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hey u don't have to be sorry at all 😉
but we want r update by tomorrow 4 sure 😊

Originally posted by: jiya imdad

hey u don't have to be sorry at all 😉
but we want r update by tomorrow 4 sure 😊

yub yup might be on a lil early even cuz i am writin it right now so 😊

sorry i have updated in a while...here is the update...alsio my frand got into a huge accident today n i was in the hospital so she has been on my mind all day...but ya here is the update

Part 15
shiv- jus talk clearly!!
nida- well about 2 years ago...a boy comminted suicided....becuz of a girl...who made him fall in love with her to such an extent that u can do anything for her...n when she left..him.... he killed himself..... n u know y she left him...becuz all she did was becuz of a bet....n u know she isnt all she seems...she does this on purpose too....ppl give her contracts to trap ppl...n she does it...for her enjoyment...n she thinks she is helpin others
shiv- wat!
karan- n she was fully aware of wat she was doin so there was no forcement.....
shiv- how does this relate to gauri?
karan- wat do u think should happen to this girl
shiv- she should go to hell but y r u tellin me this?
karan- cuz that girl is gauri
shiv is shocked- wat... no u guys r lyin!! she isnt like that...she doesnt play with ppl's emotions!...she loves me n i love her...no there must be more to the story it could be some other gauri
nida- no there isnt cuz i was there at the incident...n closes her eyes...it was my lil bro....shiv...n he died cuz of that gauri of urs...only becuz of her stupid bet...n i blame her...n i am jus protectin u shiv...trust me she doesnt love u...she'll probably is bettin on u too...n if u die the more enjoyment she gets!!!
shiv- i dont belivie this i wont...i'll ask gauri n storms out
nida- shiv no!
shiv is on the road...n the wind is blowing...n tears in his eyes...n thinks no this cant be true...n it pours rains n song plays in the bak
Dil hai ke manta nahi
Mushkil badi hai, rasme mohabaat ye jaanata hi nahi
Dil hai ke manta nahi
Ye bekarari kiyu ho rahi hai ye janata hi nahi
Dil hai ke manta nahi
bak at the house....
karan- u said gauri was involed with drugs n u told shiv something esle
nida- trust me...she isnt safe..n cuz of her my bro died n she can get trap anyone...she is dangerous its for the better n u better not tell shiv i lied to him...
karan- y am i gettin the feelin this is personal revenge more than about protectin shiv
nida- r u on her side or mine...n anyways i know wat i am doin? n leaves karan smiling...
nida finds shiv...- shiv listen gauri isnt gud..she is actin...she doesnt love u...n u can ask her...n let me take u to her to show u her true colours...
shiv is speechless...
gauri enters a club...n goes to the counter
man gets up from table n goes to her- gauri...my dear how u been?
gauri sighs*- Arjun.. have u called me here?
A- well..wat am i hearin about this shiv kapoor
gauri- y r u so concerned?
A- hearin ur real close
gauri- r u spyin on me? u know the more i think the more of i come to hate u...
A- sorry sweets...but got some info for u (tells her something in slience) so wat r u goin to do?
gauri- u'll soon find out..
A- u know this one might not be so easy..
gauri- shut up...n leaves...n goes outside n wonders...wat will happen if shiv finds out...n kaya she's been after me for the longest time wat if she tells shiv...everything wil be over..then even i wont be able to do anything! n sees shiv standin infront of her...n is shocked!

sorry if it was confusin..should make more sense as i update..which i will try my best to do soon...sorry for any mistakes

cheers

isha

true..this is confusing
try to clear up this mess sooon
continue soooooooon
😊
btw y did that grl lie..she could have told him the truth 😕

wait she does WAT!! she kills ppl by placing bets on them??? what a psycho!!

u know what this reminds me of, my moms friends were talking bout this woman who used to bathe dead bodies for burials and they said that she would put a piece of paper with a person's name on it in the roof of the dead ppl's mouths and that person would die and she killed many that way lol idk why they were talking bout that...its creepy though!!

after such a long time but gooooooood 👏 👏

confusin yet wonderful.....
👏 👏 👏
continue soon....

great update hun!! btu it was really confusing as though

why did nida lie to shiv , she should have told him the truth 😕 ........this girl has something up her sleeve , it seems as if she's seeking personal revenge on gauri.........
what was gauri hiding from shiv? that she was involved in the drug racket.....
i somehow feel she was not intentionally involved in that case but was trapped into it........
and who's this arjun???
lots of suspense!!
continue soon 😃

ohkiee...Gauri...is she a gold digger or sumthing coz this has realli confused me..cant imagine her as a bad charachter!!