I Don't Care Shiv(ff)last part pg55

hi guys I just love reading the fan fic,romantic scenes of Shiv and Gauri so,I have also decided to write a fan fic but it's not goin to be too long I will try to keep it short:

*The main Idea is taken from a Novel but I am going to add my ideas to it:

I Don't Care Shiv

Shiv:hot,caring guy.ghusa ka buhut bura hai and right now he is in Canda because of his studies:

Gauri:cute and very quiet gal she don't talk that much:when she was in grade 3 she had to stop her studies because of her mother:

Nikhila:sweet lady Shiv's mom. she miss Shiv alot who is out of country because of his studies.

Devika:Gauri's mom and Nikhila's best friend:she is really sick so doctor told her not to do anything.

Part 1

Gauri is praying after she is finished praying she goes to kitchen to make tea for her mom and after making tea she comes out and goes to her mom's room.

Gauri:mom(loudly)

Devika:ahista bool Gauri yaheen hoon murr nahi gaee main

Gauri:crying mom ager app ney phir aisy baat kee tu main aap sy kabhi baat nahi karoun gee

Devika:laughing sorry beta I was just kidding la chai dey

Gauri:yeh lain

Devika:Gauri mujhe maaf ker dou meri wajah sy tum school bhi nahi jaty aur tumhare sath kee larkiyan tu ub grade 10 main hoon gee shayed ya phir graduate ho gaee hoon gee aur tum.

Gauri:Ma kuch nahi hota aap bus theekh ho jaoo main abhi aty hoon

Gauri didn't want her mom to feel bad so she left the room

Devika calls her best friend Nikhila

Nikhila:hello

Devika:hello kya hall hai Nikhila

Nikhila:main theekh hoon tum sunao Devika kaisy ho aur Gauri kaisy hai

Devika:kuch mut poucho Nikhila main buhut pareshan hoon mery pass zada waqut nahi hai aur ager mujhe kuch ho gaya tu Gauri ka kya ho ga

Nikhila:kaisy batain ker rahi ho Devika tum ko kuch bhi nahi ho ga

and just to make Devika feel better she says aur Gauri kee fikar mutt karo main hoon na anywayz I m coming there tomorow ok

Devika:ok ub main murr bhi jaoon tu koee ghum ya fikar nahi bye

next day

Gauri is as usuall finished with everything and now she is coming to her mom's room with the cup of tea

Gauri:Mom yeh lain chai

Gauri:mom outh bhi jain

she puts the cup on the table and goes towards the bed

Gauri:Ma othain Ma

but her mom is not waking up she is no more in this world

Gauri:Mom,Mom Maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

*it's a long one so, that's it for now this is my first time I hope u guys will like it do comment and please forgive me if u don't like it

Dua

thanks guys atleast kissi ko tu pasand aya

WOW!! luv it 👏 👏 plz cont soon 😳

great start hun!! please do continue 😊

thanks alotttttttttt I will write the next part tonight(inshAllah)or may be tomorow

Dua

it's gr8 lookin 4ward 2 read da next part

X.o.X.o.---Jasmine---x.O.x.O

i like ur ff
plz continue and plz make da next part longer PLZZ

I'll be looking forward to reading the next part to!!!!

nice fanfic plz continue soon 👏

great job!!i loved it !!AWESOME!!!pleasseee continue soon... 👏