Shiv+Gauri Completed-Happy Ending-pg 24

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi guys I am starting a new fan fic on gauri and shiv hope u like it. me and sania( that is kyahoganimmoka) my friend r going to write it.
Intro-
Kapoor family-
Maheen kapoor- a big business man loves his family
Nikhila Kapoor- a house wife really nice luvs her kids a lot
Palak kappor- a pampered girl
Shiv kapoor- the one with the attitude luvs his sister a lot
Gauri kapoor- wife of shiv had to marry him because her fianc shashank left her on the marriage day which is still a mystery to her
Other important characters
Devika : She is the rival of Maheen Kapoor. She owns a land, which Maheen wants at any cost to complete his dream project. Later, it is revealed that she is Gauri's dadi. She knows about Mahen's plan to get Shiv married to Gauri and so she wants Shiv to divorce Gauri.

Mayank: Mayank is a big business tycoon who is very intelligent. Shiv idolizes him. He is innocent and genius. He is not fashionable. He is very good in his work and remembers everything about business. At office, he is very charged but at home he is always sleepy, tired and lazy. When he comes to know about Ipshita's relation with Shiv he is hurt.
Sashank: Shashank works with Mahen Kapoor as an accountant. Mahen wants to get him married to Gauri. He is projected as a hero but later is revealed to be part of Mahen's drama.
Ipshita : She's a free spirit with a mind of her own and makes all her decision by herself. She is spontaneous, full of life and extremely adventurous.
Alok: Gauri's father is a vaidya by profession and is highly respected in his community. He his family and will do anything to protect them. He is simple, honest and kind.
Kaya: Gauri's pampered and younger sister is Kaya. She is a feminist and has her own set of ambition and convictions. Becoming a has been her life long dream. She feels that she is being victimized to pay for her brother's mistakes...
Okay guys I am continuing after Thursdays epi
I hope u all enjoy this fan fic
Plz replyy😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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very interesting
luv the character sketch
cant wait for the 1st part
eagerly awaiting it
take care
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Posted: 18 years ago
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kewl!a gr8 start!will stay tuned in and wait 4 da 1st part of the fan fic!seems interestin!

X.o.X.o.---Jasmine---x.O.x.O
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Posted: 18 years ago
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aww! its great continue soon 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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k guyss i will continue it tomorrow for sure
sry to keep u guys waitingg 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: anu-pre4eva

k guyss i will continue it tomorrow for sure
sry to keep u guys waitingg 😭


awwwwwwwww
its okay
u take ur time hun
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ok guys i am gonna continue it guys plz remember that this is gonna be my first fan-fic(eva) and i m gonna use a lot of hindi words which may not be proper so u will have 2 bear with me 😃 and if u want the fan-fic to be in english then plz tell me so i will write the next part in english.
ok here it goess(starts with thursday's episode)

Devika:Mein kissi par ahsan nahiin karti mein jo kuch karti hoon apney liye kartii hoon.
Nikhila: Kya matlab?
Devika: Matlab yeh kay apko mera aik kaam karna hoga.
Nikhila: kaisa kaam?
Devikda:aapko shiv aur gauri ki shadi turni hogi.
Nikhila:yeh mumkn nahiin hain mein aisa nahiin honay doon gii.
Devika: apko meray baat sunay hi parey gi mujay na sunnay ki adat nahiin hai and then she leaves.
Devika is in her car(to herself):gauri mein jaanti hoon key tumhe jaab yeh baat pata chaley gi kay mein tumhari aur shiv ki shadi turna chahti hoon to tumhe bahut bura lagey ka lekin beta mera yakeen mano mein jo bhi kar rahiin hoon tumhare achey ke liye kar rahiin hoon.

ok guys thats it for noww i kno it wasnt that good but w/e came in my mind i wrote it down and i will try to make the next part better (buh remember it was my first fan-fic) and i will continue the next part later Inshallah
k tc byee
Edited by anu-pre4eva - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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do continue..wanna read more...plz plz write a lil longer parts

gr8 fic cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks i will continue it whn i get homee
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ok guys here is the second part It is gonna be short too šŸ˜• sryy
k here it goes

Alok:mujhe jald se jald yeh shaher chorna parey ga agar maa(and that is devika) ko pata chal gaya key mein yaha par hoon to meray paas jo kuch bacha hai vo to voh bhi lay laygiin

Scene switches to gauri+shiv

gauri is in her room waiting for shiv to come. she is really nervous thinking abt what shiv will do to her. and just then shiv enters. he walks towards her in burning anger and says "I GAVE U A CHANCE TO RUN AWAY BUT YOU.....You B***(lol) CAME BAK BUT NOW I AM GONNA MAKE UR LIFE HELL aur agar tum baagna bhi chaho gi to mein yeh nahiin honay doon ga.
Gauri: Shiiv(in weird accent lol)
Shiv: Juss shut up and go to h*ll and he walks out of the room.


ok guys thats it for now sryy i know it was a short update will continue later but i have to take a shower hope u like it andd plz reply and if any of u know how to change the title can u plzz tell me k thnx in advance bye
Edited by anu-pre4eva - 18 years ago

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