Originally posted by: MrsEku
ok i've got dis one.its old style scene......hehe nwayz i thought i'll add it! 😛
ok so gauri and shiv are off to honeymoon 😳
gauri n shiv are wandering on the streets, admirign the market sale.....n stuff .......
when suddenly gauri eye catches on a stall n she sees some really nice clothes n traditional sarees. she really wants to go n have a look but is really scared to ask shiv to come wid her
gauri: shiv
shiv: kya hua angrily
gauri: wo mein chahti thi ki agar aap thode waqt ke liye......but shes so scared, she cldnt even tell him
suddenly mobile rings:
shiv: hello
dadi: haan shiv beta, pohench gaye
shiv: ji dadi hum pohoch gaye
dadi: acha meri baat sun, gauri ko bilkul tang nahi karan........uska khyal rakhna...aur usse kisi cheez ki zaroorat ho, to mana mat karna........wada kar mujhse
shiv sighing: ji dadi
shiv looks at gauri arrogantly n turns away
now gauri manages to tell shiv 😊
gauri: shiv kya aap mere saath use dokan mein aa sakte ho plz
shiv: kyun, dekho gauri tumhe jaana to jao...i am not interested.......did u get it! damn
gauri wid her innocent look n PUPPPPPPPY EYES 😳 sees shiv
shiv sees her.......n gets angry.......ok lets go dammit
they both go to the shop
gauri: is admiring the sarees tells shiv
gauri: shiv yeh saree kaisi hain
shiv moodily replies: achi hain (wondeirng damn mein kahan aa gaya)
shiv: jaldi karo (damn)
gauri: smilingly, ji abhi bas...
gauri: shiv mein yeh saree le lu achi hai na looking innocently
shiv: ye ye ok
they both take da sari
it is late evening, n quite silent outside......they had to walk all da way to their hotel.
shiv sees a bar .....n really wants to have some beer.....
when gauri says shiv
shiv: kitni baar kaha mujhe peeche se mat toko
gauri: am sorry lekin aap kahan jaa rahe ho
shiv: dikhai nahi deta, this is a disco pub......am going to have some drink, agar tum aana chahti hoon to aao.......aur just go alone to the hotel
gauri has no choice but to go with shiv......she doesnt knows the way to the hotel
so she goes walking closely with shiv 😳....as she doesnt like these kind of places
shiv: 1 beer please
gauri seeing inncoently: shiv
shiv is busy in da music n singign n laughing
he goes n joins da dance floor leaving poor gauri alone at the counter 😡
suddenly 3 morons/flirts come in n see gauri standing there alone.....n go upto her
one of da guy says: yaar, aaj pehli baar dekh raha hoon ki koi sati savitri disco mein aayi hain
n they roar with laughter
other guys says:madam, ek minute mein aap ke liye kuch order kar lete hoon
gauri is damn scared, n freezes there doesnt knows what to do.........she cannot find shiv.....her eyes cant reach him for him to come n save her
guy: madam, yeh aapke liye
gauri: ji mein nahin peete......aur aap please yahan se chale jaaye
they grab gauris wrist n pulls her along wid them.........gauri cries leave me...i said leave me......!! .....when suddenly the guy is stopped by 2 big strong arms .........they look around its none other than shiv
shiv has such an anger look, dat gauri had never seen too... 😆
shiv takes his full strength in his fist n punches da 3 guys black n blue.....he grabs da guys collar, n says next time u dare do this i will kill u for life....those guys just fleds away from scene 😎
gauri is shock, staring at shiv.....she stares stares n stares.......she is abt to cry.......n runs towards shiv......gauri stops stares......shiv stares......n tighly hugs into shivs arms...... 😳😳😳
gauri crying bitterly: shiv mujhe tum kabhi kabhi kabhi chodkar nahin jaana......mein tumhare bina.....n stops 😳
shiv still in arrogant look......pulls gauris from his arms.......n says mere bina kya?? 😳
gauri looking at shiv with her puppy eyes😛......n shiv stares........
gauri: woh mein
shiv is still waiting for her answer
gauri loosk down.....
shiv: lets go gauri
dats it guys..........srry for making it 2 long 😳
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gys i though i'll cont wid dis part......i just cldnt think of nething else.......watever i had some thoughts jsut wrote it down.....😳
i know its too long.......hope i didnt bored ne of u!!!😊
Contd.....
shiv n gauri come out of the club n start walking both on a lonely road , wind is blowing sssssshhhhhhsss......gauris hair is swaying shiv looks at her n turns back again n looks down while walking...
