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Posted: 18 years ago
Helloa people, after my teeny weeny break from this post, I am back yet again...Hee Hee.. 😆

Taking off from Thursday episode and the new promo...here goes:

After the sangeet session, and his talk with Shanks , Shiv is on his way to his room, lost in thought... and on reaching his room, notices Gauri aint around, and wonders a little aloud.."Gauri .. abhi tak nahin aayi..." and suddenly thinking of the dance and her whistling, smiles to himself... and goes to his cupboard to pick his outfit...

Opening the cupboard, he stands there , lost , not moving at all, staring ahead , when he senses soem movement and realizes Gauri entering the room , in her blue outfit... and his face softens noticing her... when she noticing him near the cupboard and slowly walks towards and stops near the cupboard and looks at the cupboard and back at him, not uttering a word , when he moves slightly and she smiles a little and removes a Blue Kurta out for him.. and gives it to him , a lil hesitant , when he smiles and takes it from her... and turns around...

Gauri then looks at her cupboard , and is about to move away when she hears..

"Gauri..."
Turning around instantly .."Ji..."

Shiv looking at her intensely, and then suddenly with a soft look in his eyes..."You dance well...", when Gauri smiles a little , shyly when he adds... "and yeah Blue really suits you...." and then looking at the kurta she chose for him, smiles at her and turns around....lost again in thought, a faint flicker of pain in his eyes...

....To be continued..... 😊


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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sareeta

Helloa people, after my teeny weeny break from this post, I am back yet again...Hee Hee.. 😆

Taking off from Thursday episode and the new promo...here goes:

After the sangeet session, and his talk with Shanks , Shiv is on his way to his room, lost in thought... and on reaching his room, notices Gauri aint around, and wonders a little aloud.."Gauri .. abhi tak nahin aayi..." and suddenly thinking of the dance and her whistling, smiles to himself... and goes to his cupboard to pick his outfit...

Opening the cupboard, he stands there , lost , not moving at all, staring ahead , when he senses soem movement and realizes Gauri entering the room , in her blue outfit... and his face softens noticing her... when she noticing him near the cupboard and slowly walks towards and stops near the cupboard and looks at the cupboard and back at him, not uttering a word , when he moves slightly and she smiles a little and removes a Blue Kurta out for him.. and gives it to him , a lil hesitant , when he smiles and takes it from her... and turns around...

Gauri then looks at her cupboard , and is about to move away when she hears..

"Gauri..."
Turning around instantly .."Ji..."

Shiv looking at her intensely, and then suddenly with a soft look in his eyes..."You dance well...", when Gauri smiles a little , shyly when he adds... "and yeah Blue really suits you...." and then looking at the kurta she chose for him, smiles at her and turns around....lost again in thought, a faint flicker of pain in his eyes...

....To be continued..... 😊




omg finalllllllllly u r back
😊
im soo glad
nice part.....continue the rest soon.....
sareeta thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
Earlier:
Shiv looking at her intensely, and then suddenly with a soft look in his eyes..."You dance well...", when Gauri smiles a little , shyly when he adds... "and yeah Blue really suits you...." and then looking at the kurta she chose for him, smiles at her and turns around....lost again in thought, a faint flicker of pain in his eyes...

Continued:

Shiv dressed in the blue kurta is busy at the mirror , when he notices Gauri standing infront of the cupboard, staring ahead, into the cupboard, a slight confusion written all over her face, as she is holding a wine red colored saree in her hand.. He turns towards her and as she stands unaware, stands next to her and without looking at her pulls a offwhite saree, with a yellow border, out a little and holds it and then looks at her , when she looks at him and shequietly lowering her eyes, pulls the saree out and glances at the red , looking for a place to put it back, when Shiv takes it from her hand and helps put it back...and Gauri heads off, to change ...
Mean while Shiv all ready and set to go, jus walks over to his bed and sits down, clasping his hands and resting his chin on his hands, looking lost... when Gauri walks out of the changing room , looking angelic... and sits in front of the mirror...putting on her jeewllery , when she notices him sitting quiet and quickly finishing off with her jewellery, slowly walks up next to shiv , shiv still lost , when she slowly calls..."Shiv..." and as she calls him, a lone tear escapes his eye....as he closes his eyes , not moving , not uttering a word...
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Posted: 18 years ago
sareetaaaaaaaa u're bakkkk 😃 😳

awsomeeeeee 👏

continue soon...
*mad* thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
y is he crying????
dnt make him cry

continue rest soon 😊
sareeta thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
Earlier:
......slowly walks up next to shiv , shiv still lost , when she slowly calls..."Shiv..." and as she calls him, a lone tear escapes his eye....as he closes his eyes , not moving , not uttering a word...

