Chakravyuh

Tajurba hai unhe zindagi ka...
Jeeya hai unhone un lamhon ko...
Un ehsaason.. ko,
Un tanhaayeeon ko...
Jinhe jeevan ka sach maana jaata hai...

Par bhavnaaon mein behkar,
Apni hi naatin ki chaaah mein..
Rachaya ek chakravyuh...
Uljhe hue ehsaason ka...

Rishton ko uljhaaane ...
Is kadar...Bikhar ke reh jaaye ..
Naazuk rishte....Ulajh ke reh jaaye ..
Zindagiyaaan....

Devika Ji, a self made woman, a woman with a strong mind , strong emotions , a determined woman, and a self confessed slow decision maker , one who looks or steps back....

A woman who vowed to break a sanctious relation as a marraige for the sake of her own means. But for a woman driven by emotions herself, a business deal seems far too little to take upon herself the wrath for runing a scared relation.

Resort to malice , deceit she did, hiding in the shadows...
Of failure that seemed obvious,
Owing to the budding compassion...and trust ...of the kindred souls,
Resort now she did , to break the tie, of trust .....

A slow decision maker , she has finally decided , one she shall never go back on.... mislead a novice in the name of trust she does, for she aims not the novice, but the ties that bind her..., of the empire she is a part of... of a devastation she seeks of the family that the novice stands tied to..

A devious mind , she possess, for set ground has she for a war she fights alone, in anticipation of victory...

A victory in a battle , of which the enemy knows not, for shall he not fight.. and so shall the victory remain unttained... in battle fought against no one

-Sareeta

very good sareeta 👏 u always do a splendid job 😊

sareeta fantastic and its a pleasure to read all your thoughts.. 👏

great job and keep it up and i will continue to appreciate all your beautiful lines you penned down so perfectly.. 😃

Originally posted by: cute_face86

great sareeta ji 👏

Awwwww, thank you so much Amna!! 😊

Originally posted by: boomerang123

very good sareeta 👏 u always do a splendid job 😊

Awwwwieee, so sweet of you to say that! You've made my day!! Thank you so much! 😊

Originally posted by: vivaviva

sari..u too good 👏 👏

Aww, Sindhu, thanks so much yaar!!! Anthu, Devika, with her big tikka did inspire me finally to pen down so many lines in her name!!! 😆

Originally posted by: 3 angels

sareeta fantastic and its a pleasure to read all your thoughts.. 👏

great job and keep it up and i will continue to appreciate all your beautiful lines you penned down so perfectly.. 😃

Aww, Khyaatee, main kya boloon .. abhi.. aap mere posts ki itni saraahnaa karte hoon.. ki you leave me speechless.. meri bolti band ho jaati hai...😊

Humbled... I say...

Thank you ! THank you! Thank you!😊

Originally posted by: rinita

Superb 👏 👏 👏

Thank you so much Rinita!!! 😊

Good Writing
Who's the inspiration?



Shiv Gauri Rock

Originally posted by: CINDRELLA

Good Writing
Who's the inspiration?

Thank you so much for the compliment. As for the inspiration, for the above specific post, the lady with the tikka in KAA 😆

OKay, jokes apart, hand on heart, its the raw emotions , that one feels and that I feel I relate to well enuf to be able to understand and pen them down in words!

Hope that answered your question to an extent although it wasnt exhaustive...😊