Originally posted by: x-nasrin-x
👏Its Finished😭Please Let Me Know If You Start Another FanFic, This One Was Just Brilliant!! The Best Ive Ever Read In All Forums Put Together!!
I Love All The Comedy In This, I Think Thats What Made This FanFic More Enjoyable!!
I Actually Could Visualize All The Scenes, Your So Much Better Then Ekta Kapoor.. This FanFic Was A Pleasure To Read!!😃
👏
P.S Please PM Me If You Have Written Any Other FanFics, And Give Me The Links To Them! 😊
Thank you... your comment has left me speechless 😳😳😳, so nice of you to take time out to read the fic... 🤗🤗 ... well I another fic is brewing in my mind however....I have not started it yet... 😉...when I do, I will make sure I will let you know...😃 ... once again thank you for all the lovely encouranement 🤗
Originally posted by: yamulya1
chandu, seeing the title i was actually sad, but the fact tht u updated made me smile and i quickly jumped into the topic.
i always say this, but again please bear with my repetition.
i like the way u write sentences, u describe, u insert comedy and romance in a wonderful subtly touch. to be frank i was expecting it to be ur last part. just by the way u carried the ff from the begining. but as u introduced some new charectors i thought u would continue, guess what i was wrong.
obviously, i know the summary of the part even beofre i read. but ur writing make the reader not to skip even a line. i was on my toes reading every single line....
"i mouth a thank u" this is my fav line. aapki bookstore effect hi. 😛
and thanku chandu for the lovely advice. 😛 😳
i had fun all through ur ff journey, no negativity what so ever is one of the best about ur ff. 👏
well... first of all...why do u like to make me blush and smile with such lovely comments 😆😳😳....hehe...😉... you know since I am such a big fan of ekta I had to make sure I did exactly how she does it...keep the story short and sweet and not drag it what so ever...😆😉😆 ... all said and done ... I never meant to offend anyone with my opps Gauri's comments on K-shows etc...😆 ...rather I should be a thankful b/c if there was no KAA I would not have put this fic here, and if I hadn't then I wouldn't have gotten to know awesome and beautiful people like you...who are so nice to take their time to encourage others.... 🤗🤗🤗...😃
Originally posted by: desi_chikita
brilliant...romantic...sweet....lovely....everything i would ever expect Shiv and Gauri's story to be...thank you for this loveley ff and i fervently hope that you start a new one soon....
love
desi 😃
Thank you for your the great encourangement ...🤗🤗 ...it makes all the time taken to write the parts worht-while 😃
Originally posted by: sum2005
happy ending ,at last shiv confessed his love,omg love at first sight 😳 .
chandhini ur ff is very very nice we had enjoyed it a lot,hope u will write new ff soon.
Yup, love at first sight 😉😳😳... who would have thought Gauri with her crazy hair and mishaps would have captrued Shiv's heart during their first encounter...😉.. 🤗
Originally posted by: JCluvs srk
omg! its over! 😭 😭 😭 how am i gonna live without looking forward 2 another update for this fic? man i'm gonna miss this sooo MUCH.....this was so beautiful.....one of my favorite stories ever.....i hope u dont mind if i print this story out n keep it with me will u? man i luved how u ended the fic with the title of the fic.....tat was very creative......hopefully i'll read mor of ur work in the future... 😉
I am soooooooo... I can't even find the word to express myself... you want to print it and keep it... OMG... I am really...touched! If you will miss reading the updates I will miss reading such lovely and beautiful comments... 😳...Thank you so much 🤗
Originally posted by: desi chic
Neetu tirely walks into her room and drops her bag on the blue carpet. She is thinking about her upcoming project, which is due pretty soon and lets out a wary sigh. Her eyes fall upon the computer and curiously, she sits before it. Upon clicking "login" into IF a smile dances upon her lips. She sees that her Chandu Rani has updated, and its as if the moon came out with the sun brightening her day. In a upsurge of excitement, she manages to click on the post and reads the latest entry's title... "Keeping the Moon..." Curiosity gets the better of her and her eyes start moving across and down the page. As the words register, her smile deepens... Her heartbeat starts to change rhymic patterns as though sitting on a rollercoaster ride. At some points, she finds herself getting up and yelling gleefully like a maniac, whereas others she can faintly hear her mother call from outside, "Neetu, what's so funny?!" As she approaches the end, her heart sinks at the "end"... Its as if everything just came tumbling down... The K-Shows come to her. How they seem to be never ending, and then a sigh escapes her lips... Why do good things always come to such a quick end? Now her lips purse in a pout and her arms cross in front of her. While in some strange moment, another langoorish smile slaps itself on her face... What if... What if she demands Chandu to write another one?!
