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Posted: 18 years ago
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I Don't Care Shiv

Recap:Gauri thinks that Shiv is doing everything just to keep his mom's promise so, she decides to use the money from her own account instead of taking money from Shiv

Part 4
G:Kaya shaam main jub tum computer class k liye jaoo gee tu mujhe bhi sath main ly jana because main ney bank jana hai

K:wahhh kya baat hai madam aap theekh tu hain na pehle baar koee cheez mangi hai aap ney zarour chalo mery sath it's going to be more fun

Gauri goes to bank and take some money out from her account

Life was going like this she was using money from her account when she was thinking that the money will be over in sometime than what will she do so she decided to talk with Palak,Kaya and Maya about this

G:yarr main buhut bore hoti hoon so I was thinking k koee job ker loun paisy bhi a jayain gaye what say

M:not bad Kaya please pinch me kahin yeh mera khuab tu nahi yeh pehle wali Gauri tu nahi hai and she start laughing

G:bus yarr meri problem solve karo

P:well ager job kerna chahti hoo tu ess main bura kya hai

K:bura tu kuch nahi hai Palak but job k liye kuch qualifications chahiye

G:ya Kaya tum theekh kah rahi hoo

K:so tum aisa karo k mery sath computer course start ker lou aur phir shayed tum ko job bhi mill jaye

G:hmmm yeh theekh hai chalo main kal hee chalti hoon tumhare sath

Maya:acha ub yeh sub chorou let's talk about something interesting

Gauri,Kaya and Palak all together:jaisy kkkkk Vikram

M:shut up u all

Gauri has started her computer course and tomorow was sunday she didn't want to meet Shiv at any cost

Next Day
Gauri,Palak,Maya and Kaya were talking about Maya and Vikram

G:yarr mujhe bhi batao akhir yeh sub kya hai

K:kuch nahi yarr Maya ka fiancee Vikram ess ko visit kerny ata hai once a month and u should look at his face man jub woh wapis ja raha hota hai I will miss you Maya I will come next month aur pata nahi kya kya kahta hai

P:aur Maya ess ka tu bura haal ho jata hai rou rou k

they all were having fun when Gauri was called to the principal's office she knew that it's going to be Shiv she didn't want to go

G:hi

S:hi how r u?

G:main theekh hoon aur mujhe kuch nahi chahiye

S:ok yeh lou main tumhare liye Pizza aur Ras Malai laya hoon kha laina

G:enn sub kee kya zarorut thee

S:main ney suna hai k tum ney koee computer course liya hai

G:haan kyun

S:nahi acha hai zindagi main agy barho ok main chalta hoon his five minutes were over

Gauri came back holding those things

M:yeh sub kya hai

K:hmmm Shiv sahib dey k gaye hoon gaye yarr Gauri waisy hud hai etna khayal rukhta hai tumhara hur sunday ata hai

Gauri didn't said anything and all ate Pizza and Ras Malai

After 1 Month
Gauri was looking for a job tomorow was 1st of the month and she was sure that Shiv will come to visit her tomorow

Next Day
Gauri was not feeling well she was crying like hell she was missing Nikhila so much when a lady came to call her she went to the principal's room and Shiv was waiting for her

Shiv as usual

S:hi kaisy ho

G:theekh hoon aur mujhe kuch nahi chahiye

S:main ney yeh tu poucha hee nahi

S:anyways yeh lou he gave the money to Gauri

G:sorry but mujhe nahi chahiye and she just walked away

Next Day

Gauri has got a job Kaya took Gauri somewhere

G:Kaya hum kahan ja rahy hain

K:ek minute

after sometime Gauri and Kaya were in a big Salon

K:hi yeh hai meri friend Gauri ess ka hair cut facial,eye brows sub kuch ker dayain

a girl:no problem

G:but Kaya mujhe nahi kerwana yeh sub

K:look Gauri tum buhut preety hoo but hur khoubsorut cheez ko khoubsorut rukhny k liye kuch na kuch kerna parta hai and kal sy tum job start karoo gee so u should look good

after 2 hours Gauri was ready Kaya couldn't belive her eyes just beacuse Gauri had a layer haircut with highlights and everything else was also done she was looking soooo preetty

Next Day
Gauri was working when a guy comes there he was talking with Gauri's boss but looking at Gauri his name was Daksh

