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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMG I m soooo happy because you guys liked my ff and I will write the next part today InshAllah just give me sometime I am really busy and thanks alot for your sweet comments

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I Don't Care Shiv
Recap:K:acha remember we all are going for shopping in the evening when everyone will be free
G:ok

Part 6

Gauri,Kaya,Maya and Palak go for shopping.

P:waisy what are you guys wearing on my wedding?

G:hmmm I will wear a suit

K:whattttt no Gauri

M:we all will wear sarees how is that???

G:naaa buhut hee bura plan hai main tu saree nahi pahunoon gee

M:haan haan pata hai you want to wear that after your wedding jub tum Shiv k sath dinner per jaoo gee

G:shut up Maya

P:nahi Gauri I think Maya ka plan buhut acha hai

K:ya mujhe bhi acha laga hai

M:so it's done hum sub saree pahun rahy hain

Palak's Wedding

Kaya,Maya and Gauri were getting ready.Kaya was wearing a blue saree,Maya was wearing a pink saree

K:yarr Gauri juldi karo tum bhi ready ho jao

G:tum dono tu ready ho jao main bhi hoo jaoon gee

M:acha main kaisy lug rahy hoon

K:tum jaisy kal lug rahy thee waisy ajj lug rahi ho Gauri mujhe batao main kaisy lug rahi hoon

Gauri looked at both of them they were looking really nice

G:tum dono buhut achi lug rahi hoo

K:ok ub jao aur tayar ho aoo Palak ka bhai humain lany a raha ho ga

Gauri was ready after 30 mintues she was wearing a black saree with lots of bangels and she was wearing matching earings she curled her hairs and first time in her life she had put makeup on she had a really nice eye makeup with eye liner which was making her eyes look more preetty and she also had lipstick on after looking at her Maya whistled

G:kiya hai

M:kash ajj Shiv sahib yahan hoty tu woh tu pagal ho jaty after looking at you you are looking awsome today

G:Maya you know what tum mery sy maar khao gee

K:Gauri she is right you are looking so preetty today ajj pehle baar tum ney makeup kiya hai etna tayar hoee ho

G:thanks yarr

K:I also wish k app kee mom kee best friend ka beta ajj yahan hota

Maya and Kaya start laughing

Gauri was thinking to herself:ajj tu main ous kee shakal bilqul bhi nahi dekhna chahty
they were ready to go when Gauri was called to principal's office

G:ajj kyun bulaya hai principal ney na hee ajj sunday hai aur na hee 1st of the month hai

Gauri came to Mrs.Shayla's office

SH:aoo beta you are looking really preetty today

G:thanks app ney mujhe bolaya tha

SH:haan beta Shiv aya hai tum sy milney ok you guys talk main abhi aty hoon

Shiv was looking at Gauri who was looking awsome in black saree

S:hi

G:hi

S:bathou

G:no I am ok

Shiv was just looking at her face she had a very irritating look on her face Shiv knew that she is mad because he came here but he was enjoying that look on her face she was looking at the clock again and again because she knew that Shiv will leave after 5 mintues but it was more than 10 mintues

S:soo kahieen ja rahi hoo

G:haan ub main hostel main tu aisy kapry nahi pahunoun gee

S:kahan ja rahi hoo

G:mery friend Palak kee shadi hai

S:ohhh main chour doon

G:nahi it's ok Palak ka bhai a raha hai humain lany

S:ok

it was more than 15 minutes Gauri was sooo mad

S:ok main chalta hoon bye

G:bye

Kaya,Maya were waiting for Gauri

K:kahan rah gaee thee

G:kuch nahi yarr Shiv aya tha

Kaya and Maya:ohhhhh tu yeh baat hai

G: shut up guys acha chalo ub daer nahi ho rahi
and they all leave

they all had fun on Palak's wedding

After 2 Weeks
Gauri was working with Daksh she had left the other job

Daksh was a very rich man he was married but he never accepted her wife he never told anyone about his marrige so when he saw Gauri working he was so impressed with Gauri's beauty that he offered her a job.

Gauri was not aware of all this she thought that Daksh is a really nice person:

Guari was reading a book when a lady comes and ask her to come to the principal's office

Gauri comes to principal's office

SH:aoo beta app ko yeh sun ker buhut khushi ho gee k Shiv app ko gher lajany aya hai

G:kya

SH:beta hum sub app ko buhut miss karain gaye ub app Shiv sy baat ker lou

S:hi Gauri apna luggage pack kar lou tum gher wapis ja rahi ho

G:koun sy gher Mr.Shiv woh gher jiss main app aur app kee wife Ipshita rahain gaye aur mujhe sirf Nikhila aunty k liye bheekh main ek room dey dayain gaye sorry but I Don't Care Shiv main ub akelee rah sakti hoon I can live my life alone with my friends in this hostel if you are worried about that promise than don't worry Aunty sub kuch dekh rahy hain main apni marzi sy app k aur Ipshita k gher main nahi rahna chahti ok bye

Gauri just went back to her room and cried like hell

Dua


Edited by Dua4U - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I hope you guys will like this part so do reply and tell me how this part was

Dua
Edited by Dua4U - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#64
awesome part n i luv gauri's guts lol
cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#65
Great 👏 It was so perfect that Shiv came when Gauri was looking super pretty!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awsomeeee.. 👏

right on his face...i hope he goes with gauri...😳

ipshita🤢😡😡

Edited by racho8 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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You are great writer buddy. 👏 👏 Your story kind of reminds me of hum tum where the two people went through so many stages in almost 10 years and then finally met. I do not believe in love that happens too fast as it can also evaporate very fast, thus this story gives kind of gives a more realistic approach on people's lives.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Nice ff!plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue jaan!!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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very very veryyyyyyyyy good 👏 thts all i can say 2 good part n i m waitin for the next 1 keep up the good work bud take care n hope 2 read ur next part soon 😊
Edited by terename - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dua4U

I hope you guys will like this part so do reply and tell me how this part was

Dua



u r really good at making me confuse
😆
shiv is acting weird each day😆
but i like it😊..nw im waiting till shiv take gauri with him or save her from that bad guy

continue soooon

by the way its cool the way shiv was with gauri for more than 5min😃

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