I Don't Care Shiv(ff)last part pg55 - Page 5

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Posted: 18 years ago
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I read it and it's great! I love the fact that it is long 😃 Now Shiv is starting to fall for Gauri.. am I right? 😉 Please continue soon !!! Keep up the awesome work 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i guess our shiv will get attracted 2 gauri now

nice part
cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: pm4eva


aww thanks! I feel special😆! I'm going to go read now!!

😉😃😉 thanks alot for liking my ff and keep on reading😃 and you will get all your answers about Shiv and Gauri 😉

Dua

Edited by Dua4U - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: terename

wowwwwwwwwww man its just 2 good 👏.sorry but i was so bored tht the other ff they r so long n they write the next part after so many days but urs is good n thanx God tht u dont do tht anyways keep on goin i really love ur ff n waitin for the next part.

awww that's so sweet of you I am feeling so good that you liked my ff and ya I always try to post the next part as soon as I could so people like you don't have to wait 😉 thanks alot and keep on reading😛😃

Dua

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey guys thanks alot I m sorry I won't be able to continue today but I will write the next part tommorow

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Posted: 18 years ago
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I Don't Care Shiv

Recap:G:Shiv aap gher jayain main Maya aur Vikram k sath chali jaoon gee
S:ok guys take care bye

Part 5
After 2 Weeks

Gauri and Kaya were talking when Maya and Palak came there

P:yaar Kaya main aur Maya bhi computer courses kerny ka souch rahy hain so can you tell us the address

K:ohhhhh to late

M:mutlab

K:yarr woh center tu close ho gaya

P and M:oh no

G:ager woh bund ho gaya hai tu kya howa aur kissi jagah per addmission ly lou

K:haan

P:ya you guys are right chalo abhi chulty hain

M:haan chalo Gauri aur Kaya come on

G:nahi yarr mera dil nahi hai tum loug jao

K:kya yarr chalo na

G:nahi such main mood nahi hai

K:ok

Palak,Maya and Kaya leave

After 3 hours

Palak and Maya have got addmission

P:Maya aur Kaya waisy yaar jagah tu buhut achi hai

M:haan yaar aur woh handsome guy yaad hai jiss ney humain dicount diya

K:such main kash mery bhi mom kee best friend ka beta etna acha aur good looking aur hot hota

G:what are you guys talking about

P:hmmm kuch nahi woh kya hai na ajj hum jahan addmission k liye gaye thy wahan per ek lardka tha jiss ney Maya ko pehchan liya and he gave us dicount on fees just because me and Maya are the best friends of his mom's best friend's daughter's

Palak,Maya and Kaya start laughing

G:acha please sahi sahi batao na

K:ok Gauri I will tell you jiss jagah enn donou pagaloun ka addmission howa hai woh institute Shiv ka hai aur ous ney Maya ko pehchan liya and he gave them discount on fees aur humain tea bhi peelaee

M:such main Gauri kitna caring hai woh he gave us discount just because of you

P:main tumharee jagah hoti tu Shiv ka peecha na chourti

K:haan but kya karain we are not that lucky like Gauri aur Maya tum sharam karo you are already engaged

they all were laughing but inside Gauri was thinking that Shiv is not that nice you guys think he is caring but he is not but she didn't said anything infront of them she just kept laughing

After 1 month
Life was going really fast and busy Gauri never met Shiv she always asked the lady to say that she is sleeping, her leg is hurting, she is having headache, she is not feeling well she was making all these excuses because she didn't want to see Shiv

G:main ous sy kabhi nahi miloun gee jo sirf apni mom k promise kee khatir etna acha bun raha hai I Don't Care Shiv I can live my life without your money

Gauri was thinking all this when Kaya came and asked her to get ready

G:Kaya hum ja kahan rahy hain

K:tum chalo chup ker k

G:but....

K:ok I will tell you mujhe Palak ney kaha hai k main aur tum ousy hostel k bahir milain aur Maya bhi

G:ok

Gauri,Kaya and Maya were waiting for Palak

P:hi guys

K:hi shi chour and tell us why did you call us here

P:yarr woh I m sorry mujhe tum sub ko chour k jana pary ga

G:bolo bhi mery jaan nikal rahi hai

P:start laughing meri shadi ho rahi hai

Kaya,Gauri and Maya:whatttttttttt

P:haan aur woh bhi next week aur tum sub pagaloun ko ana hai aur mery gher rahna hai

K,G and M:congratz yarr

they all were really happy

K:yarr but hum mehndi kee raat ayain gaye aur phir 3 din tumhare gher rahain gaye

P:ok ub tum loug mery sath chalo shopping kerny

M:wait a minute Kaya aur Gauri main sy ek ko mery sath ana hai mujhe zara kissi kaam jana hai

P:hmmmmmmm

G:kaya tum Palak k sath jao main Maya k sath jati hoon kyun k mujhe tu etna experience nahi hai shopping ka

so Kaya and Palak leave for Mall.Maya and Gauri were on thier way

G:waisy Maya tumhe jana kahan hai

M:jahan main computer classes lety hoon wahan

G:kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

M:ess main etna shocked hony kee kya baat hai

G:tum ney pehle kyun nahi bola

Gauri was praying k wahan Shiv na ho

M:ok Gauri aoo chalain

G:nahi main car main wait kerty hoon you go

M:ok

Gauri thinking to herself:shuker hai Shiv sy mulaqat nahi ho gee

but God has decided something else for her she saw Shiv and a girl sitting right beside Shiv in his car they were talking and the girl's name was Ipshita

just than Maya came back

M:chalain

G:haan

just then Shiv came out of his car

S:hi Maya and hi Gauri tum loug yahan

M:haan woh mujhe kuch kaam tha

S:ohh ok

I:Shiv

S:ya Ipshita come here meet Gauri my mom's best friends daughter and that's Maya Gauri's friend

I:ohhh hi

M and G:hi

Ipshita gave a bad look to Gauri

I:chalain Shiv

S:haan ok Gauri bye

Gauri and Maya came back

M:dekha Gauri woh Ipshita ajj kal Shiv k sath buhut zada ghoomti hai class main bhi hur koee Shiv aur Ipshita kee batain kur raha hota hai

G:maya main zara rest ker loun I m really tired

M:no prob

G:kyun Shiv kyun kya tum ney aisa pata nahi tum ney Ipshita ko kya bataiya ho ga mery bary main k bechari akely hai no one is there to take care of her and I am doing all this because of my mom's promise

Next Day
Gauri went to Shiv's institute without telling anyone She was looking around when she saw 2 girls talking about Shiv and Ipshita she just came back from there

K:Gauri kahan gaee thee

G:such ka pata lagany

K:what

G:kuch nahi

K:acha remember we all are going for shopping in the evening when everyone will be free

G:ok

Dua




Edited by Dua4U - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#47
ok guys here is the next part I hope you guys will like it and do comment

Dua
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Posted: 18 years ago
#48
Nice ff!!plzzzzzzzzzz continue!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#49
poor gauriiii 😭

hope she gets shivv... 😊

keep up tha good workk... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#50
I'm gonna guess you don't like Ipshita 😆 😆 😆 I loved it (once again) I hope you continue soon!

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