FF: Do Ajnabee updated p17pg31 check! - Page 6

awesome...luv ur ff its sooo funny...plz continue!!

I loved the fact that Karan was on the verge of crying and Shiv is so hyper 😆 😆 PLease continue soon!

thanks so much guys i will update shortly sorry for the long wait jus got time 😊

so sorry for the long wait...i went to canada for a few days n totally messed everything up had more school work so i couldnt update earlier..ya now i have time this weekend so i update once more 😊 hope u all like it


shiv- i am shiv kapoorr!! n slips n falls on gauri!! both eyes lock...n gauri n shiv both r shocked...... n karan is ready to cry
gauri is over shiv.....n shiv is smiling n at the bak karan faints
shiv notices n says- omg karan...hey u ( gauri) get off of me... i am gettin crushed...
gauri snaps out...n gets mad as he just called her fat...karan wakes up sees gauri lookin mad...she looks at karan n gets up n shiv sits on the floor
shiv- no manners how about offerin an hand...actually dont bother.. hmph!! n gets up n takes his dust off
shiv- hi i am...looks at karan wats my name...wait i know...o ya shiv kapoor brings his hand forward n want to work with u...ya n whispers to karan...is she the one is that wat i was suppose to say karan nods...
gauri- well mr.karan..i c u dont really care about this deal as ur boss is drunk in my office...n basically in no condintions to talk n i dont work with ppl like that...so plz leave havent u ever heard first impressions r everything...n i have seen enough to know wat i need..n leaves
karan- good job shiv!! thanks now we lost the deal...u messed up u better fix this
shiv- no problem...i will n goes behind...
there gauri stands n wonders if he is the one...n maybe she shouldnt of done that...n that she needs..n remembers its business she cant afford losses....on the other side shiv is thinkin...well i messed up big she probably thinks i am an idot now even if she remebers me she;ll want to forget me...ok so i aplogize n then wat? o ya ask her for a date...no wat if i get slappe...n touches his back...man she was heavy better not say that again though
shiv sees gauri...but her bak is facin him n leavin...he doesnt even know her name...wat did karan say thinks shiv but too late as she is leavin...shiv sees an apple...takes it n throw it n hits gauri on the bak...n gauri turns around...n shiv turns around
gauri- who threw that? n looks at everyone n sees shiv...n goes to him...did u?
shiv- who threw the apple? who did confess right now? sheesh ppl...such idots...does it hurt?
gauri- o wow ur in ur senses now...n ya thanks
shiv- no problem n starts to walk towards the door...n thinks - come on call me bak...n suddenly
gauri- excuse me...n shiv smiles...n turns around with a straight face...hmp i am sorry for how i behaved before but ya would u like to come bak as i have to run now
shiv smiles- sure...n gauri n him shake hands...n gauri is about to leave when she stops...
gauri- sorry to ask..but i have to but about 3 years bak dehli...
shiv smiles as she remembers- fire...storm...beach
gauri- smiles.- u stil remember...well do u remember meetin a girl...
shiv- wet dark brown hair...yellow dress...dark brown eyes...n hmmm i think u were wearin...gold eyeshadow...n i dont remember the sandals...n u also met someone there
gauri- yup...white t-shirt n shorts...red stripes on the left side messed hair...dark brown eyes...n hmmm carryin a soccer ball right
shiv- wrong...smiles...red stripes on the right not left n laughs
gauri- i thought u forgot me
shiv- well i did when i saw u but otherwise....
gauri- otherwise
shiv- otherwise nothing...n how about u..u look so different...n seem different before u use to smile so much n now all i have seen is ur rottin face..n laughs
gauri- well u use to be more in control now ur all over the place n laughs n looks at the time n freaks as she needs to leave n then stops n goes bak to shiv
gauri- oh i forgot this..n hands him his romal...u gave it to me tellin me u wanted it bak but never took it so ya here u go..
shiv is suprised as she still has it...n puts his hand in his pocket...n doesnt take it out...
shiv- thanks alot...so tom at 3 ?
gauri- sounds gud
gauri leaves shiv takes out the braclet n think- how can she jus take u...i dont know even if she wants u..u been my lucky charm for 3 years how can i jus give u away i wil but not now...maybe be later...n puts in there n smiles..n jumps n yells yes she remembers me!!! n everyone looks at him- yes she remembers me its a song..havent u ppl heard of it...sheesh
karan is sitin in the cabin...n wonders wat takin shiv so long as he told him to sit here...he goes to open the door n its locked!!
karan- SHIV!!!!!!!!! n suddenly a spider comes...n karan faints seein it...n shiv opens the door to see karan fainted n laughs...

gauri is smiling in her car..n thinks- wow he remembers me...but omg i have nothing to wear for tom..maybe yellow dress or pink...wait y am i dressin up for though its jus a meetin but maybe i should get my nails done been a while...n also shop for new clothes...this isnt for tom but jus general for fun...yup for fun..not for that..that....wats his name again....


hope u all liked it...forgive me for any errors in it thanks! 😊

wht....she cant even remember his name 😆
continue soooooon

ishu that AWESOME!!! so cute and funnny... awww...
update SOOOOOOOON!!!!

thanks so much guys!! i be updatin soon glad u all liked it 😊

Very very nice fan fic !!!!! 😊

omg isha.....that was sooooooooooo good!!

loved how they were giving discriptions of that night and how they dressed...aww...how sweet!! 😳

continue soon hun!

Fantastic.. hunnii..

please do continue!!

👏