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he dropped her?? 😆
wht is gauri upto???? she is nt a bad person right??? 😕
continue sooooon
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Gauri has sumthing up her sleeve...probably against Shiv..hope she falls 4 him nd continue soon coz i realli need 2 noe wht is going on

thanks for ur comments everyone...i'll be updatin soon..n about gauri being evil hehehe u'll have to wait for that but not too long 😊

hey sorry for the delay becuz of my new sem n stuff after school really hard for me to update regular sooo sorries to that...n heres the update 😊

part 13

kaya comes into gauri's room to see her sleepin in a chair holdin a book...near the edge of the window...n softens up..n thinks to herself i hope she knows wat she is gettin into...but i should warn shiv... n jus then gauri's cell rings...its shiv...she takes it...n cuts it..
kaya- sorry shiv but its for the best..n takes the phone
shiv on the other hand wonders y gauri cut the phone...n smiles to himself thinkin she must be havin her mood swings n is mad at him n shuld go see her...n looks at the clock its 12...n wonders if he should go or not...
karan is at home when a knock on his door...its nida
nida- karan is shiv in love with that girl?
karan- which one gauri?
nida- ya that one
karan- u know he doesnt admit it but i know he is..like its gud i think...dont u think so either they make such a cute couple
nida- omg...r u mad..shiv cant fall for her...do u have any idea who this girl is...
karan- y r u talkin like this of course i know..u know she is a daughter of a really big business man...n handles everything herself too
nida- now she handles everything..trust me looks can be decivin
karan- ok i am confused...wat r u talkin about?
nida- about 2 years ago ( hehehehe everything is said it in slience lol)
karan- omg...thats when we met her..for the first time...we gotta tell shiv...lets go
shiv is sittin there thinks i cant...jus wait till tom i have to tell her but how? like it should be something grand shouldnt it..omg y the hell am i so neverous for? ok calm down...flowers...but where am i gonna find some now...i'll jus find them...come on shiv get ready...shiv wears white...suit...n comes infront of gauri's house..n hits his head thinkin he forgot to get flowers...n sees some in the garden...n hits the gate which had some mud somehow n gets on shiv's pants...n thinks shit..i had to wear white..n sees the hose...n goes towards that...n steps into mud...n thinks omg..no...no..n the looks down he is standin mud...n his shoes r ruined...n thinks ok..i wash this after i get the flowers...n now taking steps very carfully...goes towards the flowers...n gets a few roses...n in the exictement slips n now really dirty thinks...omg...n says yes my face isnt ruined...thats all that matters...goes towards the hose turns it on...but no water...wonders wats wrong..n taps it but nope...he's foot on the pipe.. but doesnt reliaze...n looks into it but nope...n hold it high n steps bak... n SHOOSH!! water all over him...n he slips n falls..fighting with the hose...n kinda screamin...someone wakes up...n shiv gets the distored flowers moves...n one the servant comes n wonders who ws makin all that noise...n thinks o well...n turns off the hose..n goes bak...now all in mud...shiv thinks- maybe i should go bak..wat a fantistic way to tell some i love u..covered in mud...hopefully she doesnt die in shock ..or better yet laughter..n beings to climb the latter...
gauri is sleepin on the chair..shiv looks...inside n sees gauri sleepin....n thinks maybe he should go bak...n suddenly one of the servant yells thief thief!! as he saw some foot prints in the mud...n sees shiv climbin...shiv jumps in gauri's room..n gauri wakes up
gauri shocked- shiv?...u here now...n looks outside the servant yellin..thieft
gauri-omg shiv there is a thief in our house...n looks at him properly n brusts in laughter..omg is this some new fashion statement
shiv- hahah very funny...now tell ur servant to shut up otherwise he'll wake ur whole house up
gauri- i think i am too late...n u better go..
shiv- wait i cant go without tellin u wat i came for
gauri- kya? hurry
shiv- woh...is that....i am...in...o ya these r for u...n shows her stems of the flowers..which has gauri on the floor
gauri- thank u so much shiv...the stems r lovely
shiv embrassed- sorry....actually they were flowers but the climbin n falling n kinda....n stops
both hear foot steps....
gauri- omg run
shiv- but i havent said wat i came for
gauri - move n talk same time multi task
shiv- fine...ok...well....n suddnely someone opens the door gauri looks n its her servants n her dad....
dad- anyone in here? r u ok?
gauri- ya i am...looks forward her window...n wonders how shiv got out so fast...hope he didnt jump...
dad- gauri?
gauri- huh ya fine.. u go...
everyone leave n gauri sits on her bed..n wonders where shiv went....n suddnely a whisper comes help...gauri looks n its shiv...hangin...

will shiv be able to tell gauri he loves her? or he'll end up in the hospital...will nida n karan tell shiv the gauri's raaz??? keep guessin...hope u all liked it...also any suggestions..comments do let me know 😊

cheers
isha

awesomeeeeeeeee.....

suspense suspense 😕

i think he should tell her how much he loves her so tht when he finds out the raaz its a huge shock n wont belive any1....

continue soon..

