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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: prab_rockinn

hmmm..... kahani main naya twist.....

nice.....wats happenin next?????


he he he... thank you😳!!!

Originally posted by: Catwoman

KUKU ....what a drama 👏 👏 👏


he he he he I have no idea how I am gonna make everything alrite!!

Originally posted by: Jenna Dutt

WOW! now another mystery around the baby Shiv-Gauri adopted 😉
Keep it up darling, jhatke pe jhatka. 😆


thank you😃!!!

Originally posted by: tweetylicious

ahhh...i cant wait, plz update soon... 😳


will try to update today😳

Originally posted by: gujibabe

great part!!!
continue soon plz!!!
😊


thank you so much!!!will try to update today😳

Originally posted by: ash9



well kuku..nw u knw who is nt going to get the invitation card for my wedding😛
im soo nt going to introduce u to my hubby...😉😛😛

thts his bade bhai yaar..leave him alone...but u forgot to talk abt 1 issue
abt Karthikeya????? he is suppose to confess tht he stole their baby...u forgot tht😕 hw could u??😛


😆 who told u tht I need an invitation to come for ur wedding😈???
when did Abhimanyu steal Karthikeya???? And Who told u tht Karthikeya is ShivGauri's son????😆😆😆yeah maybe... maybe not😉!!!

kuku


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Posted: 18 years ago
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ShivGauri Part 34

Kapoor Mansion

Everyones sitting there.
Dadaji: What is all this Mahen?
Gauri: Bade Papa, pls aap kuch tho kahe?
Nikhila: I will tell u all everything.

Nikhila: Mahen, Alpana, Maya and I used to study in the same college. Mahen and Alpana loved each other, and Alpana and I used to be best friends. But then...(Nikhila looks at Maya)
Maya who looked really guilty, continues: I never liked bhai's relation with Alpana, so I started creating such situations, so that Alpana wud think that there is something between bhai and bhabhi. And Alpana believed whtever I wanted her to believe, and she broke up with bhai and left.
Nikhila: Meanwhile, my father also heard these stories, and he fell ill, and to save him, I had no other option other than to marry Mahen. So Mahen and I decided to get married and once Dad got fine, we wud get a divorce, but then slowly, slowly we fell in love.
Mahen with tears in his eyes: But I never knew Alpana was pregnant. And I....(Mahen bursts out crying, Nikhila goes to him and tries to console him.)
Mahen: Abhimanyu is my son and he hates me and he thinks tht I cheated his mother, but u know that is not the truth??
Nikhila: I know Mahen, I know... we will make him understand!!!
Shiv just looks at them for sometime, then says: I will call the police station and remove all charges on him.
Shiv proceeds to make the call. After Shiv was done on the phone.
Shiv: I did that only for u Dad, not because I consider him as my brother!!!

Later, Shiv gets a call on his cell.
Shiv: Hello
Abhimanyu: Hey Shiv!!!
Shiv: Abhimanyu?
Abhimanyu: Yup!!thats ri8!!Abhimanyu Sehgal!!! Where r u Shiv??? Aren't u coming here to find out who got the project?? Mujhe nahi patha tha, ki tum ek kayar ho jo apne haar nahi dekh sakti.
Shiv: Shut up!!!
Abhimanyu starts laughing: Sach hamesha kadvi hothe hai!!!
Shiv really pissed: I am coming.

Sometime later in Kapoor Mansion. Gauri's cell starts ringing.
Gauri: Hello?
Abhimanyu: Hi Gauri!!! Abhimanyu here.
Gauri really angry: Mujhe aap se koi baath nahi karni!!!
Abhimanyu: Teekay baath math karo, jo mein kehra hi hoon, sirf woh suno!!! Tum Taj Hotel mein ajao!!! Karthi ko lekar!!! Warna mein Karthi ko tum sabse cheenkar jaonga aur tum sab sirf dekhthe rehjaongi.
Abhimanyu cuts the call.