After 3 Days
Daksh was coming to Gauri's office reqularly Gauri was working on her computer when Daksh came there and he was sitting right infront of Gauri

G:jee app ko koee help chahiye

D:hi Gauri mera naam Daksh hai aur meri buhut bara office hai if you want main tumhe wahan achi job dey sakta hoon aur pay bhi achi hoo gee

G:no thanks main yahan hee theekh hoon

Next Day
a guy came and he was talking with Gauri's boss when Gauri's boss came outside of his room talking with that guy

GB:aur sunain Shiv kya hall hai

S:buss theekh hoon

GB:Gauri aap ney bataya hee nahi k Shiv aap ko janty hain

Gauri was so emabrassed she thought that Shiv came there purposley so he can show Gauri that jiss k pass woh job keti hai woh ous ka friend hai

S:hey main ajj Gauri ko 1 hour juldi ly k ja sakta hoon

GB:why not man yeh bhi koee pouchny kee baat hai

Gauri was shocked how come her boss was behaving so nice woh tu ous sy hamesha hee rude bolty hain Gauri didn't want to go with Shiv but she couldn't say anything infront of her boss

S:chalain Gauri

G:ok

Shiv and Gauri were sitting in his car and Gauri was thinking

G:oh tu car bhi ly lee aur mujhe bataiya bhi nahi

S:ok Gauri kahan chalain KFC,Pizza Hut

G:kahin bhi nahi buss mujhe aap hostel chour dayain

S:wahan bhi chour doon ga and he parked his car infront of KFC chalo bahir aoo

Gauri and Shiv were going inside when Maya called her

M:hey Gauri kahan bhi

G:hi Maya tum yahan

M:haan Vikram k sath aee hoon

G:ohhh ok

M:Vikram yeh Gauri hai mery friend and Gauri he is Vikram my fiancee

V:hi Gauri

G:hi

M:aur yeh etna handsome guy koun hai

Gauri was so embarrased

V:Maya please

G:nahi it's ok I know her yeh Shiv hain meryyyy....

Vikram and Maya:mery???

G:meree Mom kee best friend k bety

Maya:ohhhh tu yeh hai Shiv

S:hi guys

V:hi Shiv and they all go inside

M:waisy Gauri tum aur Shiv kamal kee jodee lug rahy thy

G:shut up Maya woh soun ly ga

but it was too late Shiv had already listened to what ever Maya said

V:yarr Gauri tum tu etny smart hoo aur yeh Maya uff etny moti hoti ja rahy hai

when Vikram said this Shiv looked at Gauri who was wearing a red suit with small earing and light lipgloss she was looking soo pretty

M:Vikram ek baar shadi ho jany dayain fer dekhan main app k sath kya kerty hoon
and they all start laughing

G:Shiv aap gher jayain main Maya aur Vikram k sath chali jaoon gee

S:ok guys take care bye

ufffff this part is a long one

Dua


Edited by Dua4U - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#32
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wowwww 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ok here is a really long part I m just trying to write long parts please do tell me how this part was I will be waiting for your comments

Dua
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Posted: 18 years ago
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too good.......it was fab! plzzzzzz cont 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dua4U

ok here is a really long part I m just trying to write long parts please do tell me how this part was I will be waiting for your comments

Dua



k im bit confused..wht is shiv upto?????

anyway i liked it
its nice...... but this shiv is nt the same shiv v c in KAA... right??? he is different😊

continue soooon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: ash9



k im bit confused..wht is shiv upto?????

anyway i liked it
its nice...... but this shiv is nt the same shiv v c in KAA... right??? he is different😊

continue soooon

ok well I can't tell u what is Shiv upto😉 but what Gauri thinks is this that he is a mean person who is taking care of Gauri just for his mom and ya Shiv's character is a bit different here he is mean but a caring person so keep on reading and you will get your answer😃 😉and thanks for liking it 😳

Dua

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wowwwwwwwwww man its just 2 good 👏.sorry but i was so bored tht the other ff they r so long n they write the next part after so many days but urs is good n thanx God tht u dont do tht anyways keep on goin i really love ur ff n waitin for the next part.
Edited by terename - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#38
keep it upp plzz continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#39
aw ur ff is cute lol:D
keep it up 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dua4U

thanks alot well I know that Shiv is being mean with Gauri but it has to be like this 😉 and just for u I am going to write the next part write now

Dua


aww thanks! I feel special😆! I'm going to go read now!!

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