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Posted: 18 years ago
Ok, people , here is yet another one... 😊

Prelude: Post the Shashtipoorthi function, a week later...

Setting sun, coloring the sky a deep orange... , the clocks strikes 6, as Gauri , lazing in the couch , browsing a magazine of interiors, is lost in thought...

The sharp phone rings break the silence and Gauri picks it up...
"Gauri.. , I'll be home in 1/2 hour, I've got to go to Pune, for a meet, I'll be leaving tonite... Ghar pahunchke baat karta hoon.." he hangs up , having been disturbed during the call...

Gauri , a lil surprised to react, slowly realizes and then quickly gets up and reaches his cupbaoard and slowly pulls out 2 of his suits and places them neatly on the bed, along with the ties and then suddenly lost.. goes out of the room....

In Badi Ma's room, Nikhila is resting, when Gauri knocks...
"Andar aao..." , Gauri enters.. "Arre Gauri beta.. kya hua bacche..?"
"Ji Badi wo... Shiv... wo.. aaj.. Badi ma.. wo jab bahar jaate hai... tho kaunsa suitcase leke jaate hai badi ma..?"
"Kya hua...? Wo kahin jaa raha hai.."
"Ji.. Pune jaa rahe hai kaam se... maine socha unka samaan pack kar deti hoon..."

Nkhila smiles approvingly and then helps her out with the needed and heads back, as Gauri continues to arrange his stuff on the bed... when , Shiv enters , and notices her... she being unaware of his entry....

.....To be continued...
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Posted: 18 years ago
Earlier:
as Gauri continues to arrange his stuff on the bed... when , Shiv enters , and notices her... she being unaware of his entry....

Continued:

Gauri , unaware of his presence , pulls out a suit from his cupboard and looks at it fondly smiling slightly ( its the same suit they wore to the party of their Mom's friend), and then slowly places it on hte bed , when she notices his feet and then slowly looks up.. and he slowly comes up to her and then smiles and starts joining to pack his stuff , without uttering a word and then heads to freshen up...

Having freshened up , and ready to leave , he glances at the watch and looks at her and says... "Mujhe nikalna hai ... 15 mins mein..."
"Aap dekh lijiye... sab theek hai na..."..and he cuts ...her off in between.. "It shud be fine.. dont worry.." and then puts on his coat , which she hands over and then turns arnd to pick up his luggage and is about to leave, when she calls..

"Suniye..."
"hmm.." and handing him his mobile , and wallet....
"Wo... .." looking a little hesitant....
With a knowing look, he walks towards her... "I'll be back tomorrow night.. Tum apna khayaal rakhna..." patting her on cheek carelessly and lightly, smiles, and walks off... muttering a "bye..." as Gauri looks on with a smile which fades as he closes the door behind him....
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Posted: 18 years ago
sareetaaa di awsomeeee...

first she closes the door then him....nicee 😆 😆

well continue soon...cuz i love reading ur story...
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Posted: 18 years ago
sareeta di that was sooo cute
can u write next weekend also
😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey people, Glad you liked the scenes, so thought why not pitch in another one...as a continuation of the earlier scene...

Earlier:
With a knowing look, he walks towards her... "I'll be back tomorrow night.. Tum apna khayaal rakhna..." patting her on cheek carelessly and lightly, smiles, and walks off... muttering a "bye..." as Gauri looks on with a smile which fades as he closes the door behind him....

Continued:

With the full moon smiling thru the window, Gauri realizes its 1/2 past 9 and reluctantly makes her bed and lies down with a magazine, her thoughts suddenly drifting ... "Ab thak shiv, pahunch gaye honge... unka safar theek ho... ", with her final prayer before bed, she lies down , eyes closed, not really asleep....and finally with her last thoughts of Shiv, drifts off...only to wake up to the shrill sound...

Having jus drifted off into deep sleep, she wakes up startled to the shrill ringing of the telephone..

Glacing at the clock first noting it to be 1/2 past 10, she picks the phone, not really thinking.. and sleepily..
"Hellooooo..."
"Gauri...."
"hmmm..." still sleepy, and not realizing the caller...
"Gauri...."
" hmmmmm...." a lil strongly but sleepy...and almost like out a trance...realizing the voice saying ..."Aww, u seem to be asleep, aww right.. I'll call tomm..." distantly, she blurts.. "ji... Shiv... wo..."
"Jaag gayi... ..Uh.. Main pahunch gaya...wahin batana tha...awright... you get back to sleep...Good night..."
"Ji...", nodding her head ... " good night..." and waits .. holding the receiver...when she suddenly hears ... "Phone rakho Gauri..." and chuckle..with a light hint of a tease...
"Ji.. " and she slowly puts the phone , going red in the face, smiling and she gets back to her mattress of a bed , one glance at Shiv's bed and almost involuntarily picks the remote for the AC and switches it on and goes back to sleep....

Let me know if this was ok guys.... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ash9

sareeta di that was sooo cute
can u write next weekend also
😊

Thank you so much Anu 😊

Next week , will sure try my best , but can't promise, par agar time mila tho zaroor pen karoongi... 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
hey di great parts 👏 👏...jus read all..continue soon... can't wait to read next part 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
sareetaaaa......dnt stop......i cnt wait...pl,s continue...n mre shiv gauri action.....pls
sareeta thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
Earlier:
"Ji.. " and she slowly puts the phone , going red in the face, smiling and she gets back to her mattress of a bed , one glance at Shiv's bed and almost involuntarily picks the remote for the AC and switches it on and goes back to sleep....

Continued:

With the morning rays seeping in through window.. Gauri stirs a little and slowly wakes to first glance at Shiv's bed to realize he ain't there and after a momentary surprise, she realizes he is on tour and a lil disheartened goes about her routine...

All set to start her day, she gives a lazy look around there room , before she heads downstairs towards the kitchen and heads towards the door, when caught by something she thought she noticed she stops to look back ....

A piece of paper , lying under the pillow on the bed , where shiv sleeps...
Not really concious of her actions, she walks towards the bed, thinking... "Unka letter hai, mujhe nahin dekhna chaahiye..."... and she turns around jus as she came, when the paper slips off the bed and falls down ... and she involuntarily picks it to return to its original place... when her eyes can't escape the contents of the paper...

Written in a hazy , almost in a hurry... is a list .. of things..which she realizes within a few moments are a list of books...

"Geetanjali..." by RBT.. being one she recognizes and the others she thnks are related to his business...

Pleasantly surprised... but still unable to believe... she re reads it again and then neatly places the paper back in its position...and lost in thought about the new revealation to Shiv's persona... smiling.. she walks out of the room....stopping at the door momentarily...looking back at the pillow and then smiling and nodding to herself... with a happy glint in her eyes, walks on...
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Posted: 18 years ago
more more more......its beta den d real one.....anyway...wen u can write loads n loads n loads 😳

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