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Posted: 18 years ago
ok...let me clear some confusion lolz 😆 nida is tellin shiv that gauri is a gold digger...n that she does everything for money has no feelins for shiv... that cuz of gauri..her younger brother comminted suicide...while karan was told something esle...she is a vilian...n gauri isnt bad...if i give more might give it away 😆 hope this helped...if not u will get it when i update which be tom probably latest thurs sorries!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
ok
its vv confusing!but anyways thanx 4 the update!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey guys...well i hope it makes all sense after this...if it doesnt i am sorry but i think it makes sense now 😆 so heres the update...

Part 16
Nida is standin inside her room when her nani comes along n slaps her...
Nani- i heard everything...u talkin to karan about a brother of urs which died?... u never had a brother!! wat r u planning to do??
nida now really angry- so wat if i dont...n plus that gauri deserves all the hatered!...i love shiv n how can she jus take him away from me? how dare she so i jus made up a few lies n got rid of her...well almost
nani- wat!!!
nida- yes...when karan told me shiv was fallin for some gauri i couldnt take it...maybe it has been only a couple of months that i have known shiv but i knew him first!! she doesnt even know him but that witch...must of done some magic over him...n he says he loves her!!....since that day i went undercover n looked for any weakpoints of gauri n i found one...she had been involed in this murder n was even about to get hanged but didnt she killed the person in defence..shiv doesnt know that....so i took advantage of that n told shiv a few new stories made up a fake brother...n used Karan filled his ears with wrong stuff about gauri...now both thing gauri is bad while she is just clueless...also now jus to secure the hatred stays i have another plan going so hopefully..after that there will be no such thing has gauri in shiv's life...only nida...n smiles
nani- but how could u nida? i wont let u do this!
nida- o nani u wont tell anyone this or i'll kill myself...n u wont want that now would u?
as nida talking to her nani at the door karan hears everything n walks towards her in anger
karan- nida how could u....shiv n me both trusted u n u...jus cuz u couldnt have it ur way made some false stories up? i wont stand for this i'll go tell shiv everything
nida- no u wont...becuz that will only lead to pain espeaically for u...now i dont want to hurt u but if u tell shiv anything...then i am sorry i wont be able to control myself...
karan is shocked- u think i am scared i dont care...do watever u can do to stop me...walks towards the door n a gun shot is fired...karan turns around n looks...at nida holdin a gun n smiling...n karan touchs his bak n sees blood...n falls to the floor
nani-NIDA wat did u do...
nida- shhhhhh nani call the ambulance...n tell them inspector nida is here...i am sorry u saw wat he didnt he didnt listen to me...n this is wat happens to ppl who dont listen to me..now hurry before he dies...
bak shiv is at home...all confused...as he doesnt know wat to belivie n wat not...as he saw gauri coming out of that club but has no right to ask her...but he has to...he knows she loves him...n suddenly nida comes
nida- shiv...karan is shot!!
shiv- wat?? how? who??
nida- gauri did it...
shiv- wat? no she cant why would she
nida- maybe karan saw or heard something he wasnt suppose to come on we gotta go see him in the hospital....
shiv- if anything happens to karan i'll kill gauri! i dont understand wat did he ever do to her
gauri is bak home n kaya comes into her room
kaya- didi wats going on y did u call me
gauri- shiv is in danger!!!

hope u liked it!

tons of love

isha
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Posted: 18 years ago
i hate nida 😡 😡 😡 .she is such a pain.....
Poor karan,why did he have to confront her....
and even more pathetic is shiv's condition.i'm feelin so sorry for both of them..
hope the truth gets revealed soon....

nice update!!!!! 👏



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Posted: 18 years ago
thank god gauri isnt evil!luvvd this part
though this nida sukks 😡 😡 😡
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Posted: 18 years ago
sorry guys the update might be a lil late...as u dont know but i jus met with an accident recently so kinda out these days but will have to u as soon as possible wont be too long

thanks!

isha 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey everyone! sorry for the long delayed update...i met with an accident couple of days ago..so i wasnt able to update soo sorries...so here is the update hope u like it ! 😊

kaya- di wat r u sayin?
gauri- i am right someone is tryin to frame me..thats r arjun called me to tell me that shiv is in danger n that i should be on the look out
kaya- omg but y do u care y r u gettin in this mess? remember wat happened last time
gauri- i know but if anything happens to shiv i wont be able to forgive myself
kaya- but y is he so important!! n plus i bet arjun has the wrong informatiin
gauri- he is important becuz..in a soft voice i love him!
kaya- wat!
gauri- i love shiv..very much n if i have to go to hell even i will
kaya- but...now shocked..whose tryin to
gauri- i dont know..maybe i should call him
kaya- he is probably in the hopsital someone shot karan
gauri- wat..omg lets go

shiv is in the hospital with nida's words going around in his head...angry at the fact that he loves someone like gauri...who tired to get his best frand killed for something...n thinks he won't let her get away with it...n sees gauri comin

gauri-shiv hows karan
shiv now real mad- o shut up first u get him shot n now u come to ask how he is i know everything abuot u
gauri is shocked- wat r u mad..y would i get karan shot
shiv- i dont know maybe there is something he knows that i need to know but if tells me ur plans will be ruined
gauri- wat plans? shiv r u talkin like this wats wrong
shiv laughs- wats wrong..i'll tell u wats wrong me going for someone like u who uses ppl..n plays with there emotions for fun
gauri is shocked with tears in her eyes- shiv...wat r u sayin
shiv grabs gauri by the arms- dont u dare say my name u have no right to be here now get out!
gauri- shiv no..listen to me..
shiv- i said get out i dont need to listen to u..or any of ur crap!!n pushes her

gauri now in tears..wonders shiv..how could u think like that...n turns n sees nida

gauri- nida wats wrong with shiv..someone told him wrong stuff about me n he wont listen to me plz go tell him to listen to me for once
nida- sorry gauri...shiv is not a child..i bet he doesnt really love u at all..n probably he was drunk when he said...he loves me..n gettin married to me he has no room for u in his life..so its better if u go away!!

gauri- is shocked..n crys n remembers all the moments she spent with shiv...n thinks how can this be..how can shiv...tell me he loves me but is marryin nida...i have to do something...

shiv is sittin when nida comes-shiv go get this injection from outside..plz
shiv nods n leaves...while nida gives an evil smile

hope u liked it 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
👏
this nida is soooo irritatin....
good update!!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
nidaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa 😡 that girl is gone crazy or wat 😡 😡 😡
i wish karan tells the truth abt nida to shiv 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
thanks alot guys sorry for the late update but i will do it soon 😊

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