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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks alot for ur wonderful comments!!! sorry it might be a while before i update as i am very very busy with school 🤢 which sucks but ya sorry again!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks alot for readin it guys i am sooo sorry i havent updated in a while but i will very soon by monday for sure..thanks for bein so patient! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ill patiently wait 4 monday!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ohh cant wait till mondayyy....

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Posted: 18 years ago
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sorry guys its really short has i promised monday but then thing is due to christmas my cuzins r over makin it really hard for me to take time n write...but after tues i shall write a really long one...i didnt want to break my promise so here i go...

part 7

shiv arrives at the hotel..takes a deep breath...n looks at himself...n enters...n at the same thing gauri comes n fixes herself in the mirror...n goes in...both see each other...n shiv gets up to give gauri a seat...
shiv- hi..would u like something to drink
gauri- no...takes out her files...will u be the one signin all the documents or u want to consult with ur lawyers abut the contracts n all of course we'd have to meet again thoug
shiv- yup of course..n suddnely karan shows up
karan- wow shiv i didnt know u consulted with the lawyers wow first time
gauri- hi..please sit
shiv whose mad- so wat r u doin here
karan- meetin of course...this is wat it is right...by the way ms.gauri u look beautiful..bet shiv hasnt said anythin about has he its so not like him to not compliement a gud lookin woman
shiv- well if u shut up maybe...i would
gauri- excuse be right bak
shiv grabs karan collar- if u were my best friend u be dead wat r u doin here
karan- first i come to help u n now ur doin this
shiv- wat help i dont need help
karan- dont lie to me...dont worry i got everything under control..n winks to the waiter...
gauri is comin bak...n shiv knows karan is up to something..n see the waiter holdin a mouse cage..shiv gets scared...n thinks oh no n goes to stop the waiter...n grabs the mice cage...n gauri comes from behind to see him holdin n suddnely shiv shocked drops it relasin all the mice!!...gauri screams...n jumps on the tables...n soon all the ladies r screamin...n u wonder where shiv is...right beside gauri screaming...as he is afraid of mice too...gauri turns around n sees him...
gauri- u idot go...n get them!! n u ewww..sees a mouse...set them loose n now u go GET THEM!!
shiv- me but i didnt do anything i was savin u!
gaui- really nice way of savin someone relase the mice! n sees a knife...n points at shiv..i am willin to kill u if i have to but get me out of here!
shiv- no need to get violent...hmmm...maybe we can...ooo i know call the police...
gauri- arghhh ur hopless...gets down holdin a knife n shiv follows...
n suddenly its all quiet no one is movin..n suddenly a stupid waiter who was holdin a cake sees the mice...n screams n the cake goes UP...n both gauri n shiv look up...n the cake falls on gaui...shiv laughs uncontroably n so gauri takes some pie on the table n puts it on his face n starts laughing...n before u know a food fight starts with mice...cake all over..the manger crying...n yes some smart person..calls the manger who aplogize to the guest n clear out the mice...n so shiv n gauri came lookin hot but leave lookin like frosting covered snow ppl!! both go into a hotel...n change clothes...gauri comes dryin her hair..in the lobby now in her normal suit...n shiv in normal jeans n shirt...gauri comes n shiv jus stares...as it reminded him of the first time he met gauri...when she was wear a yellow dress n her wet hair...something then had made him like her...
shiv- well ms.gauri i hope ur ok..well of course u would be when a hot n handsome guy like me is there to protect u
gauri - o ya...standin right beside me at all times...hopin i'd save u instead
shiv- i was jus testin u..to c if u could do it without me n smiles
gauri laughs...well we had a most interestin meetin...i guess we'll need another one but not in a resturant but in an office..
shiv- o ur soo bo...n relaizes whose he talkin to...i mean ur sooo right...
n suddenly karan comes...n both gauri n shiv r shocked!!

hope u all liked the lil bit i did 😊 A VERY MERRY CHRISTMAS TO U!!! n sorry for the mistakes! i did this in a real hurry!

cheers

isha
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great comics 😛 😉
couldn't control my laughter 😆 😆
wil b waiting 4 ur next part continue soon 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#78
😆 awsomeeeee 😆

continue soon..
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Posted: 18 years ago
#79
😆 😆 😆 so funny
continue soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#80
greatttttttt
i couldnt forget the part
where shiv said
we shud call the police

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