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Originally posted by: jiya imdad

that's such a cute part 😳 .............but once again u left us wondering whats cuming up next😉 😉 😉

hehehe thats wat i do leave u ppl wonderin😆😆...thanks glad u liked it 😊

Originally posted by: inavars

awww...that was sooo sweet....reminded me of the KKHH window climbing scene 😳 😳 shiv is amazing!! 😳 😳

uh oh who called? what happened? continue soon!!

funny all my scenes some how remind everyone of some different kind of movie...sravi i tell u these theives..movie producers should be ashmed stealin my ideas 😆😆 no i was watchi romeo n juliet for english..n ya i was like ooo balcony!!! though i didnt use that but a window instead 😆 glad u liked it

hey everyone u might be suprised i know i updated fast hehehe well i got exams next week so i might do 1 more before that...n not for another 1 week...sorries...but ya thank u sooo much for ur comments..here i go


part 9

shiv is shocked...as hell n runs...he is in the hospital...n thinks how did this happen? omg plz let it be nothing serious...n there karan is standin...
shiv- o thank god ur here...so ya hows gauri?
karan- i dont know yet..
shiv- how the hell did this happen? where the hell is that driver?
karan- shiv dont say anything to him...it wasnt his fault
shiv angry- wat u mean?
karan - the driver was sayin the car broke down..n gauri got out even though he told her not to...n she wasnt paying attention and some crazy driver came...n hit her...n if it wasnt the driver who had brought her here..n called me...cuz he couldnt reach u
shiv is shocked...n the docs comes...
shiv- how is she doc?
doc- nothing to worry jus minor injuries..she can go home in 2 days...n ya i already called her family...they should be here in the morning...n u guys can go home too
shiv- no i will stay here...can i see her?
doc- well she is sleepin...u can see her but plz dont distrub her
shiv goes...n sits...there..n is touches gauri's hand..her hand has a bandage...her arm is all bandaged...n looks at her...n suddenly gauri opens her eyes.. n smiles
gauri- hey...wow...wat r u doin here?
shiv frowns- i am here for a party...to see u...how u feelin
gauri- gud...alive n smies
shiv- n tell me one thing which idot told u to go out in the street?
gauri- no one...n i am sorry
shiv- sorry is that all u have to say...i nearly died...thinkin that i los....n reliazes wat he is sayin...i mean wat would i said to ur family?
gauri- i am fine arent i
shiv - is head, arm, n leg injuries look fine to u? ...i am gonna go see the doc n u rest...
gauri smiles...n soon shiv comes with food...n feeds gauri...
gauri- u know its pretty late...looks at the clock its 2am...u should go home...ur folks might get worried
shiv- no i wont leave u
gauri- no u go..otherwise..i refuse to eat..take medinces...from u...if u dont leave
shiv- y r u bein so stubborn who will take care of u?i mean like these nurses they seem evil..
gauri- shiv...i am closin my eyes n when i open them u better be gone...n at home...n sleepin otherwise..i never talk to u again n closes her eyes...shiv who has no words...n leaves
shiv - i am going now open ur eyes..n dont u dare get up n try to something urself...get those nurses to do it..n take care n leaves
gauri smiles n thinks about shiv...n trys to sleep..n suddenly looks around n gets up...n limps to the window n looks outside..the wind is blowing...n its rainnig lightly...n is in all smiles...n thinks wat an idot..shiv...but sweet...n suddenly sees shiv...
shiv- hey beautiful thinkin about me....contiue...n smiles
shocked gauri rubs her eyes...n he isnt there anymore.....n turns to her bed...n sees shiv sittin there...n goes to him but then he disappears n thinks wat kind of medinces is this hopsital givin me...n someone taps her n she turns to see shiv...n closes her eyes...n peaks no shiv...n is confused..n suddnely she turns around n sees a scary mask n screams..n its shiv who never really left...n was jus scaring her
shiv- hahahh u think i really leave u with that doc...
gauri- u know u'll get in big trouble...
shiv- do i look like i care..n thanks to u for screamin i bet there gonna be comin...so i leave now...n ya i forgot to give u ur braclet...i forgot to give it to u before...
gauri- but i dont remeber losin it?
shiv smiles- the first time we met in dehli then u left it in my pocket..
gauri- thanks...go now
shiv- but u got up...u dont listen to me do u?
gauri- u dont either...n kicks him out
shiv holds the door n says- Yaad karo ge mein jo na hoon to.... gauri gushes him n closes the door n the windows...n sits...n she sits into her thoughts again..song plays
Aankhon Se Toone, Yeh Kya Keh Diya Deril Ye Deewana, Dhadakne Laga Tanhai Mein Hum, Mile Is Tarah Baarish Mein Shola, Bhadak Ne Laga Tu Tadap Ne Laga, Maein Machal Ne Lagi Boond Tan Pe Giri, Jaan Machal Ne Lagi Chha Raha Hai Ajab Sa Nasha... Aankhon Se Toone, Yeh Kya Keh Diya Dil Ye Deewana, Dhadakne Laga...
.n shiv is walkin on the street... gettin wet n thinks about gauri..n remebers her eyes..n smiles....n sees her in a white dress...n puts his hand out n dances in the rain...n then slips...n notices he was dancin himself n hits his head lightly gets in his car...n drives away song plays in the bak
gauri...takes her pillow..n pretends she can hear music n dances away....n soon she sees shiv...n dancin with her...but jus looks into her eyes...n suddnely snaps out n sees no one this time...n limps bak into bed...

i didnt leave a cliffhanger😆 n ya hope u all liked it 😊

cheers

ishu 😊

great part 👏
thanks alot 4 updating even though u hav exams 😳 😳
and best of luck 4 ur exams 👍🏼

Originally posted by: lil_isha15

ishq vishq havent seen that moive..hehehe whose in it? but ya glad u liked it 😊

omggg its the cutest movieee of shahid kapoor and amrita rao and sehnaz....its so sweet n cute movie....im sure u'll like it..

awwwww tht was so sweetttttt..... 😳

keep up the good work...

continue soon... 👏

thanks so much for readin guys i try to update soon but it be before my exams 😊

great work!! 2 bad she didnt make it 2 da date

its luvvly isha
continue soon!!!! 👏 👏

thanks everyone...i will update by friday after that it be another week before i can update as exams!!!! so ya wish me luck i am sooo distracted 😆 😆

cheers
isha