shiv starts wonderin at himself: mujhe pata hai gauri tum mujhe se kya kehna chahti thi ...giving a smirk at himself
they both reach da hotel
in da hotel room:
gauri goes for her bath freshens up
shiv wrking late night .....n returns back to the room: gauri all freshned, n sees her waiting with da dinner all prepared n come
shiv: tumne abhi tak dinner nahi khaya
gauri: woh mein aap ka intezaar kar rahi thi, socha ki aap ayenge phir khana khaongi saath mein
shiv: dekho gauri, yeh 21st century hain, so plz yeh intezaar karoongi to tumhari sehat bigad jayengi....
gauri: looks down
shiv: awrite, lets have dinner
gauri smiles: n serves shiv
shiv is abt to eat, n sees gauri smiling
shiv: start karo gauri
gauri: pehle aap
shiv sarcastically rolling his eyes: n eats
gauri starts eating too....
phone rings:
badi maa:hello
gauri: hello badi maa
badi maa: jeeti raho beta
gauri: aap kaise hain
badi maa: mein theek hoon
badi maa: shiv kaisa hain, tum sab theek ho na
gauri: haa badi maa hum sab theek hain
shiv: hi mom
nikihila: hi beta how r u we r all missing u
shiv smiles: i miss u too mom hehe
n keeps da phone down
its bed time as usual shiv sleeps on the king size bed 😡 n gauri on the maamooli sa bed 😭
gauri sees shiv is reading a business magazine n is engrossed deeply in his wrk
gauri looks at shiv n says nothing n is abt to go to sleep
gauri is fast asleep
shiv is still reading n working....n falls asleep wid the bk lying on his chest...n his head is resting quite uncomfortably
gauri wakes up suddenly...just like dat.......n sees shiv quite uncomfortable, his books are near him.....she goes upto him n takes a pillow n puts it comfortably at rest n puts away da bks 😳
gauri goes to sleep
shiv suddenly opens his eyes n he knows it that gauri had made him comfortable....he looks deeply at her sleeping n sleeps away
next mroning:
gauri: shiv wake up...i think u have slept late.....its already 9 aap ko office ke liye der ho jayengi
shiv wakes up n sees gauri
gauri is abt to go n make her brkfast, when shiv sudenly grabs her hand n pulls gauri towards him
gauri all shocked n surprised didnt know what to do
gauri innocently stares at shiv
shiv: tum kya samajhti ho, mein tumhe itni aasani se jaane doonga
gauri: woh mein...n stammers....mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha hain shiv
shiv comes closer to gauri n tells her softly looking straight into her eyes: kal party mein, tum kuch bolti bolti ruk gayi.....mere bina kya gauri
shiv sees gauri all afraid n smiles waiting for her answer:
shiv: jab tak tum mujhe nahi bolongi, mein tumhe chodne wala nahi n putting up loads of attitude
gauri looking down says n looks into shiv eyes, n a smile appears slowly on her face
gauri: shiv mujhe plz chodo, mujeh dard ho raha hai
shiv looks at gauri n leaves her hand
shiv: u r too shy, tum baki ladki se bahut alag ho, shayad isliye mein janna chahta hoon tum mere baare mein kya sochti hoon
**********this is da part shiv propse gauri***********lol 😃
shiv gauri come abck to thier home now
one day:
shiv barges into the room all angry: itni achi business deal thi haath se nikal gayi
gauri all scared: kya mein aap ki madad kar skati hoon
shiv amused n angrily: no thanks!
night time
moon is brightly shining, its pleasantly cold, curtains are light n blowin wid the wind
gauris hair is swaying gently
shiv wkring in his laptop
n they r listening to FM RADIO 98.5 /6? FM MUMBAI .....watever it is i dont rmbr it now
n suddenly shiv fav song comes: jeena yaha marna yahi iske siva jaana kaha 😊
shiv is all excited n comes in front n is dancing wid himself.......he looks at gauri....n says: hey gauri just join wid me, this is my fav song
gauri: smiles n nods her head
shiv: ah c'mmon i just want soemone to give me company, its my fav song, be a sport!
gauri coming up innocently....doesnt knows wat to do
n as she is near to shiv, shiv all engrossed wid da song pulls gauri near him n starts dancing (just as the ball room dance we saw) lolz
shiv is all mast wid the song, he is not so much conc intially at gauri
gauri: sees shiv n all shy n blushes😳
shiv den looks at gauri, he looks n now is continously staring at her....
gauri n shiv both stare at each other......
for some reason: gauri is taken aback, n has tears in her eyes
shiv sees it, n wipes her tears
shiv comes up closely n kisses gauri on her forehead
shiv says: tumme mein aisa kya hain, jo baar baar mujeh tumhare tarf kheech kar mujhe le aata hain
shiv: u r very pretty gauri 😳
gauri: blushes
n lets go of her hand
shiv grabs her hand again n says: i love u 😳
gauri just cldnt belive wat he said, n stares at shiv
dats it 4 now!
😳😊
Edited by MrsEku - 18 years ago