(FF)Agni Parikhsha~(UPDATED) Part6=Page14 - Page 8

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Posted: 18 years ago
#71
gr8888 part. i think gauri will say yes.
waiting 4 the next part...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#72
oh man! i knew somthin bad was gonna happen. wats gonna happen now
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Posted: 18 years ago
#73
amazing part 👏 👏 👏 !!!even i think gauri"ll say yes !!plz continue soon !!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: heartbreakkid

gr8888 part. i think gauri will say yes.
waiting 4 the next part...

thanku...she may say yes or no😳😆...i am also thinkin of wot she shud say😆 i av no clue wot to rite for the nxt part😆

thx once agen🤗

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Posted: 18 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: metoubearscrazy

thanku...she may say yes or no😳😆...i am also thinkin of wot she shud say😆 i av no clue wot to rite for the nxt part😆

thx once agen🤗

luv metoubearscrazy😊

aisa kah kar tumnei bahutbrhi galtii kar dii...cozi have strted my guessing machine...lol...gauri should slap him and say my dressing maybe too normal and all..but i am a girl of 20th century...wat if it wud be me in your place and blah blah...and then shiv sould say somethin good so that gauri is touched and then she dont say anything and go back to home...and wen parents ask she say yes....oh god...my guessing machine is over-active today...lol...this is ur punishment for not writing the next part soon...i will torture u until u donnt postup the next part soon.........jaldiiiiiiiii karo!!!!!!!...lol😆...see u have driven me so crazy from ur FF...its uperb yaar...simply superb👏

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cheers!!

sughra😉😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
#76
hunnii..

just read all the parts, and i am in love with your ff already!! mindblowing!!

please do continue.. and by the way, i imagined all this with onli Iqbal and
Pallavi..

looking really forward to the next part!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#77
great FF...plz continue soon!..it was fab

👏 👏 👏

Min
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Posted: 18 years ago
#78
Meou dear...kahaa ho tum????....have u forgotten this ff??....kya yaar continue soon!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey everyone...i am back with part five my fanfic, hopefully you are eejoying it and will continue to in the future 😃
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PART FIVE

Gauri is in her room having flashbacks of what shiv said to her. she is angry but unable to express it and tears just flow out of her eyes. her dreams are shattered in just one moment...she wants to marry shiv, her family is so happy with the marriage but only she knows the truth. she doesnt know what to do and thinks to herself 'if i tell this to baba then he will be very angry and sad...he wont be able to take it, he will just breakdown. but how can i marry someone who doesnt want to marry me, how can is pend all my life with him?'.

Gauri is still thinking and kaya somes in her room. kaya teases her and says 'in what thoughts are you lost?...thinking about jiju naaaaa? i knew it...she says now stop thinking about him and come down for lunch otherwise i will tell baba and jiju' kaya leaves. gauri thinks to herself 'yes kaya i was thinking about him, but you dont know why, and you dont even know that hes not going to be your jiju anymore'. gauri says quietly that 'everyone has already started preparing for this marriage but itsnot going to even happen'.

gauri reaches the same restuarant to meet shiv to tell her decision. they sit down and gauri tells him that 'i know you dont want to marry me and i dont want to force you into this relation...i will say to my baba that i dont want to marry you and then your grandparents wont be hurt either' gauri literally has tears in her eyes is just staring at shiv, then she says, 'this marriage wont happen, dont worry'.

although gauri has said this, they dont know that kaya is already at that restaurant and has heard everything...she is sitting at a nearby table hiding her face behind a menu...

End of part five!
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hope you guys liked it! next part will be posted soon

plz do leave your comments

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Edited by metoubearscrazy - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: sughra2

Meou dear...kahaa ho tum????....have u forgotten this ff??....kya yaar continue soon!!

am right here and no i havent forgotten😃 just posted the update for the next part...hope you like it

luv metoubearscrazy😊

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