FF: Keeping the moon... END PART- Pg 77 - Page 58

happy ending ,at last shiv confessed his love,omg love at first sight 😳 .
chandhini ur ff is very very nice we had enjoyed it a lot,hope u will write new ff soon.

omg! its over! 😭 😭 😭 how am i gonna live without looking forward 2 another update for this fic? man i'm gonna miss this sooo MUCH.....this was so beautiful.....one of my favorite stories ever.....i hope u dont mind if i print this story out n keep it with me will u? man i luved how u ended the fic with the title of the fic.....tat was very creative......hopefully i'll read mor of ur work in the future... 😉

omg Chandini, this was truly heartwarming end, Shiv was so so so so sweet, Gauri is head over heels for him and they sure do have that special spark that anyone in love needs, u have adorable thinking i will also keep ur advise in mind and am preety sure have been given by another before u, thank u so much for wonderful story and the sweet happy ending we all love to have, 👏

😭
u finished it 😕
im going to miss reading this FF a lot
this was i awesome gr8 mindblowing etc etc...........FFi hope u win in ff contest......
hope u write another 1 sooooooooon
😊

Yeah... I'm back... I suppose I should've written something more than whatever spilled... 😳

Hum kaun hote hain tumhe kuch kehne waale,
Kehne ko kuch tumne choda hi nahin.
Hum kaun hote hain kuch bhi samajhne waale,
Samajhne ko kuch tumne choda hi nahin.
Hum kaun hote hain kuch chahne waale,
Chahne ko tumne kuch choda hi nahin.
Tumhaari ye adayein, tumhare ye bole...
Zara ye jalve, ek baar phir se toh khol.

Chandu darling... You leave me speechless, yet I can't seem to not comment either. I know, its strange. 😳 Anyways, I started reading your ff a while back and to be honest, I would read one beginning and then I'd see the last "." and I'd feel like shiz... But today, I felt... like 😭😭 Nonetheless, I will not tell you to continue further as I think this is so apt an "ending", and no one could have done better than you. Young woman, when you reach the best-sellers status, please do not forget me. And like I've said before, I claim the first copy of the first book with an autograph.

👏👏👏

And, as I have hinted, I'm looking forward to another post from my Chandu Rani with something in regards to "ff" material. *HINT HINT*

*coughs*

Cheers,
dc

Originally posted by: desi chic

Neetu tirely walks into her room and drops her bag on the blue carpet. She is thinking about her upcoming project, which is due pretty soon and lets out a wary sigh. Her eyes fall upon the computer and curiously, she sits before it. Upon clicking "login" into IF a smile dances upon her lips. She sees that her Chandu Rani has updated, and its as if the moon came out with the sun brightening her day. In a upsurge of excitement, she manages to click on the post and reads the latest entry's title... "Keeping the Moon..." Curiosity gets the better of her and her eyes start moving across and down the page. As the words register, her smile deepens... Her heartbeat starts to change rhymic patterns as though sitting on a rollercoaster ride. At some points, she finds herself getting up and yelling gleefully like a maniac, whereas others she can faintly hear her mother call from outside, "Neetu, what's so funny?!" As she approaches the end, her heart sinks at the "end"... Its as if everything just came tumbling down... The K-Shows come to her. How they seem to be never ending, and then a sigh escapes her lips... Why do good things always come to such a quick end? Now her lips purse in a pout and her arms cross in front of her. While in some strange moment, another langoorish smile slaps itself on her face... What if... What if she demands Chandu to write another one?!

Cheers,
dc

mai kya kahuu neetu...i feel as if u snatched the word out of my mouth...but phir bhi hum kuch alag sa likheyngei par wahii dukh jo aapnei mahsoos kiya chaanduu ke ff ke khatam honei mei aur wahi aarzoo ki chaanduu ek aur ff likhei...

I never read any ff's ...but i read urs full yesterday...and i told u that i finished it at 4:00 am yesterday...and rite now the clock struck to 4:00 am again...yesterday this time was too luckky for me and today the very next day this time had brought such an unluck yaar....i reallyy am very very very thankfullll to u for writing such a beautiful,fantastic,superb,lovely,awesome,gr8,humorous,roman tic,lovely,and one of the best ever i read ff....it is a sad moment to see one of mine favourite ff ending...but it also brings a hope to see the next one...which i am not gonna miss once part of... ..once again chanduu i want u to know how much i love ur ff!!......thanx alot yaaaaaaaaar!!!...see i am wishing for the moon as u said...and i dont want to land on stars but be as lucky as u and reach on the moon which is to get ur next equally lovely ff soon!!

Once again thanxxxxxxxxxx alot for such a wonderfull ff!!👏

OMG GIRL THAT WAS AWESOME!! Do u ahve any idea how great of an ending that was? I loveddddddddd it!!! this was by far one of my most favorite ff's ever!!!! continue with ak one soon plz!! and plz start a new one!!!

Hi,

I have to say that i loved your fanfic it was absolutly a perfect mix of romance and wittyness lol😃 but i am really sad that it has ended. But i just have to say great job and plzzzzz write another fanfic and pm me if u do

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz you are an awsome writer and seriously should write a book!! i love your writing style i could read this fic over and over and not even get bored too good 👏

-Rupi😃(eagerily awaiting another fan fic!)

oh how romantic!!! you always leave me with smile on face...how do I go about and do aero hw now...grrr I just wanna sit here and read it over and over again and pretend that you are not ending it and this story will go on forever...hmmmphhh...well anyhooo I did love the end but can't help being sad that it is the "ending"...I am going to miss this ff...it was my favorite one...well please do write another one so I can have more happy days...I know talk about being selfish...but 👏 👏 👏 for you