(FF)Agni Parikhsha~(UPDATED) Part6=Page14 - Page 9

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Posted: 18 years ago
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what yaar it is like preview not like update.......we want a long update that too not in font size........
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Posted: 18 years ago
#82
very short update yaar!!!!!!
make it long next time!!!


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Posted: 18 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: prab_rockinn

very short update yaar!!!!!! soweeeeeeeeeeeeee...will surely make it longer next time...sorry
make it long next time!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
#84
nice to see you updating your story Metoubearcrazy, waiting for the next part, hopefully you will make it longer and not tease us with the little snippets... 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#85
we waited n waited n when finally bit was there it iis soooooooooooooo short not fair metou 😭 😭 😭 gauri told she wonn't marry but poor girl doesn't know dat shiv hi uski hathon ki laakiron mein hai 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#86
👏 👏 👏 please continue soon............ 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey everyone...i am back with part six of my fanfic, hopefully you are enjoying it and will continue to do so in the future😃 this tie it will definitely be longer as many of you said the last one was very short😳
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PART SIX

Kaya is shocked to hear this thinks to herself gauri di must be really hurt...she feels really sad and just leaves from there. meanwhile shiv says to gauri that i no you have only refused to this marriage because i have asked you to but you are still very hurt...please forgive me. gauri says its ok and as long as he is happy now but she asks him "before i leave, i just want to knwo why you refused to this marriage. if your grandparents want to see you married, then its all the more reason that you say yes...whay did you refuse shiv?" shiv pauses and then hesitates...he says "because...because...because i love someone else. yes, i love someone whomy family does not know about yet" gauri is silently crying telling shiv to be happy with the person he loves...

gauri leaves for home meanwhile shiv leaves for the airport to recieve the girl he loves who is ippshita. ippshita arrives at the airport and they both greet each toher and hug. they arrive at the kapoor house and everyone welcomes ippshita very dearly. the whole family is sitting down and they tell ippshita that she has arrived at a very good time as shiv will be getting married soon to a very nice girl. ippshita is shocked to hear this and very sad but still manages to congratulate shiv...

shiv and ippshita are alone in the guest room and shiv tells her the whole truth, when and why this happened. she is crying but she believes him and says that "i trsust you to make everything fine again". they both hug and shiv says "yes, i will make everything alright once again but i know that gauri and her family will be very sad".

shiv calls everyone downstairs and reveals to everyone that he cannot marry gauri as he loves omeone else who is noen other than ippshita. ippshita somes downstairs as well and tells the whole family that "we love each toher and if i had known that shiv will be getting married, i would have come ack earlier...shiv couldn contact me because of me phone hasnt been working for a week. but we want to marry eahc other". everyone is shocked to hear this and nikhila goes upto shiv and stares at him with anger. she asks him "why didnt you tell us this earlier, now what will i tell gauris family?" shiv replies that "gauri already knows this, i have spoken to her and she has agreed to stop this marriage"

End of part six!
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hope you guys liked it and it is long enough!

plz do leave your comments

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Edited by metoubearscrazy - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#88
awesome ff and after such a long time
u updated
thnx for updating
afshaa
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanku afshaa!!!

yes, it has been a long time since i updated 😳 but now i found time as it is my summer holidays.

thanku once again for commenting

luv metoubearscrazy 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#90
ah finally you updated
really excited to know what happens...now that shiv told about ippy to his family
continue soon

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