Khamoshiyon Ki Zubaan ff...END p.86 - Page 62

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: desi chic

*massive japhhi*... Lub ju meri billo raani!

Cheers,

dc

im actually waiting for this update!! tick tock!! he he😆😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
i read the whole thing and i've got to say you are truly an brilliant writer 👏 👏 i love the way you portray the characters of shiv and gauri it's amazing.
Edited by iqbal-pallavi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Firstly, my sincere apologies for the HUMONGOUS delay… Sorry guys, I'm not feeling well… but I said it would be up today… so here it is… sorry, I'm like three minutes over twelve a.m. and its short I know… will try and make up in the next, which will surely be up sooner! Meri Billo Raniye… I hope I live up to your expectations~

Recap: Gauri gets off the phone with someone?… Dr.Navs? * lol *

Part 45

As they gently strode side by side, the wonders of the Kapoor's exquisite gardenia faded behind a bouquet of sweetly delicate memories… A marriage founded in compromise and sorrow… Developing into a bond so pure and inextinguishable…

There was strange warmth in the cool breeze as it freely explored her dimensions. Lost in thoughts, had he not been in his own… he would have instantly made the abrupt shade of crimson in her cheeks turn a darker shade with a single look. In a moment of pleasant oblivion, she stole a gaze at her companion… His robust figure was hidden by the navy polo shirt accompanied by tanned khakis she had pulled out for him earlier this evening. Daringly, her gaze lifted to his handsome face… The fervent eyes wandered far to the horizon contentedly, whilst his expression revealed nothing peculiar to the casual observer. Letting her gaze linger on the face for another luxurious moment, she felt the different shades of emotion radiating from him. Turning her attention half-heartedly towards the greens, she couldn't help but think… Taqdeeron ke rang… kitne ajeeb hain (Wondrous are the colours… of fate…)… Her amusing thoughts were momentarily interrupted as she felt his index finger gently yet securely… intertwine with hers. The dimples set in once again… As the sun melted giving way to the moon, they continued to walk in conversational silence, rendered in reminiscence. Somewhere in the near distance, a soft tune swam through the airs…

Oh… lagi tumse mann ki lagan… lagan lagi tumse mann ki lagan… Gali gali ghoome… gali gali ghoome… dil tujhe dhoondhe… Gali gali ghoome… dil tujhe dhoonde… Tere bin tarse na ye

Was it just him, or she was radiating even more today… The happiness reflecting off of her beautiful face had him in wonders and curiosity… Her soft skin was glowing while the spark in those eyes… Instinctively, his feet kept moving to the rhythm of hers… suddenly stopping. Inquisitively, he turned… Indeed, she looked like the epitome of beauty… Her petite body was garnished in the smoothest of maroon silk, with a similar hued shawl neatly set across her right shoulder. Royal… Was it him, or the dimples seemed to deepen with every inch she stepped towards him? Now but a few breaths away, she looked at him confidently… Almost teasingly … as she continued to look into his eyes, he felt her carefully take his free hand… Bringing it to her abdomen… "Shiiiv…" Suddenly it was as though time had forgotten its position, as his heart raced in unquestioned excitement… "Main pregnant hoon…" she whispered softly. A moment passed as he failed to react… He looked blankly at her nodding her head as though assuring him it was real… His eyes looked from where she secured his hand… to her ever-lustrous face. Slowly, but sincerely, a smile played upon his lips… Unexpectedly, a gentle film lined his eyes as he carefully brought a hand to her cheek. "Gaureee…" his voice rang domineeringly in the air… Almost instantaneously in the moment, he pulled her into his embrace… securing the both of them in his hold. Uncounted minutes passed as they stood as such…

Gently he pulled away looking at her once more… Cupping her face in his hands, his lips reached for her forehead leaving a subtle, yet profound imprint… As his hands softly caressed her cheeks whilst retreating to her shoulders, she closed her eyes… taking in every second. At some point she felt her feet lose touch with the ground and she opened her eyelids to look down upon him smiling in satisfaction as he twirled her around… "Shiiv!!!" she screamed in joyous irritation, if ever there were a thing… He only held her tighter…

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He moaned in an unstable phase of slumber… Seeking comfort, his hand sleepily fumbled for her on the other side of the round bed. Suddenly his eyes shot open while his frame became rigid. Sitting up, he softly called out her name in the darkness… only to be met with… silence… Absentmindedly, his hand found the switch to the side lamp… His eyes grew big at not seeing her anywhere. Urgently throwing away the cover, he went to the bathroom calling out again… Silence… His expression distorted into worry as the clock on the wall continued its inevitable course. Numbing the frusterating thoughts, he silently slipped into the corridor… his whispered voice echoing against the still walls of Kapoor Mansion… "Gauree…"

As he approached the living area, his muscles tightened increasingly, when a sudden clatter caught his immediate attention… Following his instinct, he stopped at the dim light coming from the fridge… But what really caught his attention… was the figure clad in deep satiny lilac, bent over… The expression on her face was… priceless… A hint of guilt as though caught in an illegal act. Letting go of the fridge handle, she stood up, straightening herself… Carelessly tucking loose strings of hair behind her ear, she reflected a childhood innocence he couldn't help but grin at. "Wohe… mein… fridge…" her fragmented voice broke off seeing him smirking at her.

