I Don't Care Shiv(ff)last part pg55 - Page 2

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awwwwwwww......tht was so sweet n emotional 👏 .....continue soon hun

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gr8 ff cant wait 4 da next part
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thanks alottttttttttttttttt guyz I m just gona write the next part
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it was really good..Quite emotional👏...Plz do continue😳

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I Don't Care Shiv

Recap:Gauri:Ma othain Ma
but her mom is not waking up she is no more in this world
Gauri:Mom,Mom Maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Part 2

Gauri is shocked at the same time Nikhila comes

N:Gauri,Devika bhi kahaon ho
Nikhila comes to Devika's room and see shocked Gauri and Devika on the bed

N:Gauri yeh sub nahi Devika othou tum apni beti ko youn chour ker nahi ja sakti and she hugs Gauri and start crying but Gauri is still in shock

After 5 days
Gauri's condition is still same she don't talk and she doesn't eat anything Nikhila comes to her room with a glass of milk

N:Gauri beta honi ko koun taal sakta hai but life has to move on and youn kuch na kha k tum apni Ma ko dukh dey rahi ho come on drink this milk and pack your luggage you are coming with me ub tum mery sath raho gee

Gauri after listening about her mom takes the glass of milk and says

G:nahi Aunty thanks aap ney jo kuch bhi mery liye kiya but main aap k sath nahi a sakti main ess gher ko chour ker nahi ja sakti

N:sorry beta but jana tu pary ga kyun k Devika ney mujhe sy kaha tha k kal ko ager ousy kuch ho jaye tu main yeh gher baich ker paisy tumhare account main save ker doon

G:OK aunty ager Ma ney kaha tha tu kuch acha hee soucha ho ga

After 2 months
Gauri is staying with Nikhila and she is so much attached to her now that she can't imagine her life without Nikhila

N:Gauri beta main chah rahi thee k tum kissi private school main admission ly loo

G:Nahi aunty

N:wat do u mean nahi aunty beta zindagi main agy barho ok ajj mery sath chal k admission kerwa aoo ok now give me a smile and ya I forgot to tell you k kal Shiv a raha hai Canada sy wapis

G:ohhhh is it tub hee main kahoo aap ajj etny khoush kyun hain

N:acha chalo Shiv ka room saaf karain than I have to decide wat should I make tommorow for dinner

G:haan gee ub tu beta a raha hai sub kuch bany ga and they start laughing

Next Day
Nikhila is sooo busy and Gauri is helping her

G:Aunty chalain ub aap bahir ja ker bathain main yeh thora sa kaam ker laty hoon

N:nahi beta

G:khud tu apny sary batain munwati hain aur mery koee baat nahi sonty

N:ok baba yeh lou main chali

Gauri was in kitchen and Nikhila was sitting in family room when a hot,handsome guy enters the house wearing a white collar shirt with a black sweter on top(mannnn imagine Iqbal Khan kitnaaaaaaaaaa hot lug raha ho ga)looking hot and it's none other than our Shiv.

S:Mommmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

Nikhila sees her son and hugs her and starts crying

S:wat is this mom gher na hoo tu aap roti ho aur ajj main gher wapis aya hoon tu aap rou rahi hoo

N:laughing buhut batain a gaee hain tujhe yeh tu khushi k ansoo hain pagal and than she calls Gauri

N:Gauri beta zara idher aoo

G:jee aunty
she sees Shiv Shiv also looks at her(oh my God)

N:Shiv yeh Gauri hai remember I told you on fone

S:oh ya hi Gauri

G:hi
Shiv doesn't talk that much with her and then they all had a nice dinner after the dinner Gauri goes to her room while Nikhila and Shiv talks

Next Day
Gauri was doing her home work when she had to write an Essay but she was not that good and her Engilsh was also not that good she was sitting in the family room with a irritating,annouying and mad look on her face Shiv was going outside when he saw Gauri

S:can I help you

G:jeeeee,confused

S:main ney French nahi boli kiya main aap kee koee mudat ker sakta hoon yeh

G:jee actually mujhe sy yeh essay nahi likha ja raha

S:lao main help ker doon and he writes a really good essay

next day Gauri said thanks to him

G:Jee,thankyou app ney jo essay likh ker diya tha teacher ko buhut pasand aya

S:no prob(yeh hur waqut jee jee kyun kahti hai)

