(FF)Agni Parikhsha~(UPDATED) Part6=Page14

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Posted: 18 years ago

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hey everyone🤗

i have read so many fanfics on this forum and i have been inspired by all of dem to write my own one😃 you guys are just great...the ideas and imagination is just wonderful👏👏👏

well here it goes & hope you like it! my fanfaic is called...AGNI PARIKHSHA

the characters are all tha same as tha show except shiv and gauri are not yet married and tha shshank story never existed and nikhila is not mean ~ she loves gauri as a mother!

PART ONE

gauri is at the age of getting married and so is shiv. alok and mahen want them to get married to each over as they want their freidnship to turn into a different replationship. so one random day at home, alok tells this to gauri and she feels shy and runs to her room. alok gives kaya a photo of shiv to giv to gauri. kaya enters and shows tha bak of tha photo to gauri and walks around with it not letting gauri even get a glimpse of shivs face. shes goes on and on about how ugly he is (shes jokin btw) and finally givs it to gauri. gauri blushes and jus smiles.

on the other hand mahen talks to shiv about the marriage and he doesnt seem to be bothered. he jus says whatever and doesn mind. mahen calls alok and they both decide to let gauri and shiv meet.

shiv and gauri are sent to meet at a restaurant and shiv is expecting some girl wearing a mini skirt and stuff. gauri cums dere (wearin a simple suit) and shiv looks up and shows no reaction, he jus looks away. gauri asks if she can sit down and shiv thinks why is this girl talkin to me. he seems a little confused but soon realises that she is gauri. he is quite shocked.

they order sum food (noodles) and in the meanwhile start tlkin. when the food comes, the waiter drops one plate on da floor, so shiv jus tells him its ok and to keep the other plate on the table. gauri isnt really eating anything, so after much persuasion they eat out of the same plate and soon they get the same noodle. gauri blushes agen. later shiv pays the bill and they walk towards the parking lot.

they sit in the car and shiv says he'll drop gauri home. gauri nods and smiles. there is loads of traffic as someone is getting married and the 'baraat' has come on the road. shiv decides to go the other way, although its a longer way. he takes da rong turn in between and dey av to drive for ages and ages as he cant turn around to go bakc. It has got quite dark and soon they find a hotel...

hope you all liked my new fanfic ~ please tell me if you would like me to continue or not, wud like ur honest replies ~ plz leave ur comments!

luv metoubearscrazy😊

Edited by metoubearscrazy - 18 years ago