I Don't Care Shiv(ff)last part pg55 - Page 10

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wow gr8 fan fic...u r really gud writter 👏
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wow!!! nice FF hun....keep it up😊...can't wait for the next part😳👏

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Originally posted by: coolgirl249

awsome part 👏 👏 👏
y he wants to take her back???do he really love gauri??and now wat will he do???
cont soon plz 😊 😊 😊

well just like I always say that keep on reading and you all will get your answers and thanks alot for reading and liking my ff

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thanks alottttttttttttt guys this wouldn't have been possible without your sweet comments I know I am taking so long for the next part I am really sorry

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I Don't Care Shiv
Recap:Shiv I Don't Care now main ub apni zindagi akely guzar sakti hoon
Gauri just went back to her room and cried like hell

Part 7

Life was going ok Daksh has given a new and very big cabin to Gauri and she was personal secratory of Daksh

Gauri was sitting in her cabin when a guy comes without knocking the door and it was none other than Shiv. he was standing in the middle of the door holding the door when the security gaurd comes from outside

SG:I am sorry mam main ney enn sahib ko buhut rouka but yeh mery baat nahi soun rahy thy I am very sorry mam app Daksh sir ko nahi batana nahi tu mery job chali jaye gee please

G:it's ok app jayain

SG:shukeriya mam

he was gone and now Shiv was sitting on the chair which was right infront of Gauri and he was just looking at her

G:jee batain kiya problem hai app kee aur bina knock kiye app mery cabin main kaisy aye don't you have any kind of manners

Shiv got up from his chair and came towords Gauri he was so close to Gauri that Gauri got scared she could see the anger in his eyes

S:I do Miss Gauri I know everything but right now I am not in a mood of talking about manners.

Shiv went back to his place where he was sitting before

S:look Gauri I don't want you to work here

he was talking very polietly and calmly now

G:ohhhhh so that's what bothering you Mr.Shiv k main etny achy office main job kyun ker rahi hoon but you know what I don't care Shiv about you and about what ever you think aur main yeh job kissi k kahny per nahi chouroun gee aur khas ker Aap k kahny per tu kabhi nahi you just look after Ipshita and your life don't tell me what to do and what's right what's wrong yeh mery zindagi hai aur main Ipshita nahi hoon jo jo bhi app kahian gaye main karoun gee got it

shiv was so mad he got up from his chair

S:I don't want to hear anything kal sy tum mujhe ess office main nazer na aoo is that clear and he went outside

Hostel

Gauri was kind of scared from what ever Shiv said

G:nahi main kyun etna souch rahi hoon main kal phir sy job per jaoon gee aur zarour jaoon gee

K:hey Gauri chal Pizza Hut chalain

G:who else is coming

K:main,tu, Palak aur Maya

G:ohhh is it Palak is also coming I would love to go

they all got ready and went to Pizza Hut

Pizza Hut

G:so, Palak kaisy guzer rahi hai zindagi

P:buhut achi aur meri manou tu tum sub bhi shadi ker lou

G:thanks for your offer but mujhe murny ka koee shouq nahi

k, M and P:yeh tum kiya kah rahi ho

G:look yeh jo larky hoty hain they all are liers we shouldn't believe them they don't care about us

K:lou yeh tum kiya kah rahy ho jaisy humain nahi pata k Shiv tumhara kitna khayal rakhty hain aur woh bhi abhi sy shadi k baad tu tumhe koee kaam nahi kerny dayain gaye

Gauri never said anything about Shiv till today but today she decided to tell her friends what ever she thinks about Shiv

M:you are right Kaya aur Gauri hai k Shiv ko khud sy dour ker rahi hai woh ajj kal Ipshi k sath ghoomta hai kiya pata kal ko shadi bhi ker ly main ager Gauri kee jagah hoti tu Vikram ka murder kur daty laqeen etny asani sy ous ka peecha na chourty

G:haan tu ker ly shadi bhi har insan ko huq hai woh apni pasand kee shadi kary so if Shiv and Ipshi like each other tu woh shadi ker layain main kyun kissi ka murder karoun I don't care

P:very funny tum yahan bathy raho aur tumhara plane crash ho jaye ga

G:look guys main tum sub ko such such batana chahti hoon k Shiv jo kuch bhi ker raha hai woh mery liye nahi ker raha he is doing all that just to keep that promise

K:which promise

G:woh promise jo ous ney apni Mom k sath kiya tha sirf ous promise kee khatir woh mujhe paisy data tha aur har sunday ko a kur mera haal chal pouchta tha 5 minutes k liye and I know k woh 5 minutes Shiv k poury din k worst minutes hoty thy

P:butt...

G:but kiya main tum sub ko bata chuki hoon k Shiv is a selfish person

M:mager woh tu tumhe gher lajanye aya tha

K:ya aur tum ney hee manah kee tha

G:ya you guys are right woh mujhe gher lajanye aya tha kiss k gher apny aur Ipshi k gher jahan per mujhe ek kamra diya jata bheekh main aur main wiasy zindagi guzarny sy bahter murna pasand karoun gee

G:ub oun dada jee ko dekh lou apni grand daughter kee age kee larki k sath bathy hain aur dekh phir bhi hum sub ko rahy hain I told you yeh lardky na

P:waisy hum sub sy zada dekh bhi woh tumhy hee rahy hain

K:haan Gauri waisy yeh tu maan lou you are looking awsome today

M:kasam se ager mera koee bhai hota tu tumhe apni bhabhi bana laty

and they all start laughing

M:per Gauri ager Shiv yeh sub ous promise k liye ker raha tha tu ous ney mujhe aur Palak ko discount kyun diya

G:pagal larkiyoun per tu har koee impression acha dalta hai so Shiv ney bhi woh hee kiya yeh sub ker k woh tum logoun kee good books main a gaya

K:tum yahan Rani kee tarhan bathy raho aur woh Ipshi Aishweriya kee tarhan tumhare Abhishek ko ly jaye gee

G:please Kaya,Maya aur Palak main ub kabhi bhi Shiv k bary main koee baat nahi kerna chahti aur haan you guys try to stay away from these guys

M:ok guys let's do something

K:kiya

M:woh jo dada jee bathy humain ghour rahy hain oun ko wapis jaty hoye kahain gaye k Dada jee app ka koee grand son hot hai tu humain ous ka phone no dey dayain

G:nahi yarr kyun bechary dada jee ko tung kerty hoo

P:haan woh tu Gauri ko sapnoun main apni wife bana chuky hoon gaye

G:shut up

and they all start laughing

M:chalo na Gauri buhut maza aye ga tum kaho ja k

G:na baba na main tu hostel wapis ja rahi hoon

Gauri got up and turned her face and she was shocked she was freezed she couldn't say anything

M:kiya howa aisy still kyun ho gaee

Maya also got up and she was also shocked

P and K:arey tum dono ko kiya ho gaya

they also got up and they were also shocked to see three guys sitting right beside them it was Shiv and his friends Shiv was queit but his freinds were smiling and looking at that girl who was looking so preety and cute and she was trying to tell her friends to stay away from boys

Dua

Edited by Dua4U - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ok guys no more waiting here is the next and a long part I hope that you guys will like it do comment

Dua
Edited by Dua4U - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awww poor shiv well he deserved it since he did kick her out of the house!!! i hope he breaks up with ipshita soon! continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#98
lolllll

poor shiv... 😕

awsome part!!!!!...

continue soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice part hun..i wonder wat will happen next...continue soon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
Fantastic part!~

please do continue!

please dont make us wait for long!

shiv serves u right!! u go Gauri~

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