After Some Days
Gauri needed help with her homework again So,she thought of asking Shiv if he can help she was thinking that just like the other day Shiv will write the Poem and she will get good marks aur ousy khud homework bhi nahi kerna pary gay.
Gauri came to Shiv's room and knocked the door

S:come in

G:jee actually mujhe aap kee help chahiye thee aap mujhe Poem likh k dey sakty hain

S:no,Gauri main ney ous din essay ess liye likha so that you will learn how to write it mager if you expect me to do you homework than sorry I think that you should do your homework bu yourself

Gauri came back and she was soooo mad at Shiv

G:kya howa ek poem hee likhney ko kaha tha etna lecture dey diya huh,ager english aty hai tu etna garoor kiss baat ka hai Canada sy kiya ho k a gaya samujhta hai hero bun gaya

next day Gauri,Nikhila and Shiv had to go to a Mehndi Shiv was wearing a black Kurta with black salwar and Gauri came out wearing a black and red suit with some choriyan but she didn't put any make up on she didn't know why but she wanted Shiv to say that she is looking good well,Shiv ney tu nahi Nikhila ney zarour kaha

N:Gauri you are looking sooo pretty today
Shiv just looked at her once and walked away while talking on his cell

days were passing by Gauri was busy in her studies and Shiv was busy in his own work when one day Nikhila fell sick she wasn't feeling well aur Gauri ka rou rou k bura haal tha she can't see Nikhila like this Nikhila asked Shiv to call Gauri

S:Gauri Ma tum ko bula rahy hain

G:main nahi aoon gee oun sy kahin jub tuk woh theekh nahi ho jaty main oun sy baat nahi karoon gee she was crying

S:haan Gauri Ma theekh ho jayain gee pehle oun kee baat suno
Gauri came to Nikhila's room with Shiv

N:naraz hai mujhe sy k main bhi tujhe chour k ja rahi hoon

G:please app aisy batain na karian app ko kuch nahi ho gaa

N:Shiv beta mery pass sirf thori sii sansain hain you promise me tha you will never leave Gauri alone and you will take good care of her

G:kaisy batain ker rahy hain aapp mera khayal rukhny k liye app hain na Shiv promise mut kerna

N:come on Shiv juldi karo

S:promise Ma and just when he said this Nikhila was gone far away from Gauri and Shiv
Gauri screamed loudly Nahi aunty aap mujhe chour ker nahi ja sakti and she was about to fall when Shiv hold her and hugged her

Dua

Edited by Dua4U - 18 years ago
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ok guys here is the next part do tell me how was it sorry that part was also emotional.

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Very nice please go on!!!!!! 👏
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all i can say is 👏 do continuee.....!!
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wow! that was emotional!! Please continue soon!
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I Don't Care Shiv

Recap:N:come on Shiv juldi karo

S:promise Ma and just when he said this Nikhila was gone far away from Gauri and Shiv
Gauri screamed loudly Nahi aunty aap mujhe chour ker nahi ja sakti and she was about to fall when Shiv hold her and hugged her

Part 3

After 1 week

Gauri's is sitting in Nikhila's room she was crying since last week she didn't even know where Shiv was.Gauri was trying to sleep but she couldn't she went to Shiv's room

S:kya baat hai Gauri

G:mujhe neend nahi a rahee

S:giving a irriating look to her tu main kya karoo dekho Gauri mujhe buhut zaroori kaam kerna hai please go and try to sleep

G:nahi mujhe durr lagta hai kya main yahan app k kamry main sou sakty hoon

S:wattttttttttttttt r u OK please Gauri jaoo yahan sy meri perashani aur mut barhao Gauri just went back to Nikhila's room

Next Day

when Shiv opened his room's door Gauri was sleeping right infront of his room holding a picture which was taken when they were going on the Mehndi Nikhila was sitting in the middle Gauri and Shiv were standing on the sides.