Continued:

Pretending to look tired, he attempts to wipe his face, wiping the tear away and mutters..."Jus tired...", noticing her twidling her hands , not looking up... when she says..."Wo..", he slowly raises his head and looks her right in eye and taking cue, she slowly moves towards and sits next to him, maintaining a slight distance... shiv still looking down ...
"Wo... Shii..vv.." , Shiv looking up towards her, when she a lil worried, contiues... "aap.... , aaap theek tho hai...."
"Yeam... am awwright... jus tired..." , "Tum jao... I'll join in later..."

She jus looks on, still worried, unconciously extending her hand towards him, when she stops suddenly realizing...when he looks up at her and with a slight flicker of a smile says... "Jao... late ho raha hai.." and she quietly , gets up and heads out, pausing to look around at him , before she finally heads out.... as shiv finally looks up at her heading out , closing the door behind her...then closing his eyes, and lying down on the bed...

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Posted: 18 years ago
SARITA dI YOU ARE SIMPLY AWSOME 👏
This is my first attemt. Plz overlook my hindi cuz i'm bengali & hardly know hindi. HERE MY PART GOES........
ALL The FAMILY MEMBER ARE SITTING IN THE HALL. AFTER SOME TIME GAURY & SHIV ALSO JOIN THEM. WHEN NIKHILA SAW GAURY & SHIV TOGATHER SHE SAID," Aary beta kha reh gaye the tum log! Aao hamare saath betho". Gaury Said," Ji bari ma". then she & shiv take their seat. Nikhila said," Aary mai to tum logo ko ek baat batana bhul hi gayi. Shiv, tumahare masi ki beti ki shadi hai or hum sub ko bulaya hai us shadi ko attend karne. To hum sub kaal subhahi pune ke nikal jayenge. It's ok with you na?" Shiv said, "yes we will all start at 7am." Dadi said," to chalo chalo saab packing bhi baki hai, na?" So everybody leave.
The next morning everybody join in the parking ground. three car are ready to leave. when Nikhila saw Gaury she said," Tum hamare saath nehi aa rehi ho. tum to shiv ke saath uske gari mai jaogi". Gaury said," or aap log?" Nikhila said, " hum sub us do gari mai chalenge." So gaury goes near to shiv's car & shiv open the door for her. They all started their journey.
Will continue later if you guy's want. Aaghe aage dekhiye kya hota hai 😉 😉 😉
Luv
Raisa 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
Raisa, that was such a cute scene, please continue... and yeah thank you so much for the kind words, am so glad you enjoy them!! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
sarita di u r back,tht's nice.....plz continue ur mini ff 😊
and raisa ur scene too is cute plz continue soon 😊
sareeta thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
Earlier:
as shiv finally looks up at her heading out , closing the door behind her...then closing his eyes, and lying down on the bed...

Continued:

Lost in thought , he slowly drifts off into sleep... only to wake up on hearing footsteps in the room.. and slowly turns to see, Gauri having entered the room closing the door behind her... when he tries to sit up ...

She walks towards him, with a cup of tea , and he realizes , its his favoutire ginger tea and looks at her..and looking at the watch..muttering.. "how long.. kitna waqt..", when she replies... "bas pandra minute... aap bahut thake hue lag rahe hai.. isiliye... yeh....".. looking down at the tea cup in her hand...

Shiv looks at the cup and then at her... and slowly takes the cup and then slowly asks..." Tumhe kaise pata mujhe ginger tea pasand hai...", "Ji.. wo mai aapke liye chai bana rahii tho , dadi ma ne kaha, aapko adrak waali chai pasand hai...." and stops slowly realizing she has spoken too much , shiv not having said anything , jus drinking the tea...

Finally...."Thank you...", placing the cup on the table next to him..., as gauri bends to take the cup, when suddenly ..
"Gauri...", as she looks at him, he stands up to look her in the eye...
With a serious look , pain struck... he struggles to say something... as Gauri looks on worried..."Shi..vv.. kya hua...", as he jus looks on really saddened...
and then ... suddenly... "Gauri..." and quickly adding..as gauri attentive as ever.. worried as well..."Shakkar kam thi chai mein...." and then laughs mischeviously...as gauri slowly realizing... looks at him...with a apologetic face , when ... " but it was good... " and heads to freshen up...
Gauri looks down, feelinga little silly, but nevertheless smiles remembering him laugh and then Shiv joins her.. "Chalo...", as he approaches the door...
"Aur haan... next time remember.. shakkar , do spoon.. awwright?" when Gauri nods diligently, and both of them break into giggles...

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