FF: Keeping the moon... END PART- Pg 77 - Page 60

Chaand u left me speechless , when i read the last part it made me jump off my chair with excitement, that was soo unexcepted. When i saw the title i was actually sad that u ended it 😔 . Yeah ur right!! i actually expected shiv to have a romantic candlelight dinner with gauri n then take her to the dance floor and then confess his feelings in a typical style."Now! have u ever been typical? No!"
The way u made shiv confess his feelings was just wonderful n damn adorable 😳. What? shiv fell in love with her when he first saw her 😲 it was actually "love at first sight" 😵 i definitely didn't expect that it was a complete shocker for me atleast, but i just loved the way he confessed it 😳 it was soo damn romantic 😍 . He kept that shirt with him aawwwww!! how cute ❤️
thanku soo much for writing such a wonderful fanfic 🤗
It was a pleasure to read ur creative work 😃 u might not publish it but i m going to do it through my printer for myself only 😆 so that i could read it over n over again 😳
do consider ur decision to write another ff , would be looking forward to it 😍

Dudette u ended it, noooooooo! that was a fantastic ff overall, loved every part!!!
start another as u have a gift and should not let it go to waste.

*****nazu stands up n claps for chandni n her awesome ff***** i read it this morning b4 i left for my classes....i felt soo bad n happy at the same time....happy coz shiv expressed his luv sooo beautifully n innocently....it just touched my heart.... 😳 👏 👏 n sad 😭 ohhhhh how im gonna live widout ur ff?!!!! i luved it sooo much...i waited eagerly for u to update.....n i used to smile..blush ....get emotional all by my self when i used to think abt ur ff.....i'll really miss it hun.... 😭 😭 😭 thaank u sooo much for writing this ff.....u filled my life wid joy n excitement which i thought i lost after i left watching kaa 😭 😭
awesome ending hun....shiv was one lil sweeetheart....i wonder was dadajiz promise the main reason why shiv got married to gauri?!!! sweety i can write pages after pags...i can write one whole essay...one thesis on how awesome, mindblowing, outstanding, fantastic, romantic, heartwarming, astounding..etc etc etc ur ff was..... 👏 👏 👏 kudos to u my swwet frnd.....itz been a wonderful journey....im going to treasure this ff 😃 love u 🤗

Originally posted by: Saregama_fan

😆😆😆... Shiv and Gauri watching K-shows together.. can you imagine Gauri totally engrossed and Shiv totally and uterly confused.... "but I thought the one that looks 20 years old was the grandmother!" Shiv asked in a frustrated tone. "O gosh Shiv keep up, for the last time, after the 20 year leap, no one dies or ages, only new people are added... the one that looks like a 20 year old is actually a great grandmother and is actually 120! and after one turns hundred they start all over again and that is why she looks 20 years old! isn't it obious!" Do I have to teach him everything! ... 😉

thank you so much🤗 i am really gonna miss ur fanfic alot😭😭!!

Originally posted by: koolaries4

oh gosh.. tht was one of the best ff i ve read ever.. just amazin.g... awesome, original, creative n mind blowing..keep it uup mate n doo start another one...

Thank you so much for reading it, enjoying it and encouraging me ... 🤗

Originally posted by: Rock_Star

what a perfect ending 👏....i am going to miss this fanfic so much....everyday in school i logged in just to check if you have updated the fanfic...your fanfic had everything that real story should have....i hope you write another soon 😊

Thank you so much... I am going to miss all your comments that I used to check first thing after turning the comp on...😳...🤗

