not worthy of him... but in the ff, yep he's just asking for a black eye!😃

i can't wait till their baby's born.. haye haye.. 😳 😳 so cute.. good lord... tu toh parent's se bhi zyada excite ho rahi hai... kya karoon mein is ladki ka?... begani shaadi mein abdula deewana😆 btw sautan ji.. i mean beemari buddy.. which is it??? 🤔 now im confused.. on wat to call u.. sighhhh... tu ehna confuse mat ho, mujhe bhi kar ke chodegi its both... take ur pick at the moment😆so ye.. that was a SHORT update.. very very short.. i just started readin and it finished 😭 haan haan sab jaanti hoon mein... u were gonna say... I know, I got a lil kanjoos didn't I?... well next update is coming😃

but it was mindblowing 👏 ... i mean i managed to write some commento.. but truthfully it was just.. sigh.. left me speechless.. 😳 😳 😳 d way u portray their feelings.. after all khamoshiyon ki zubaan 😉 😉 😉 truly touching 😳 😳

tu na😆 now I'm blushing... waise aakriti bhi tere pe gayi hai... speechless, but not... *ahem* I guess I"m not one to talk either😳 well apparently I just bak-bak and don't let the characters talk so I'm giving them some lines... some😳 like u said, khamoshiyon ki zubaan... 😆

and d blueness.😛. u just too sweet sautan ji🤗

I know I know... *fixes collar*😉

continue soon 😉 😉 loveddddddddddd it 👏

five/ten mins and it'll be up.

Cheers,

dc