Cheers,
dc
Now this is what I quality writing... you are just great with words ... you are just awesome... 👏 ... Neetu you should be the one writing the book and publishing it... your words just flow so beautifully and magically ... just lovely ...😃
Originally posted by: Iqbaladdict
omg Chandini, this was truly heartwarming end, Shiv was so so so so sweet, Gauri is head over heels for him and they sure do have that special spark that anyone in love needs, u have adorable thinking i will also keep ur advise in mind and am preety sure have been given by another before u, thank u so much for wonderful story and the sweet happy ending we all love to have, 👏
I read that advice somewhere myself... I think it was the library and it just stayed me with forever and then yesterday when I was writing the last part I was wow... it so fits here ... 😳 ... thank you so much for your encouragement through out... it really made everything worth while ...🤗🤗
Originally posted by: ash9
😭
u finished it 😕
im going to miss reading this FF a lot
this was i awesome gr8 mindblowing etc etc...........FFi hope u win in ff contest......
hope u write another 1 sooooooooon
😊
Thank you ... so much and please don't be sad... the entire point of Keeping the moon was to make everyone smile and happy ... now if you are sad... I will be sad... 😔 .... thanks for your wishes u are too sweet ...🤗🤗
Originally posted by: desi chic
Yeah... I'm back... I suppose I should've written something more than whatever spilled... 😳
Hum kaun hote hain tumhe kuch kehne waale,
Kehne ko kuch tumne choda hi nahin.
Hum kaun hote hain kuch bhi samajhne waale,
Samajhne ko kuch tumne choda hi nahin.
Hum kaun hote hain kuch chahne waale,
Chahne ko tumne kuch choda hi nahin.
Tumhaari ye adayein, tumhare ye bole...
Zara ye jalve, ek baar phir se toh khol.
Wow... ^^^^^^^^^ ... those lines were beautiful 😳
Chandu darling... You leave me speechless, yet I can't seem to not comment either. I know, its strange. 😳 Anyways, I started reading your ff a while back and to be honest, I would read one beginning and then I'd see the last "." and I'd feel like shiz... But today, I felt... like 😭😭 Nonetheless, I will not tell you to continue further as I think this is so apt an "ending", and no one could have done better than you. Young woman, when you reach the best-sellers status, please do not forget me. And like I've said before, I claim the first copy of the first book with an autograph.
👏👏👏
And, as I have hinted, I'm looking forward to another post from my Chandu Rani with something in regards to "ff" material. *HINT HINT*
*coughs*
Cheers,
dc
I think it should be the other way around... where you write a book and give me the first autographed copy of it... 😃 ... really Neetu, I have not read the entire Khamooshi ki zubaan still lagging way behind but I have to say... it is just... too good for words.... I am planning to catch up to it soon tho... I will have to do what sugu did... read it all in one go staying up till four....😳 ...
Originally posted by: sughra2
mai kya kahuu neetu...i feel as if u snatched the word out of my mouth...but phir bhi hum kuch alag sa likheyngei par wahii dukh jo aapnei mahsoos kiya chaanduu ke ff ke khatam honei mei aur wahi aarzoo ki chaanduu ek aur ff likhei...
I never read any ff's ...but i read urs full yesterday...and i told u that i finished it at 4:00 am yesterday...and rite now the clock struck to 4:00 am again...yesterday this time was too luckky for me and today the very next day this time had brought such an unluck yaar....i reallyy am very very very thankfullll to u for writing such a beautiful,fantastic,superb,lovely,awesome,gr8,humorous,roman tic,lovely,and one of the best ever i read ff....it is a sad moment to see one of mine favourite ff ending...but it also brings a hope to see the next one...which i am not gonna miss once part of... ..once again chanduu i want u to know how much i love ur ff!!......thanx alot yaaaaaaaaar!!!...see i am wishing for the moon as u said...and i dont want to land on stars but be as lucky as u and reach on the moon which is to get ur next equally lovely ff soon!!
Once again thanxxxxxxxxxx alot for such a wonderfull ff!!👏
Mission accomplished... as long as you can dream big you will achieve big too... haha.. but I won't bore you with long speeches about that like I do my co-workers 🤔... haha anything to slack off *cough* *cough* 😉... if you loved my ff I loved your comments🤗... If you will miss reading it... I will miss writing it... really reading all your comments has made me a little sad too... cuz now I won't be able to sit down and get into Gauri mode and just type as things keep poping up....but its okay... because I will have all the sweet comments and encouragements as a memory to cherish forever...😃 ...🤗
Originally posted by: Numera*
OMG GIRL THAT WAS AWESOME!! Do u ahve any idea how great of an ending that was? I loveddddddddd it!!! this was by far one of my most favorite ff's ever!!!! continue with ak one soon plz!! and plz start a new one!!!
Thank you so much ....🤗... I don't know about how great it was... but I do know how great it is to get such a response... it really humbles me to know that I have been able to give you something you enjoyed... it means a lot to me...🤗
Originally posted by: rupi b
Hi,
I have to say that i loved your fanfic it was absolutly a perfect mix of romance and wittyness lol😃 but i am really sad that it has ended. But i just have to say great job and plzzzzz write another fanfic and pm me if u do
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz you are an awsome writer and seriously should write a book!! i love your writing style i could read this fic over and over and not even get bored too good 👏
-Rupi😃(eagerily awaiting another fan fic!)