Later at Taj Hotel, in the conference room.
Shiv is sitting, and Abhimanyu was sitting across him and he was smirking at Shiv.
Man: Ladies and gantle man, it gives me great pleasure to announce to u, which company got the project. The best amount was quoted by SK Industries!!!
Shiv looks at them in shock and then at Abhimanyu, and Abhimanyu looks at him.
Man: Congratulations Mr Shiv Kapoor!!!

Pls comment guys!!! I know it was silly and boring update!!!I hope Mahen-Alpana-Nikhila story did make some sense, and Nikhila accepting Abhimanyu being Mahen's son without any question, 'coz she knew abt Mahen and Alpana relation and she also knows tht Mahen only loves her now. So no questions abt insecurities and she also knows that Alpana is now married, so lets just say, she has no issues😕😳!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
i dnt care abt nikhila right nw..i want to kwn abt tht kid
hey dnt tell me tht kid belong to sum1 else nw..
with u..anything is possible i think
u plan to apply for a job under ekta??? u cn give her sum tips 😆 😆 😆
kuku i will tell u tht im married 5 yrs after i get married
by tht time u wont find a single kid to name after your karthikeya 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
great part!!!
continue soon plz!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
i cant wait for the next update...plz continue soon...cant wait... 😳 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ash9

i dnt care abt nikhila right nw..i want to kwn abt tht kid
hey dnt tell me tht kid belong to sum1 else nw..
with u..anything is possible i think
u plan to apply for a job under ekta??? u cn give her sum tips 😆 😆 😆
kuku i will tell u tht im married 5 yrs after i get married
by tht time u wont find a single kid to name after your karthikeya 😛


he he he he the kid cud very well be Abhimanyu's😈!!!
I am sure Kat will have a party here for ur wedding,then I will know😃!!!!

Originally posted by: gujibabe

great part!!!
continue soon plz!!!
😊


thank you!!! Will try to update soon😃

Originally posted by: tweetylicious

i cant wait for the next update...plz continue soon...cant wait... 😳 😃


I will try my best to update today itself😃
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: shivgauri


he he he he the kid cud very well be Abhimanyu's😈!!!
I am sure Kat will have a party here for ur wedding,then I will know😃!!!!



im going to come after u if by any chance u do somthing like that
tht kid belong to shiv n gauri n THTS IT....got it😈

good point...kat going to come after u..cos nw both of u r in the same list😆
that name is awful..n since its kats idea in the 1st place😆
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ash9



im going to come after u if by any chance u do somthing like that
tht kid belong to shiv n gauri n THTS IT....got it😈

good point...kat going to come after u..cos nw both of u r in the same list😆
that name is awful..n since its kats idea in the 1st place😆


Okay I have decided the kid is Abhimanyu's!!!!😈
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Posted: 18 years ago
kuku....im going to killlllllllllllll u 😡
tht kid belong to shiv n gauri.. thts it
pretty please 😆

k k ...*sigh* fine..happy nw??? 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ShivGauri Part 35

A shocked Shiv walks up to sign the contract, and after he signs and turns back and finds Abhimanyu missing. Shiv comes out and sees Abhimanyu standing with Gauri and Karthi. Shiv gets shocked seeing Gauri there. He goes to Gauri.

Shiv: Gauri, wht r u doing here?
Gauri: He asked me to come here.
Shiv turns to Abhimanyu and kinda confused and angry: What r u trying to do?
Abhimanyu: We can't talk here. U both follow me.
Saying this he walks off and gets in his car and drives off, ShivGauri follows him in his car. In the car Gauri tells him abt Abhimanyu's call and Shiv tells her abt he winning the contract.Abhimanyu stops his car in some hilly area, and gets out of the car and ShivGauri also gets out of there.