She felt the beads of perspiration form unwontedly at her forehead as her accelerated heartbeat failed to calm… perceiving his calculated approach. The smirk was now gone, replaced by an almost frightening blankness… Now but a breath away, she dared not look up as her chest heaved silently… her eyes squinted shut in some sort of anticipation. She didn't know why it was happening this way… All she knew was that the man seemed to have this strange affect on him… Everything suddenly numbed as his hand took hold of hers and she opened her eyes seeing him lead her to the miniature table. Her eyes never faltered in holding his firmness and she did as was directed silently… obediently. Tracing his every move, she sat closer to the edge of the cushioned seat. Unknowingly, her hand screamed in pain in response to the force at which she held onto the edge of the table… only holding it harder. Curiosity and a strange shame overwhelmed her… As he turned his head around looking over his shoulder, she felt her eyes downcast… Her heart thudded earnestly as his soft footsteps came closer.

A moment passed as she gradually composed herself… A dim brightness emitted from the fridge, which he had left slightly open. Looking up, she froze in surprise, while her muscles immediately relaxed. He was starring at her, a naught expression plastered on his face… while a spoonful of the chocolatist cheesecake was brought temptingly close to his lips. As the bite faded away into his mouth, she suddenly felt a flicker of anger mixed with irritation come over her… Here she was, dying for a taste of the sinfully delighting dessert sitting wholly before her… while he… and that smirk… It didn't help much that he "pretendingly" offered her a spoon half emptied. When she failed to react, he shrugged carelessly digging in for another… the utensil stopping half way to his parted lips. He looked at her with amusement as she brought the spoon to her mouth, devouring the cool chocolate melting on her tongue. Her eyes closed in a mixture of relief and pleasure, whilst he found content in her enjoyment…

Suddenly, she seemed aware of him once more… and despite the limited illumination, he could sense the colour rise to her cheeks. With an arrogant smile, he pulled her with fast reflex so that she sat startled… on his lap. As he forwarded the forgotten spoonful to his mouth as though nothing had happened… he could swear he sensed the crimson in her cheeks increase in intensity…

Done in a hurry... forgive the mistakes plz!😕 and thank you iqbal-pallavi, you're words are like my BBQ~ priceless😳

Cheers,

dc

Edited by desi chic - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
WOW DC great update we all knew this was comming!! 👏 ....

"I hope I live up to your expectations~" of course u always do you and a few other writer keep me on the edge of my seat reading you masterpieces!!... 😳

Rest up and feel better!! 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
k..ppl stay away frm IF..there is a cyber fever going around... first kat nw dc..who is nxt

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get well sooooon dc

no prob.. its short but very nice.. 😊
so she is pregnant again..... n shiv
he is bothering his pregnant wife 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago

why u gussa..😳😆....it looked like navs wrote another part with such a long reply...and kind of same as what i felt😛😆 this applies in future too..😛😆

amu~
Edited by *Spandana* - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: desi chic

Firstly, my sincere apologies for the HUMONGOUS delay… Sorry guys, I'm not feeling well… but I said it would be up today… so here it is… sorry, I'm like three minutes over twelve a.m. and its short I know… will try and make up in the next, which will surely be up sooner! Meri Billo Raniye… I hope I live up to your expectations~

Recap: Gauri gets off the phone with someone?… Dr.Navs? * lol * ahem ahem....dc trying to ice someone....😆


Done in a hurry... forgive the mistakes plz!😕 and thank you iqbal-pallavi, you're words are like my BBQ~ priceless😳

and is this to ice someone too..😆


Cheers,
dc


👏
deekuy, seems like u kind of increased the amount of talking between the duo...👏 as always love ur narrative style...very presice and apt as the situation goes on...😳.and heavy dose of romance added..😆
lovely dc....i tried to find michutakus....but to my surprise i dint find any😛

amu~
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ash9

k..ppl stay away frm IF..there is a cyber fever going around... first kat nw dc..who is nxt

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get well sooooon dc

It's because we r update u lot and get the virus!! 😕any way she got the same symptoms!! 😕...i am in uk she in canada???...

warning our ff's are also infected by the cough and fever!! he he he😆😆

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Posted: 18 years ago

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shez preggi again... nice
the way he manages to make her blush is so beautifully written.....

get well soon......

Edited by prab_rockinn - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
that was really nice.... i loved it
get well soon......
and keep coming.

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