Khamoshiyon Ki Zubaan ff...END p.86 - Page 64

u write beautifully!! *sigh* bhabs said u were good she was right 😉

omg DC how can u say that was boring...so well written...

btw hk i told u sjhe was good nah!! 😉

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Beautiful!!!!!!!!
can't add more......

jus one request yaar change the title to indicate u've updated next time......

well how r u di?and this was an awsome update u have awsome writing skills.u jus take me to another world

waiting for next update
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not fair.. not fair... not fair.. NOT fair.. *stomping feet*.. so not fair 😭

its already d bridal shower 😭 😭 😭 .. abhi tak mujhe.. i mean dr. navs ko 😳 😳 😳 dabba nahin mila..mithai wala dabba 😭 😭 😭 .. itni badhi khush khabri di.. meri sautan ne (that means u.. ms. writer 😳 😳 ).. aur mujhe abhi tak mithai nahin khilayi 😭

ahem.. for now.. i'll let it pass 😃 😃 .. moving on.. haye haye wat a part.. had me blushing thru out.. 😳 😳 😳

and u used.. shayad yehi toh pyar hai... and here i was thinkin u'd use d other one.. haila.. either way.. beautiful lyrics.. so cute 👏

awwwwww he was restin his head on her lap 😳 .. that whole scene.. and d rest was too adorable.. leaving her a note.. makin sure she eats/drinks on time.. cho chweet 😳 😳 😳

and then wat he said.. sighhhh.. *hand on heart*.. 😳 😳 😳 ahem ahem.. shivy seems to leave no chance in makin her blush 😉 😉 😉 especially since he knows d kinda affect he has on her.. 😉 😳 😳 lage raho shiv.. lage raho.. 😉 😉

i mean u know baad mein bacha aa jayega.. phir chance shayad na mile 😆 cuz d baby's gonna want full attention nah.. toh kya karein 😆 😆 anythin can happen.. 😆 😆

anupam's full comedy.. pitega ek din.. i can already imagine it happening 😆

i can't wait till their baby's born.. haye haye.. 😳 😳 so cute.. btw sautan ji.. i mean beemari buddy.. which is it??? 🤔 now im confused.. on wat to call u.. sighhhh... so ye.. that was a SHORT update.. very very short.. i just started readin and it finished 😭

but it was mindblowing 👏 ... i mean i managed to write some commento.. but truthfully it was just.. sigh.. left me speechless.. 😳 😳 😳 d way u portray their feelings.. after all khamoshiyon ki zubaan 😉 😉 😉 truly touching 😳 😳

and d blueness.😛. u just too sweet sautan ji🤗

continue soon 😉 😉 loveddddddddddd it 👏

👏 hai kitna sweet likha hai DC, left me speechles..

kya! dii..

mujhe bhi koi mithai nahin mile..........! 😕 😳

no problem.. you made up for it with a splendid update!!

haila.. i loved the way shiv said to gauri.. parchayee.. shiv ki gauri ki
parchayee.. with his husky voice.. main toh deewani phir se ho gayi!!

wow!

dii.. guess what( navs dii already knows), 2morrow is my one year being
with IF.. so i thank my dii for all the wonderful memories she has given
her hamesha rehnewali speechless fan ko!

wow neetu.. ur simply amazing! it leaves me speechless eveytime yaar..

when i started reading.. i really thought i wudnt enjoy it cuz its more narrative and less talkative.. but it truned out completely opposite! i love the way u write.. although not much is spoken.. so much is experienced.. i love the way gauri always blushes.. and shiv only does it more!

my fav line was.. parchayee.. shiv ki gauri ki parchayee.. too good!! took me a second to register.. i m slow..lol.. but it was awesome! shiv makes me wanna dream for a shiv.. 😳

ya and how m i suppoes to kno u updated? i was just reading navs's comment nad i m like when was his head on her lap? and hten i got it.. bhula mat karo..

o nad loved the line for the song u chose.. and eventhou there is hardly any hindi in there... watever is there.. is just soo shayraani way..

i m a fan completely!

r u better now btw?


ok c u at hte next update!

luv mansi 😃

sorry guys... my bad... bhaag daud mein title change karna bhool gayi! gosh, this weekend has been so busy... will reply to all your lovely comments asap. and will be around the forum more often now, was kinda busy lately. thanks for everything, ya'll are heere!

Cheers,
dc