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Posted: 18 years ago
Thank you people for enjoying the scenes so much. Here is the continuation:

Earlier:
Jus as she is ready to leave, the phone rings, stopping her in her tracks... and she looks back a lil surprised.. wondering who would have called...

Continued:

She walks over and picks the phone and listens and despite herself... smiles as she answers ... "Ji.."..
"Main shaam flight se waapas aa raha hoon.... and shaam ko business delegates ki party hai, so just be ready... alright then..."
"Ji.."
*Click* and the line goes dead...

Smiling , she replaces the receiver and heads out of the room...

At the Crossword book store...

Wandering around in the Poetry section, she finds the book she needs and just as she is about to leave, she notices some of her own favourite books ... and stops to take look, when she hears a familiar voice call out her name and turns around to see Anupam...

"Gauri... accha.. to tumhe bhi hai kitabon ka shauk.... chalo accha hua... ab main tumse kitabon ki baatein tho kar sakta hoon...." smiling...

Gauri smiling.. "Ji.. wo, aise hi, kuch kitaben...." , when Anupam notices , the book in her hand... "Arre tum bhi inki fan... thatz nice..."
before she can answer, anupam's cell , which rings interrupts the conversation and Anupam excuses himself, nodding at her when she indicates , she is heading towards the billing... and leaves the book she picked for herself there at the shelf, taking only one back with her...

As she gets the book billed,she requests for a gift wrap.. which Anupam notices, and smiles to himself... not uttering a word and casually asks , why she left the other books back at the counter...

"Ji... wo, baad mein le loongi... aaj sirf ek kitaab leni thi..."

"Accha ..Gauri , phir ghar pe milte hain.... mujhe thoda kaam hai...", excuses himself, and getting his books billed , leaves the place...

Gauri looks on as the book she purchased is sent to teh Gift wrap counter, and suddenly she remembers , Shiv talking to Vivan... "Blue is cool, it feels good .."

Almost immediately... "Suniye... Aap, please blue color waala gift wrap use karenge please... " and on being told to choose it herself... chooses a lovely sea blue wrap with some a random design of books in a library in the same color ... and finally having done wth the ordeal, happy with her purchase, heads home....
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Posted: 18 years ago
awsomeeeee...

yeyyyy u're bakkkk....

keep em comin.. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
Earlier:
... and finally having done wth the ordeal, happy with her purchase, heads home....

Continued:

Back the Kapoor mansion, Gauri enters her room, and leaving the book on the table, heads to freshen up , before she joins the rest of the family downstairs for lunch...

An otherwise boring day, Gauri just goes through with the chores, in the kitchen , when Badi Ma, teases her, "Kya baat bai... Shiv ko miss kar rahi hai...", when Gauri smiles shyly ," aajayega... "
"Ji Badi ma.. unhone phone kiya tha..." still smiling...
"Accha , mera beta tho sudhar raha hai..." , laughing...
"Acchca, tune liya jo tune lena tha... Book store mein..."
"Ji Badi ma..."
"Accha, ja thoda aaraa karle.. shaama ko tujhe party mein jaana hai na.. rest karle..." patting her on the cheek and Gauri obidiently leaves...

Back in her room, clock showing half past 5, she is jus sitting on the couch, waiting.....and thinking he might be delayed , walks out, towards the kitchen...

Flight having been delayed , Shiv rushes home and entering the room , seems a tad bit disappointed not to see Gauri.. quickly glancing around the room and casually... get about freshing and getting ready for the party...

Gauri meanwhile hearing the car being parked...rushes out to ask the driver and then with in spring in her step turns around to get to her room... Wondering if he had noticed it the table... smiling... and still in thought.. opens the door to her room ....when he turns around to see her... and unable to stop, she smiles and walks towards him, stopping jus a lil distant.... not saying a word, her happiness too evident...

"Tum abhi tak tayyar nahin hui....?"
"Ji , wo ... Badi ma ke saath kitchen mein..."
"Get ready soon, hame nikalna hai..."
"Ji..."

As she heads towards her cupboard , she glances towards his table her without his notice, and a tad bit disappointed, careful not to show her disappointment , walks over to choose a saree....


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Posted: 18 years ago
Awsome parts sareeta.. You are really gifted. Wish i could write like you. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
Wow, I just read this is awsome.
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Posted: 18 years ago

Earlier:
As she heads towards her cupboard , she glances towards his table her without his notice, and a tad bit disappointed, careful not to show her disappointment , walks over to choose a saree....

Continued:

Standing afore her cupboard, ready to picka saree, having made her choice, she stops.. when she hears...

"Blue saree pehno..." , surprised she turns around..."Suits you well..." he adds smiling...

Smiling, she turns around , picks a lovely blue and cream saree and heads off to change, when Shiv, all ready , get busy in front of the mirror and just as he walking out, on a spur, turns around and jus heads towards the bed , sits and glances at the door , Gauri entered and waits ...

Fiddling with his cell phone, he notices...accidentally, a blue package, on his bed side table, with the words shiv written in hindi.. in small neat writing..

