(FF)Agni Parikhsha~(UPDATED) Part6=Page14 - Page 7

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Posted: 18 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: metoubearscrazy

thx a lot jiya imdad...u comments r rele nice and appreciated😃

hmmmmm...u'll av to wait a lil longer to find out the chock of gauris life, it wont b too long😳

thx once agen

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ur most welcome😊

b/w when r u posting the next part?

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Posted: 18 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: jiya imdad

ur most welcome😊

b/w when r u posting the next part?

very soon...actually on sat, in two days time...i av a day off so i cn fink of sum ideas😃

thx

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Posted: 18 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: metoubearscrazy

very soon...actually on sat, in two days time...i av a day off so i cn fink of sum ideas😃

thx

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will be looking 4ward to it!!😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: preeti arora

lovely story
i wish ekta also thinks likes u

awwwwwwwwwwww...thanku...sho shweet of u to say this

🤗🤗🤗

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Posted: 18 years ago
#65
thanku everyone for all your comments...part four will be posted very soon where you will find out gauri's shock!

thx once agne very very very much...dese comments mean so much to me

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Posted: 18 years ago
#66
Wow!!!!!...metou superb...i was thinking ki ab kahaani mei kaunsa naya morh aayega...kya shiv sach mei gauri ko refuse kardeygaa...par ekdum in ekta style u turned the story...and then gauri's life shock...hailaa...i am trying na guess ki kya hoga...will shiv be there with any other girl and tell gauri ki this is my wife i maarried her without telling family...uff i am going so ekta ishtyle...hehehehe 😆 ..yaar continue soon warna see how madly i am guessing...lol 😆 😆

once again will tellit was gr8,superb,fantastic!!..continue soon yaar!! 😃 😃


cheers!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#67

hello everyone...i am back with the part four my fanfic, hopefully you are eejoying it and will continue to in the future😊

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PART FOUR

Gauri reaches the restaurant where shiv is waiting for her. She sits down and they both say hi. Shiv orders coffee for both of them and then says to garui 'I have something really important to tell you and after I do you may think that I am a bad person.' Gauri is a little confused and says 'tell me shiv, what is it?'

Shiv tells gauri 'the only reason I said yes to this marriage was because of my grandparents. They want to see me married, especially with you as they are very fond of you. They are very old now and this is just like their last wish, if I had said no to this relation then they would have been very upset and I cannot see my grandparents unhappy because of me. If you want, you can still say no to this relation because I don't want to ruin your life. If you stick to your decision then we will be husband-wife for everyone else, but live only live like friends. I just wanted to tell you this so you don't think I betrayed you after marriage.'

Gauri is just sitting there like a statue; she is completely shocked and is speechless. Slowly tears run down her eyes. Shiv tells her, 'I no that whatever I have said will hurt you but it was better for you to find out now'. Gauri still doesn't say anything. After sometime gauri gets up and just walks away expressionless. Shiv follows her and says where are you going, wait, I will drop you home. Gauri is just walking one. Now shiv gets angry and jus holds her hand and drags her to the car. Gauri is still speechless. They sit in the car and drive home without uttering even one word. When gauri gets out of the car, she tells shiv that she will tell him her decision in the evening because she needs some time tot think. Shiv just nods his head and drives away.

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hope you guys liked it! plz do leave your comments😃

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Edited by metoubearscrazy - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: sughra2

Wow!!!!!...metou superb...i was thinking ki ab kahaani mei kaunsa naya morh aayega...kya shiv sach mei gauri ko refuse kardeygaa...par ekdum in ekta style u turned the story...and then gauri's life shock...hailaa...i am trying na guess ki kya hoga...will shiv be there with any other girl and tell gauri ki this is my wife i maarried her without telling family...uff i am going so ekta ishtyle...hehehehe 😆 ..yaar continue soon warna see how madly i am guessing...lol 😆 😆

once again will tellit was gr8,superb,fantastic!!..continue soon yaar!! 😃 😃


cheers!!
sughra 😉 😊

awwwwwwwwwwww...thx sughra for ur such luvlyyyyyyyy comments. ur sho shweet😃🤗...arre so much of guessing, chalo, i have posted the next part for you to do more guessing😆 ur so cute wiv your guesses...awwwwwwwww. i no u will say no thx but i still want to say thx very very very much ur comments, dey r rele nice and motivate even more😃🤗

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Posted: 18 years ago
#69
oh so sad!!!! poor gauri!!!! do continue soon, can't wait to find out wht her decision is.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thx

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