FF: Keeping the moon... END PART- Pg 77

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Diya

@PassionsKaSh

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Posted: 18 years ago

#551

ohhh ur ff is sooo sweet...really good!!
hehe...pregnet when u kiss... 😆 😆 😆
girls dont kiss ur boyfriends, u will get pregnet!!! lol
shivy tell gauri that u love her!!!plzzzzzzzz

cont soon........

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Jenna Dutt

@Jenna Dutt

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Posted: 18 years ago

#552

Chandani, what a sweet update.....luved it.
Keep it up darling.

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Roop

@Rock_Star

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Posted: 18 years ago

#553

yes i am so happy that gauri got know that shiv loves her😊.....can't wait for the next part

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JCluvs srk

@JCluvs srk

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Posted: 18 years ago

#554

man its bout time we find out wat shiv feels. cant wait 4 the next part..... 😉 u kno....when shiv n gauri r alone

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desi chic

@desi chic

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Posted: 18 years ago

#555

My Chandu Rani,

Did I ever tell you... Tussi great ho soniyo!! 👏 👏

You have immense talent young lady... Please, do compile your beautiful writings into a book one day. I claim the first with an autograph! I can read and re-read this over and over and never get bored...

Shiv is in love with Gauri... Now why doesn't that surprise me? Who can not love such a character?! 😳 And Mr.Perfect... who could not love him?? 😳

Thanks for the amazing read and keep them coming!!

Cheers,
dc

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139271

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Posted: 18 years ago

#556

awesome 👏 just great!!!pls continue soon!!!don'tmake us wait too long 😳

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Spandana

@*Spandana*

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Posted: 18 years ago

#557

hi chandu, thanks for updating it. and awesome work buddy. liked the part how u changed the same lines, once used to tease gauri, to make shiv fall for her.😳😳😳

this time i am going to edit this post when ever i feel like adding more😆

Edited by yamulya1 - 18 years ago

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kaira11

@kaira11

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Posted: 18 years ago

#558

omg..shiv luves her !!!waoooww !!!! 😳 superb part 👏 continue soon

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jiya imdad

@jiya imdad

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Posted: 18 years ago

#559

Chandini!! ur such a sweetheart darling!! *mwaaah*🤗

this part was a pleasant surprise 😍 , didn't even think that shiv being an attitude man would ever confesss his love 4 gauri in front of anyone 😳

and poor gauri thought that he was making fun off her , thanks to shashank n ipshita otherwise gauri would have filled the buckets with her tears for no reason 🤣 🤣

aawww! poor shiv was soo worried about her 😳 😳 n i can't imagine shiv kapoor getting nervous to meet gauri as he thinks she is mad over him, Man!! where did his confidence n attitude go???

when ipshita said that shiv isn't okay n he is sending them 1 by 1 to see if gauri is ok it sounded soo cute 😳 , he's soo adorable 😳 😳

can't wait 4 the next part , don't take too long
continue soon 😃

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139271

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Posted: 18 years ago

#560

Originally posted by: Saregama_fan

Thank you...😃.... I don't want you to be upset......read the new part and it might have something to cheer you up..😉

ofcourse u did☺️😍

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