Mini FF: Unshed Tears...(Completed) - Page 5

I seriously have tears in my eyes, I can just picture Shiv and Gauri here!

Thank u Sareeta, u r awesome yaar!

Continuation: Part 7:

Turning slowly towards him, she faces him, looking him in the eye, the same emptiness... in her eyes... as Shiv looks back at her,.... and unable to hold on, closes his eyes shut as another tear escapes his

eye...

Not realizing the moments that passed by , he stood there his eyes closed... when suddenly , he felt a warmth over his cheek, a warm touch, when he slowly opened his eyes , to see her wiping the tear on his cheek... looking at him...and he looks back at her, perplexed and pained at her gentle gesture... completely aware that despite all, she cared.... as her drowns deeper in guilt, tears flowing down his cheeek... as she continues to wipe them gently....

"Gauri....."... in a choking , almost halting voice...
She looks up at him, into his eyes, not once , looking away, slowly bringing her hand down...... as her voice echoes in his head "aapki di hui khushi.. mujhse sambhalti nahin....","kaise insaan hai aap...", "aaap bahut acche....hain..."...

Slowly...in a soft voice..

"Main... yeh shaadi....", pausing... and finally..."Gauri... yeh shaadi, tumhaare saath ek dhoka tha... tumhaari zindagi ke saath.... aur main... kuch kar nahin paaya....main accha insaan nahin hoon Gauri... Please understand.... I tried... You dont deserve this... tum deserve nahin karti....yeh sab... Gauri..... main tumhaare yakeeen ke laaayak nahin hoon ... Gauri... jus... please...." unable to continue... he closes his eyes, pursing his lips, looking away.... and after a moment... determined...looks back at her... as Gauri gaze follows his face...

"Gauri, I want to see you happy... aur jo main tumhaari khushi ka kaaaran kabhi nahin ban paaonga... I can't ... I can never be.....", perplexed at his own self, why it was killing him... and as the words he wishes to say, fail him, tearing him apart, he unaware of it all.. of his emotions , of the sudden pain..."We ... "... ..."Gauri.... hum... saath nahin reh sakte..."...."Div..." he breaks away... turning towards the window, closing his eyes....breaks down..."I am sorry......."......

Gauri looks at him, the emptiness in her eyes , gone, a lone tear threatens to breakaway as she looks at him... his eyes downcast... looking out of the window.... only the sound of the breeze through the curtains swaying against the window panes... the silence echoing their painful cries... of her shattered dreams, of his guilt... of their untouched dream... that stands threatned ...

.............

..... let me catch my breath first .....

..... I'll try and find the words later ....

... breath-taking...

dc

Wow Sareeta, u have me going now, really really nice yaar! I'm crying also! 😭 😭

Its beautiful.... poetic almost, but that shud be expected given ur daily poems... And I like the fact that u update frequently! Thanks for writing something so moving... 👏

Originally posted by: desi chic

.............

..... let me catch my breath first .....

..... I'll try and find the words later ....

... breath-taking...

dc

U ok DC, now when u updating yours...me too choking yaar!

Originally posted by: queenkumar

U ok DC, now when u updating yours...me too choking yaar!

Di hasn't left me ok... kya writing hai... I'm completely speechless... immobile... in complete and utter awe and admiration...

Haha... Lol, mujhe maaloom tah aap zaroor poochoge!!😆 I'm working on it now and will try and have it up by tomorrow at the latest!!

Cheers,

dc

Too good Sareeta!
Please update!
👏

OK DC, I will be waiting, u leave me hanging all the time, it is so good! Kya writing hai aap ke bhi.

Originally posted by: queenkumar

OK DC, I will be waiting, u leave me hanging all the time, it is so good! Kya writing hai aap ke bhi.

😆 Aap bhi na!!

Don't worry, I won't keep you waiting too long... mujhe dande nahin khaane!!😆jk... You're too sweet.😳

Cheers,

dc