Shiv: U knew wht I was quoting, then ......
Before Shiv cud continue Abhimanyu cuts in: U r my brother.
Shiv looks at him in shock.
Abhimanyu continues: My Dad had told me tht, I can do whtever I want to be No.1 in business, but never do something that will make me a failure as a human being. So even if u were not my brother then also I wudn't have back stabbed u.
Shiv: Then wht abt wht u did to us?
Abhimanyu:Actually I called u both here, because I wanted to tell u both the truth.
Shiv: What truth?
Abhimanyu: I didn't come here to get the property or take revenge. Actually whtever happened between my mother and UR father was my mother's mistake. Mere Mom ne tumhare Dad ke pyaar par ungli uttayi jab kammi tho unke pyaar mein thi. unke pyaar itni kamsoor thi ki, ek theesre ko usne apne aur apne pyaar ke beech ane diya.
Shiv confused: Tum yeh sab...
Abhimanyu: yeah my parents had told me everything. Actually after my mother left here, and when she finally realized her mistake and came back, that time ur Dad had married ur mom and my mother didn't want to create more problems for ur Dad and she left, and she met my Dad and then she fell in love with him and married him.
Shiv: Why do u keep saying My Dad? Isn't he ur Dad too?
Abhimanyu: No!!!! I have only one father, and tht is Arjun Sehgal. (he starts smiling) Akhir Abhimanyu tho Arjun ke bete hai na?
Shiv: Alrite!!! If u didn't have anything to do with MY father then y did u come home?
Abhimanyu: For you!!!
Shiv shocked: ME???
Abhimanyu: I will tell u everything. One day my mother called me up to tell me that Palak was arrested for murder, and I came here. (he shrugs) After all she is my sister.
Shiv looks at Gauri, one look at Shiv and Gauri knew that even now Shiv really cared for Abhimanyu. She holds his hand in a way to support him.
Abhimanyu: But when I came here I found out that Palak was proved innocent by u and Gauri. And then I found out that Gauri lost her baby, so I went to the hospital, i was gonna come and meet u both as Alpana Sehgal's son only,but when I was passing infront of the doctors room. I overheard him talking on the phone.


***************FLASHBACK***************
Doctor on the phone: I can't kill the baby. It's one thing to abort a baby, but to kill a baby is a murder.
Abhimanyu was abt to walk off, when suddenly
Doctor: If Shiv Kapoor finds out abt it,then he will kill me.
Abhimanyu stops there and listens to the conversation.
Doctor after sometime: Alrite.
Doctor keeps the phone and Abhimanyu walks in, and he pulls the doctor by his collar.
Abhimanyu: Who was on the phone???
Doctor: Who are u???
Abhimanyu picks up the pen knife lying on the table and puts it ri8 in front of the doctor's ri8 eye.: Just answer my question!!!
Doctor: I don't know.
Abhimanyu gonna stab him,
Doctor: Pls believe me I really don't know who was on the phone. I will tell u everything.
Abhimanyu: Okay start talking.
Doctor: Few months back, some1 called me and told me that I have to tell Mrs Shiv Kapoor that if she continues her pregnancy then it will be dangerous to her and to ask her to abort the baby, and he gave 10 lakhs for it. But then Gauri didn't abort the baby, and then that man called again and said that there was no need for it. But then today he called again and told me that Shiv Kapoor will be bringing in Gauri here, and I shud tell them that the baby didn't survive. When I refused to do it, he blackmailed me saying that he had recorded our previous conversation, and forced me to act as if there was some complication in Gauri's delivery and tell them tht baby didn't survive. And I did that, and then he called again now and asked me to kill the baby. Thts all I know.
Abhimanyu: How did he give u the money?
Doctor: Some1 had kept the money in my car.
Abhimanyu: Do u have any idea who the guy is?
Doctor: no sir..... all I know is that this person is from Shiv Kapoor's house only.
Abhimanyu shocked: How do u know that?
Doctor: He said that he doesn't want Gauri Kapoor's child in his house.
Abhimanyu: Okay U have to do wht I ask u to do.
Doctor: Anything u say,
Abhimanyu:Then the next time he calls, tell him that u killed the baby.
Doctor: Okay.
Abhimanyu: Okay, then where is the baby?
**************END OF FLASHBACK**************

ShivGauri were looking at Abhimanyu in shock. Both of them had tears rolling down their eyes.
Abhimanyu: Karthi is ur baby only.

PPls comment guys!!! hope this was good enough!!! And ash the baby is ShivGauri's... u happy?😉


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