Mini FF: Unshed Tears...(Completed)

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Sanjana

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Posted: 18 years ago

#21

Sareeta di, u have done it again,

u r a magnificent writer, poet, and etc
😳 😳
OMG what wil shiv do now?????????

i am dying to see what will happen!!

please cont soon!!!

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Nazrin

@Nazrin

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Posted: 18 years ago

#22

mindblowing 👏 i wish monday goes like this with some intimate moments of shiv n guari 😳 but monday seems so far....i might die in between!!!!

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Aakriti Mehta

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Posted: 18 years ago

#23

Wow!! di..

its amazing!!

please do continue!!

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Sareeta

@sareeta

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Posted: 18 years ago

#24

Continuation: Part 4:

Shiv reaches the outhouse... where Alok Ji is looking depressed and teary eyed confesses to Maasima..."Maine kabhi nahin socha tha... ki main apne haaton apni bacchi ko is nark mein dhakeldoonga...meri bacchi ne kisi ka kuch nahin bigada...aur ye log...." when he stops mid sentence... hearing kaya say ..."Jiju?"

Turning around, they see Shiv standing at the entrance... eyes downcast and raises his head to face Alok Ji, when he says... "Ab kya kehna hai.. tumhe Shiv.... meri bacchi ki jaaan ki ahuti to le li gayi hai na? "... unable to control his tears...."Maine tumhe apna beta maana... kitna galat tha main.... "... when Maasima stops him.. realizing Shiv wanted to say something... but was silent...

"Kya kehna hai beta...." She asks...

Maasima... somehow earlier confesses to kaya that she is finding it hard to believe that Shiv can be wrong...saying "Maine uski aankhon mein sacchayi dekhi hai... baat kuch aur hai beta... par .."..

Shiv now looking at Maasima, and then at Alok Ji.... in a soft voice...says..."Maine shaadi , na chaahte hue ki... , main divorce chaahta tha... par kabhi samajh nahin paaya....ki chaahte hue bhi, main divorce le kyon nahin paaya.... ye meri kismat thi....Gauri se shaadi karke , maine shaayad apni nazron mein galati ki thi.... par Gauri se maine seekha bhi hai... rishton ke maayine ... unki kadar karna ... sach ka saath dena ... Jo shaadi maine majboori mein ki... use Gauri apna kismat maanti hai... mujhpar yakeen karti hai....main uske yakeen ke saaath aur khilvaad nahin karna chaahta...." "Uske us vishwaas ke liye... main ek mauka chaahta hoon, uski khushiyaan waaapas lautaane ..." " jus one chance....Please...." .pausing..."Baba..."

Alok ji.. still furious... gets emotional and a emotional conversation ensues between him and Shiv, with Shiv revealing all that happened and after what seemed an endless conversation... Alok ji finally looks convinced... "Theek hai... Apni beti ke khaatir, uske vishwaas ke khaatir, main tumhaare saath hoon... Maine tumpe pehle vishwaas kiya hai beta.... aur aaj mera dil maanne ko tayyar nahin ki tum meri beti saath khilvaad karoge... maine tumhaari aankhon.. uske ke liye paravaaah dekhi hai.. aur usi parvah ke khaatir... main tumhaare saath doonga....par tumhaare maata pita ne jo kiya wo maafi ke laayak nahin hai..." patting shiv on his shoulder... as a teary eyed Shiv... hugs Alok Ji... on a spur.. breaking down as he hugs him... leaving Alok Ji.. perplexed... but nevertheless.. he pats Shiv back on his shoulder... "Shiv.. beta... " but pauses ...realizing... Shiv needed to... breakdown... jus pats him...

Edited by sareeta - 18 years ago