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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey everyone i was like kinda bored so thought y not write a fanfic is kinda different i will add on the rest of the characters in the orginal story later on but ya i have a few new ones but ya hope u all like it 😊

Thunder roarded and the city of dehli had lost power...flights...trains...even buses were cancelled...people were trapped and ran to the nearest shelter they could find...n near the highway there a car had stopped...the driver came out n saw that the engine had some problem in it...he called out to the person sittin inside...who he was takin to the airport...n comes out a young woman in a yellow dress...

girl- wats wrong?

driver- madam...there is something wrong with the engine there is a hotel near by u could go to or...sit here in the car...

girl- wat?? omg ok fine i;ll go to the hotel..u got an umberalla?

the poor driver looked around but couldnt find one..irrated she started walkin...n finally reached the hotel n was soakin wet n her feet hurt as she walked a long way n saw that the place was crowded...she walks to reciptionist...

girl- hi i am Gauri...n r there any rooms avaivable?

reciptionists aplogized there were none n that if she could convice someone to leave the room then sure but otherwise nope...they had none...again irrated she got an idot n looked around for someone who she could easily get rooms to switch with...n sees a man with big glasses...who was strating at her....gauri now wasnt jus any girl she was one of a kind that knew her ways around ppl....she walks up to him..

Gauri- hi i am gauri n u r?

guy all confused cuz this was the first time such a pretty girl talk to him- my name...Neel..n smiles n blushes n soon Gauri is holdin the keys to the room...n suddenly a bunch of soccer players come ...they go up to Neel....

guy- hey is the room key u know how much we fought for that one room

Neel- room keys well...i kinda...this girl...ok...come on guys...

guy- KYA!!! u know shiv will kill u when he finds out

Neel- i know but u guys come on plz..help me out nah get the keys bak...

n another guy comes- too late guys shiv is here...all look to the door..

his chocolate brown eyes...wet hair in a white shorts n t-shirt...he comes smiling to his soccer buddies...

shiv- o i am so tired...soccer isnt soccer without rain..how come all of u standin here y arent u in the room?

Neel- well karan tell him....

Karan shiv's close friend...

karan- hmmm woh...actually.. dont get mad...Neel kinda gave his keys to this girl...n ya

shiv- WAT!!! omg no u didnt!! where is she? wat was her name i'll fix her...omg how can u be sooo dumb who the hell gave him the keys...actually my fault if i had inisited we go outside we never be in this problem wat was her name?

Neel-ga...gauri!!!!

shiv- omg!! how?? well that gauri has it comin now...took my room!!! wats the room number?

All the gang ppl follow shiv to there room n shiv knocks...n is shocked to open the door to see.....an elderly person open the door..

shiv- anyone named gauri here?

elderly- o that angel she gave us her room since my wife wasnt feelin well...n closes the door...

shiv- GREAT!! now i cant tell them to leave the room n cuz of u (lookin at neel) n that stupid gurl..if i find her i;ll kill her..!!!

Alot of ppl r in the lobby...n drinkin coffee...shiv starts to sneeze n cough n suddenly someone comes up to him n hands him a cup of coffee...he looks up to see a girl handin him coffee he looks up n sees this really beautiful girl in a yellow dress hair all wet...brown eyes...n keeps lookin

gauri-hello... its not poisin take it u need it more than me n smiles

shiv- thanks i would of been in my room but...

gauri- someone asked u for it i know how u feel

shiv- no!! y do ppl trick ppl n take the rooms for..some ppl r so selfish...

gauri- i know wat u mean ..but then again its not all about selfishness it sometimes is the other person is in more of need

shiv- maybe...hey u put only 1 tsp of sugar

gauri- how u know?

shiv- me too n smiles

gauri- how come ur here?

shiv- well i attend a University in mumbai but i came here for a soccer tournment but cuz of these rains we couldnt go bak...u?

gauri- well i came to meet a friend n now am stuck here also i have to go to mumbai...

shiv- well nice meetin u i have to go find my friends thanks for the coffee...both turn there backs n go seperate ways...

Neel- shiv u were gettin mad at me for talkin to her n now u talk to her urself!!!
shiv- wat u talkin about

Neel- she's the one who took our room!

shiv is shocked!!!

ab kya hoga gauri ka???

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desi chic thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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~WoW~

I'm speechless... this is gonna be good.. I'm sure of it 😉

Kya entry hai?!! Amazing yaar...

Can't wait for the next part!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Too good girl...
waiting for the next one now...

- Abhita
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome starting 👏 👏
i wonder what will shiv do
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice job 👏👏👏 wonder hwo shiv is going to react it wud b interesting to read

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow! luv the beginning! awesome-- continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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it's uperb!totally can't wait 2 c shiv's reaction and wat happens 2 gauri!hope 2 read da next part soon!

X.o.X.o.---Jasmine---x.O.x.O
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks so much guys for readin it i'll update soon!! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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isha..u didn't tell me about this 😭

it's awesome!! continue soon 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: inavars

isha..u didn't tell me about this 😭

it's awesome!! continue soon 😉

sorry sravi!!!! i pm u when me has updated it

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