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fab part👏!!!the mice part was so funny😆!!!plz continue soon n merry x-mas 😊

thank u so much for readin...n A very Merry christmas to u!!! i will try to update soon...but right now really busy with family after tues for sure 😃

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thts really awesome...superb..
gr8 comedy

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that was amazing!! please do continue hunnii!

thanks everyone glad u all liked it i try to update by tom but if i dont sorries 😊

plzzzzz du cont..... soooooooooooooooooon
will b waiting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😆

such a loooooong waiting
plz continue 😃

I AM SOOO SORRY!! ya u all can hit me with ur jootis as i know i am takin forever kya karoo!! my school has started n well my teachers love me sooo much they have me piled with work...i have started it though n try my best to post it...my exams r in 2 weeks so everything is really hectic right now... 😆 😆 sorry again!!

cheers
isha 😊

no update 😭 now what can i say?
best of luch 4 ur exams 😭

sorries for the delay hehehe i try to update a lil bit earlier since this is like a cliff hanger...n ya so here it is...n thank u sooo much for ur patience n comments 😊

part 8

both shiv n gauri see karan n r shocked...he comes holdin a cage which both shiv n gauri again think has mice...both see look at each other n run...n karan wonders y they left has he wanted to show them the cute lil birds he jus bought..
shiv goes home n again changes n sees his mirror n suddenly he sees gauri holdin cake...n turns around to see no one..n wonders wat this..n opens his bathroom n sees gauri standin at the door...n is again shocked...n closes it...n opens again to see but no one is there...now he checks everything in the bathroom to make sure there is no gauri hiddin anywhere..
shiv thinks- omg this is too much i think i am losin it...if this keeps up i'll lose it!!
on the other side...gauri is all happy hummin away...looks at the clock n sees its about 12..thinks of goin to sleep...n infront of her house is shiv...
shiv- omg i have to talk to her...but wat do i say? no maybe i should go bak...nNO...then she wont leave me alone...n goes to knock but no its 12 how can i jus go to someone's house n the reason bein i see her everywhere...n turns to leave when he see a room's light on...n its gauri...n waves his hand but gauri doesnt see...n thinks hmmmm...n yes u all guessed it right...he starts to climb the window...n gauri thinks of shiv..n remebers how scared he was of mice n smiles...n suddnely she sees shiv climbin the window...n is shocked n thinks this must be like last time where she thought she saw shiv but no shiv...n turns
shiv yells- Hey wat r u doin...help me
gauri is shocked...omg it is u!..n looks down wat r u doin here
shiv- ya nothing much...u know i have a hobby of climbin ppl's windows around midnight...even though i can break my bones in the process
gauri- o i am sorry...n helps him inside...n is suprised cuz he is in his pjs
shiv looks around- nice room
gauri- love ur clothes
shiv -thanks...
gauri - u know i do have a front door..n wat was such an emerency that u had to come like this at 12 in the night
shiv- well....its about...the papers
gauri laughs- r u tellin me u came all the way here...n went through the whole hanging to talk about some papers? n couldnt u wait till tom?
shiv- no not papers...i mean the whole...mice might come in my room
gauri- KYA? n how is comin to me gonna help?
shiv- NO...i mean i came to meet u
gauri- ur hopless mr.kapoor...y r u really here?
shiv- first dont call me mr.kapoor call me shiv... n 2nd...it jus that hmmm...will u go...on hmm a da-...te with me
gauri confused- wats a da-te..?
shiv turns- DATE!!
gauri is shocked...n suprised..- a date...like u n me...candles...wine...dinner
shiv- duh...havent u been on a date before?
gauri lowers her eyes- nope not a few year
shiv- well be ready by 8 my car will pick u up...n turns to the window...n turns around...n oh ya i make sure there r no mice
gauri smiles- thanks but i havent even said yes
shiv- were u planin to say no?...but for ur sake...would u like to?
gauri nods - but u know there is a door which u can leave from...u dont need to break ur bones in the process of gettin down n laughs
shiv nods...n gauri takes him outside... goes towards to leave...n looks bak at gauri at the door..n goes bak to gauri
shiv- hey look at that...n gauri looks at the moon..n quickly shiv kisses her on the cheeks...n runs... gauri holds her cheeks n smiles..

the next morning...shiv n gauri both go shoppin...shiv buys a nice necklace for gauri...while she buys him a watch...n buy new clothes for themselves...n both think about the whole day...n finally the moment they were waitin for gauri stands infront of the mirror her hair all straight wearin a red dress...n hears a honk...goes downstairs to find a black mercendes waitin...she runs down...its not shiv but his driver..whose comes to pick her up...gauri smiles n sits..

shiv is standin near the sea...n wonderin when gauri will come n keeps lookin on the road...n there he sees a car n rushes to it but it passes by...n is dispointed...it booked the whole resturant..near the sea...the moon which was out all night suddenly hids behind the clouds..n shiv turns to see all the prep done for gauri...the table..with roses in the middle...the flower carpet....... he wasnt sure if gauri was gonna like it as its his first time doin something for a girl which was werid as he never felt so exicted...n wonders wats wrong with him? n suddnely his thoughts r interupted by a phone call...he looks at it n smiles...n picks it up..n very happily says
shiv- hello...duh shiv ka phone hai to shiv hi bhool laga....n listens n is shocked....KYA? wait i am comin!!


hope u like it 😊 love to her ur comments

cheers isha