A GUD 1 👏
SUSPENSE..... 😆
HOPE U DIDN'T TAKE LONG TIME TO REVEALL THE RAAZ....LOLZZZZ 😆

hilaa!! plz tell us the raaz its killing me
you sure know how to keep readers on their seats 😊
great part 👏 👏

hey everyone thanks for ur wonderufl comments n ya gud news i got time today i will be udpatin in like an hour or so 😊

Originally posted by: lil_isha15

hey everyone thanks for ur wonderufl comments n ya gud news i got time today i will be udpatin in like an hour or so 😊

awesomeeeeeee......cant waitttttttttt😳

hope u all like it...n thank u for ur wonderful comments 😊

part 14

gauri sees shiv hanging...n thinks omg...n tries to pull him but cant so tells him to hang on
shiv thinks omg...i came here to propose my love but instead i m stuck here
n suddnely sees a ladder..
gauri- get on the ladder u idot
shiv- shiv grabs the latter n starts climbin down..
n suddenly comes...n gauri lets go of the ladder from the bottom...n shiv whose a few steps from reach down falls
gauri- omg i am so sorry n help him up
shiv- omg i bet even prison doesnt have this many traps
gauri- thats wat u get for not usin the front door n laughs
shiv- gets up n pouts..
gauri- ok ok sorry....now tell me y u came
shiv- o ya...but...not here...o i know...come with me
gauri- now?
shiv- yes
gauri - like this...points to her pjs
shiv- i dont look any better..now come on...its 1am no one will see us...n grabs her hand n takes her
n end up at near the sea...
shiv- well we couldnt go on our date then so i thought..we do it now
gauri laughs n looks n sees the full moon out...n a table set under a tent...n looks at herself n shiv...she in pink pjs...wearin bunny slippers...n shiv covered in mud...n a mess...n takes her slippers off...n says i'll never forget this date... n walks towards to the table...is the staff still up? i heard this resturant closes at 12
shiv- well...were alone here...as no one willed to help me...so i did this myself...n there nothing to eat
gauri- laughs...this is a really speaical date
shiv- but i do have music...n takes his cell out...n music plays n puts his hand out for gauri n both start dancin..
shiv- gauri wanna see magic...
gauri nods...
shiv- but u gotta give me a kiss first
gauri- frist magic...
shiv- fine...but it wont work...if i dont kiss u
gauri- then no
shiv- fine...n takes her hand n kisses it...n it rains
gauri is shocked....n thinks omg...n looks at shiv whose smiling
gauri looks at the sand n notices...only the place there standin has rain otherwise everything is dry....n is confused...n looks up...n sees pipes...shiv notices she figured so quickly moves kisses her cheek n runs...
gauri- shiv!!!!!!!!!!!!!! n runs after him
now both r wet n dirty from running n fallin in the sand...n both start walkin towards the car...its almost morning...n the sun is rising...n shiv holds her hand
shiv- gauri i have to tell u something
gauri- ya...
shiv- well...the thing is n closes his eyes...since the day i saw u...saw nothing but u...since the day i found u...never wished to find anyone else....since the first day i loved u...i never loved anyone in the same way....i love u gauri
gauri is shocked...n doesnt know how to react...n runs...leavin shiv standin wonderin...n who sits himself in the head thinkin..n suddnely relaizes she left...n runs after n thinks..she didnt tell me yes or no...but dont worry shiv wont leave u so easily... n thinks ab mein kyaa karuu...
shiv opens his bedroom door..n sees nida n karan sittin there....
shiv- omg u guys r awesome i was jus about to call u all...i have to tell u something...
karan- we do too...come sit
shiv - no i am too tired....can this wait...
karan- no it cant
shiv- anything serious?
karan- yes very serious......

n dont worry my next part will reveal the whole raaz thing but till then u guys can guess as to wat it is

cheers

isha 😊