Originally posted by: jiya imdad

Chaand u left me speechless , when i read the last part it made me jump off my chair with excitement, that was soo unexcepted. When i saw the title i was actually sad that u ended it 😔 . Yeah ur right!! i actually expected shiv to have a romantic candlelight dinner with gauri n then take her to the dance floor and then confess his feelings in a typical style."Now! have u ever been typical? No!"
The way u made shiv confess his feelings was just wonderful n damn adorable 😳. What? shiv fell in love with her when he first saw her 😲 it was actually "love at first sight" 😵 i definitely didn't expect that it was a complete shocker for me atleast, but i just loved the way he confessed it 😳 it was soo damn romantic 😍 . He kept that shirt with him aawwwww!! how cute ❤️
thanku soo much for writing such a wonderful fanfic 🤗
It was a pleasure to read ur creative work 😃 u might not publish it but i m going to do it through my printer for myself only 😆 so that i could read it over n over again 😳
do consider ur decision to write another ff , would be looking forward to it 😍

Thank you. ....😃 ... u have no idea how happy it makes me to know that you enjoyed my fic enough to be able to read it again... 🤗 ... yup it was love at first sight...expect Shiv just didn't figure out till later ..😉... you know how guys are a little slow when it comes to such things...😆... but ya he kept the shirt...😳😳...'pyar ki nishani' ... and plus it had Gauri's hardwork on it...😉😆

Originally posted by: ixi-shaj

Dudette u ended it, noooooooo! that was a fantastic ff overall, loved every part!!!
start another as u have a gift and should not let it go to waste.

hehe...😳...had to end it ...b/c I really had not thought the story any further so if I had continued u would have found out how wrong things can go when you drag things... oh wait a minute we already witness that ...everday... with certain tv shows... 😆 ... j/k 😳😳

Originally posted by: nazrinkhan

*****nazu stands up n claps for chandni n her awesome ff***** i read it this morning b4 i left for my classes....i felt soo bad n happy at the same time....happy coz shiv expressed his luv sooo beautifully n innocently....it just touched my heart.... 😳 👏 👏 n sad 😭 ohhhhh how im gonna live widout ur ff?!!!! i luved it sooo much...i waited eagerly for u to update.....n i used to smile..blush ....get emotional all by my self when i used to think abt ur ff.....i'll really miss it hun.... 😭 😭 😭 thaank u sooo much for writing this ff.....u filled my life wid joy n excitement which i thought i lost after i left watching kaa 😭 😭
awesome ending hun....shiv was one lil sweeetheart....i wonder was dadajiz promise the main reason why shiv got married to gauri?!!! sweety i can write pages after pags...i can write one whole essay...one thesis on how awesome, mindblowing, outstanding, fantastic, romantic, heartwarming, astounding..etc etc etc ur ff was..... 👏 👏 👏 kudos to u my swwet frnd.....itz been a wonderful journey....im going to treasure this ff 😃 love u 🤗

Oh Nazu... are you trying to make me faint now...with such lovely comments... 😳😳😳 ... even I am sad b/c even I will miss all your comments and love... but ... but ... but... perhaps another fic and we could be back...😃 ...did Shiv marry Gauri cuz of Dadaji's promise or something else...hmmm.... well let's see... he married her cuz of the promise but fell in love with her cuz of her ...😉 ...Nazu thanks for all the encouragment you gave through your comments... it was just wonderful...🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: yamulya1

madamji, where is the cake.😆 did u eat the whole cake.😆

Cake 😳😳😳 ....here is a piece just for you....😃.... mmmmmm

Originally posted by: shivgauri

thank you so much🤗 i am really gonna miss ur fanfic alot😭😭!!

u r welcome 🤗 ..and dont' be sad...here is a BIG hug 🤗

Originally posted by: sadsunzarsum

wicked ending 👏 times 10000000000

Thank you... a thousand times...😃🤗

thank u for ur brillant ff 👏 , so sad to see it's ended 😭 .

u kept us on the egde of our seats, well actually falling off our seats because i fell off laughing so hard at every stage!! 😆 i have bruises to prove it! it mixed a whole range of emotions, ur comments, n relating it all to k-soaps jus a gr8 format n so sweet.

i'll def be printing this one off to re-read!!!

but pls continue to write more ff's 😃 😃

ta.

continue with a-k one soon plz!!