Shiv+Gauri Completed-Happy Ending-pg 24

prishika

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Posted: 18 years ago

#51

lol...i love ur ff man.....i can't wait for u to update it fast enough!!
but yah..i think they are called auditions!! they take ur pics and all that stuff and then decide if its a yes or no!!
continue soon.... 😊 😊

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Charu

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Posted: 18 years ago

#52

really picturing gauri wicked is difficult...but i luv 2 read ur fic...cont soon

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Anmol

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Posted: 18 years ago

#53

just caught up with your fanfic and its really gr8!
cont soon plz!

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bhumi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#54

nice part but 2 short
continue soon

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Numera

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Posted: 18 years ago

#55

wow awesome ff!! i hope shiv gets jealous seeing gauri with other guys flirting!! plz continue soon!

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NaV

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Posted: 18 years ago

#56

WOW.. i just caught up... excellent. i luv this.. gauri is different fo sure.. i can't believe she left him a letter saying he snores a lot.. 😆 can't wait fo d nxt part.. 👏

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Marauders

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Posted: 18 years ago

#57

Part 10.

Maheen yells: GAURII WHERE R U??GAURI..and one by one the whole parivaar enterss. After a while Gauri enters as well.
Gauri: Jee papa.Wats uP?? Why r u yellingg. goshhhhhh
Maheen: Gauri yeh sab kya hai? and he throws the letter on gauri.
Gauri reads it and smiles. Gauri: Papa i think u read this right? So why r u asking me this stuff then?
Shiv: Gaurii tameez se baat karo.
Gauri: shiv i didnt disrespect anyone. and she goes to her room smiling.
Maheen: omg i dont believe it gauri can act like that.
Shiv: Dad.. don't u worry i am gonna talk to her😡 and he leavess.

will cont after 2 hrss..

Edited by anu-pre4eva - 18 years ago

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dalvinder

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Posted: 18 years ago

#58

IT WAS GOOD

YEH CONT SOON

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Marauders

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Posted: 18 years ago

#59

continued..

Shiv goes to his room and yells: Gauri.
Gauri comes out of the bathroom wearing a pink mini skirt and a pink spaghetti straps shirt with lots of make-up on and a small handbag with her.
Gauri: Oh Shiv, good thing u r here. Actually i just got a call from my directer and I have to go for my audition right away.
Shiv closes the door and walks upto her, saying: No. You arent going anywhere...
Gauri cuts him off: Excuse me??? Shayad tum bhool rahe ho ke we both have freedom of our own. We can do w/e we want remember?
Shiv: Yeh but..
Gauri: No buts sweetheart and she gives him a kiss and goes.

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Marauders

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Posted: 18 years ago

#60

For abt two weeks Gauri keeps on going for her rehersals....It's around 8:00 o'clock and the kapoor parivaar(except the guys) are waiting for KZK to come just when Gauri's add comes on...
Every one is shocked. In the add Gauri is wearing a really short black skirt and a black bikini( 😆 sry i donnno what else to put). Gauri and kaya are in the livingroom too. Gauri is like: yessss mera kaam hogaya.... 😛 and kaya gives her a smile.

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