Surprised, yet a sudden sense of pleasantless ovewhelming him... he picks it up and stares at it...not really opening it and then slowly ,turns it around and almost with a sudden instinct , tears it open , to find the book....
Surprised and unable to believe what he was seeing , holds it , jus staring , when Gauri, all ready , comes in...and stops , seeing him holding the book, when he turns around to see her... and slowly getting up , walks towards her ... and,....

"Gauri...yeh" looking her straight in the eye...
"Ji.. wo ... wo aapko pasand hai.. isiliye... aapke liye..." , a slight tension apparent in her voice..
"Lekin ..."
"Wo...aapka parcha dikha tha, jis par aapne likha tha.." pointing towards the pillow..."wo , main dekhna nahin..nahin chahiye tha.. par.. wo...main.." fumbling for words... feeling uneasy at his silence...

After what seemed the longest pause ever..." Thank you....."

Surprised she looks at him.... him smiling at her... tapping the book in his hand...
"Chalen....." , as he walks back to the table to leave the book on the bed side table...
Nodding she joins him...

Shiv casually... "Tumhe yeh bhi pata hai.. ki mera favourite color , blue hai..." laughing... at her surprise.." Woh Gift wrap.." and they both burst out laughing , as Shiv opens the door for her... following her out of the room....

Edited by sareeta - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Earlier:

Shiv casually... "Tumhe yeh bhi pata hai.. ki mera favourite color , blue hai..." laughing... at her surprise.." Woh Gift wrap.." and they both burst out laughing , as Shiv opens the door for her... following her out of the room....

Continued:
At the party, Shiv and Gauri bump into Anupam as well, and Shiv as usual happy to see his Dada, gets into a chat...with him , while Gauri is distracted and gets chatting with the other women..she met earlier in the parties...as Shiv looks on , happy to note Gauri getting comfortable in the party, and continues talking to Anupam Da...

Out of the blue... "Pasand aayi book tujhe...?"
Surprised..."Kya da.."
"Dekh, main Gauri se mila tha Book store mein, jab wo book khareed rahi thi,... usne bataya nahin, par tere liye hi khareed rahi thi..."
"Kuch seekh apni biwi se...gift de tho kaise dete hai..."
"Dada.. tum bhi...."
"Tu nahin sudrega..."
"Accha sun... use bhi kitaabon ka shauk...hai..." , "ghar mein bore ho rahi hogi... kuch kitabein khareed de..."
"Wo khud le legi Dada.. ab.. kya .."
"lena tha , tho aaj nahin leti.. usne liya nahin, jo pasand kiya.. wo bhi nahin li..."
"Laa de use... arre kabhi tho patiyon waale harkatein kiya kar..."
"Dada..." now visibly avoiding and blushing.." ok fine... ab kuch aur baat karen..."
"Accha theek hai...." , both of them laughing it off...as Shiv looks around for Gauri , with a determined look... a faint smile escaping his lips...
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Posted: 18 years ago
sareeta di..

wow!

please do continue!!

👏
sareeta thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
Earlier:
"Accha theek hai...." , both of them laughing it off...as Shiv looks around for Gauri , with a determined look... a faint smile escaping his lips...

Continued:

The party having ended on a usual happy note, celebrating the closure of a deal, Shiv and Gauri head out..

In the car , on the way... , Shiv takes a sudden deviation, Gauri realizes , looking a little puzzled but doesnt utter a word, when he noticing her puzzled look, not facing her..says... "Thoda kaaam hai..." and they drive the rest of the distance in silence...

Shiv pulls over into the parking lot for the Book store and says.. "Chalo.." and she jus follows , wondering.. "shaayad unhe apni books khareed ni hai..."
Shiv enters the store pausing momentarily for her to catch up and then as she stands next to him says... "Tumhe kuch books pasand aaye the na ... lelo.. Main wahaan ... us section mein honga.. " pointing to a management section...
"Ji.. par ..."
"Dada ne bataya tha... Tumhe kitabon ka shauk hai.. good.. lelo.. I'll be there.. " , he points to the section and gives a gentle pat on her shoulder and walks off...with a smile..

Gauri smiling and feeling elated, walks slowly towards the section and finally gets down to choosing her books...and is browsing the books having lost track of time...when she notices some one next to her, and turns around to find Shiv ...
Before he says a thing.. she blurts out..
"Ji.. wo ... main... bas..." and feeling guilty for having taken too long, drops the books in her hand on the shelf and randomly picks one.. and "yahin lena tha..."
Shiv looks at the book in her hand and then slowly at the books she dropped on the shelf and nods and they go over th billing section ....

At the billing section, Shiv suddenly stops the clerk, "Hold on.." and walks over to the section they came from as a puzzled Gauri looks on ...

Returning with the books she had left back , he hands them over...when Gauri..
"Par.. "
Raising his handa little to stop her..and she looks a little apprehensive.. he looks over the clerk and finishing the billing and Shiv picking covers , as she tries to take them from the clerk, walk over to their car...
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes

sareeta di..

that was awesome all the parts.. i loved it..!!

btw are u still as crazy about ks.. or do u now suffer like me kaaitis..!!

lol!!

please do continue!!

👏

Aaah, finally found your post, sorry dear seem to have missed it in the lot ...

No , I am not into KS at all now, I have lost it for KS...... only kaaitis since 2 months...

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