Thank you Rupi, I am so happy that you have enjoyed my fic so much... when i started writing I just wanted to make everyone smile... and it makes so happy to know I did that 🤗 ...if I do write another fic... I will make sure to pm you...after all your comments are so wonderful... I would be doing it for my own selfish reasons..😆😳😳...
Originally posted by: *guesswho*
oh how romantic!!! you always leave me with smile on face...how do I go about and do aero hw now...grrr I just wanna sit here and read it over and over again and pretend that you are not ending it and this story will go on forever...hmmmphhh...well anyhooo I did love the end but can't help being sad that it is the "ending"...I am going to miss this ff...it was my favorite one...well please do write another one so I can have more happy days...I know talk about being selfish...but 👏 👏 👏 for you
Like I have said before... you have no idea how happy it makes me to know that I was able to make someone smile because of my story... it is the best ever...🤗... well the story is going to go on... b/c we are all special just as Gauri is and we deserve to be treated just as she was will lots of love, respect, care and adoration... and nothing less... we won't settle for anything less than the moon...😉 ...am I getting too emotional? Ya... I think so... I already got kicked out of my co-workers room for wasting his time with long lectures about life...😆😳😳...so here I am typing away...b/c I can't be kicked out here... Or can? 🤔 ....
Originally posted by: Shezaadi
OMG!!! that is a magnificently wonderful FF!!!!!!
I haven't read it from the start... I actually read only like some chapters back, all today (my eyes are kinda messed up now) lol but gosh that was rly rly rly rly rly good!!! 👏 👏 👏
I can't believe I only found this FF today n it has ended!
But I must congrtulate you on a very well written story... and Ending! 👏
I loved it! 👏 👏 👏
I actually scanned through it for the FF awards... but it seemed very good so I came back to read it...
n now I'm gonna have to read it from the start!
I loved how you included both comedy and romance in your story!
Definately a job well done! 👏 👏 👏
I will be waiting for your next story... 😉
-Areej 😉
Thank you 🤗... oh, even I was going through the fic awards... and need to catch on the other fan-fics myself... I really wish we had 48 hrs a day... 24 hrs for regular-boring-mustdo-annoying stuff...and 24 for reading fan-fics on KAA... they are so wonderfully put together it really amazes me that so much talent on the forum... yet "certain" shows suffer from the lack of Kreativeness...🤔
Originally posted by: shivgauri
urs is the best fanfic i have read so far!!!u did an awesome job with it 👏 i will miss ur fanfic 😭 , i thouht u will have a part were shiv is watchin K-soaps with gauri 😳 !!!
this was just fabulous!!!!loved it!!!great job 👏 👏 👏
😆😆😆... Shiv and Gauri watching K-shows together.. can you imagine Gauri totally engrossed and Shiv totally and uterly confused.... "but I thought the one that looks 20 years old was the grandmother!" Shiv asked in a frustrated tone. "O gosh Shiv keep up, for the last time, after the 20 year leap, no one dies or ages, only new people are added... the one that looks like a 20 year old is actually a great grandmother and is actually 120! and after one turns hundred they start all over again and that is why she looks 20 years old! isn't it obious!" Do I have to teach him everything! ... 😉
Originally posted by: kaira
aww such an awesome ending 👏 it was a superb fanfic !!i really luved it 😳 😳 😊
Thank you 🤗... if it is awesome for one and only reasons your lovely and truly encouraging comments ... 🤗🤗
Originally posted by: Jenna Dutt
Oh Chandni, it was absolutely magnificent ending........luved it, but I am so sad that it ended so soon.....I luked forwarded to reading it everyday, but I am sure that you will continue to pen down your wonderful imangination and that too very soon.....brilliant job darling........this is for you.... 👏
cheers.
Thank you 🤗... I am happy because you liked it so much... I am sad b/c even I used to look forward to reading all the comments... so I guess there is only one solution like you said... pen down another one... 😆😆😆.... 🤗
Originally posted by: prab_rockinn
wonderful end.............
it was so thoughtful of shiv to yet keep that shirt yet.........
any girl wud fall for him!!!!!
🤗
thank you soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much
i'll miss this ff for sure 😭
you know the shirt was suppose to come out the day when Gauri woke up wearing Shiv's shirt but somehow it totally slipped my mind and I didnt' put it in... but I guess it worked for the best as it came up at the end as a proof of his love at first sight...😉..😳😳 .... Thank you so much for your encouragment 🤗
Originally posted by: Catwoman
This is my first in such a wonderful Forum!!!
I have been reading you FF and have just caught up!!
You took us all on a wonderful ride!!!
Thank You!!!
KAT
Thank you 🤗... thanks for taking time and reading it... it really means a lot to me... 😃 ... 🤗🤗
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