Shiv felt sorry for her but at the same time he just ignored it and walked away

when Gauri waked up it was 11am she looked around for Shiv just than Shiv came back

S:Gauri pack your luggage

Gi:hum kahan ja rahy hain

S:hum nahi Gauri tum

Gi:what kahin nahi jaoon gee main ess gher sy

S:look Gauri try to understand tum yahan nahi rah sakti and that's final

Gauri couldn't say anything she was shocked how could Shiv do this Gauri packed her luggage and went to Shiv who was waiting for her

S:chalain

Gauri didn't said anything

S:Gauri ajj sy tum hostel main rahoo gee wahan kee principal Mom kee friend hain I told her everything and she have no problem tum wahan rah sakty ho aur apni studies bhi continue ker skaty ho wahan kee fees main dey diya karoon ga

Shiv was looking at Gauri expecting her to say something but she kept quiet

Shiv and Gauri came to the hostel and Shiv introduced Gauri to the principal

S:Aunty yeh hai Gauri aur Gauri yeh hain Mrs.Shayla Daksh yahan kee principal

Sh:hi Gauri how are you

G:hi main theekh hoon

S:so aunty main ub chalta hoon ok Gauri bye

Gauri didn't said anything to him

Sh:aoo Gauri main tum ko hostel dekhaon aur tumhara room bhi

Gauri liked the hostel it was pretty nice and than Shayla showed Gauri her room that she was supposed to share with one more girl named Kaya

Sh:Gauri yeh hai Kaya ka room jo k ajj sy tumhara aur Kaya dono ka hai

Shayla said bye to Gauri and told her that if she need anything she can always ask her

G:thanks alot

Sh:no problem beta

Gauri came inside the room it was a really nice room she opned her bag and took the picture out and started crying

G:aunty app dekh raheen hain na Shiv ney mery sath kitna bura kya and she again started crying......

when Gauri opened her eyes a girl was drinking coffee while sitting on the bed

Kaya:hi I m Kaya prinicpal ney mujhe bataiya k ajj sy tum yahan rahny wali hoo

G:hi I am Gauri (Gauri didn't said anything else she didn't want to talk with her)

After 1 week

Gauri was sitting with Kaya Kaya told her about herself and her other 2 friends

K:yarr tumhe mera naam tu pata hee hai aur main college sy farig ho ker evening main computer course ker rahi hoon yeh bhi pata hai so, main tumhe apni friends Maya aur Palak k bary main batati hoon Maya who is engaged to Vikram who comes to visit her once in a month is really nice she is in the same hostel and Palak who talks alottttttttttt is cute kabhi kabhi mujhe ghusa bhi ata hai because woh buhut bolti hai she lives in the same city so ous ko hostel main rahny kee permission nahi.

Gauri didn't said anything she was just listening just than a lady comes and told Gauri that principal is calling her Kaya was really worried that why did principal called her

G:don't worry main abhi aty hoon Gauri came to principal's office

G:app ney mujhe bulaya tha

SH:haan Gauri Shiv aya hai tum se milney waisy tu hum relatives ko once in a month any kee permission dety hain but shiv kah raha hai k woh hur sunday aya kary ga ok main abhi aty hoon

S:hi Gauri kaisy ho kuch chahiye tu nahi

G:main theekh hoon aur mujhe kuch nahi chahiye ager kuch chahiye ho ga tu bata doon gee

after five minutes Shiv said bye to Gauri

Gauri came back to her room Kaya was waiting for her

K:sub kuch theekh hain na

G:haan

After 2 month

Gauri has learned lots of things from her friends Kaya,Maya and Palak they all were really nice.during all this time Shiv never missed a single sunday he always comes to visit Gauri and asks the same questions and on the first of the month he gives money to her for her fees and other stuff.today was monday and 2nd of the month Shiv didn't came yesterday so she was worried if everything is fine she was also missing her home alot so she thought of going home she couldn't think anything else she just came home she knocked the door but none opened the door after a long time Shiv came rubbing his eyes

S:Gauri tum yahan

G:haan woh main...

Shiv wasn't there he went inside Shiv went to washroom and Gauri went to Nikhila's room and started crying Shiv came there and gave her a packet

S:sorry main kal nahi a saka yeh lou paisy

Gauri gave a really bad and sad look to Shiv and she took the money

S:Gauri actually mujhe meeting k liye jana hai

Gauri was getting what Shiv was trying to say

G:main chalti hoon

she came back and she was crying like hell

G:woh kya samujhta hai k main wahan paisoon k liye gaee thee ufffff ess sub sy pehle main murr kyun na gaee Gauri was thinking that she has became a burden on Shiv who always comes to visit her and gives her money just to keep his mom's promise she was feeling really sorry for herself she didn't want to take money from him and she didn't want to meet him again.she decided to use money from her own account.

ohh I think it's long enough😛

Dua

Edited by Dua4U - 18 years ago

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