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Posted: 15 years ago
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Sunshine Part 1






Shiv on stage:Hi guys….today you all are invited here to join us to celebrate the wedding anniversary of the prince and the princess of Nanda house….Rahul Nanda and his wife Paayal Nanda..
Rahul and Paayal come onto the stage holding hands together.
All of them clap their hands.
R:I thank everyone to join us to celebrate…today I and Paayal's marital journey has complete two years.
Paayal is my brother Shiv's best friend in college.He inroduced his best friend to me.Thus our love story started.
Rahul and Paayal smile at each other.
R:Shiv only joined us together.I wish he gets his true love.I and my mother have found a beautiful girl for Shiv.
Shiv and Paayal are shocked.
Their mother Vasundara takes the mike from him:Yes,that lucky girl is Mishti.Mishti goes near Vasu with a smile.
R:How is our surprise Shiv?
Shiv can't open his mouth.
V:Come.stand near Mishti.Newspapers and magazines need Nanda house's new couple's snaps.
S:I'm sorry…I'm not well.I want to go and take rest.
Shiv goes to his room.All feel bad.

Rahul tells Paayal in the room:Shiv's behaviour was very bad at the party.
P:He told that he is sick.That's why.
R:But he should have controlled himself in public.
P:I think he did'nt like Mishti.
Rahul gets angry:What?Why?Did he tell like that to you?
Payal is scared.Her eyes get wet:No,but I feel so…
R:No!He has to like what mom choses for him.
P:But his interest may be different.
R:No,I don't want to hear anything like that from you.
He goes to bed.Paayal is sad.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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wowwwwww jasminerahul.after a very longggggggg time a ff from ur side.thank u so much 4r the ff.n starting is wonderful.will be waiting 4r ur next update
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Sunshine Part 2



Shiv enters Paayal's room:Paayal…what is this?You did'nt tell Rahul about what I told you?
P:I'm sorry Shiv..i was about to tell him….but….
S:Please tell him soon.
P:Ok,I will tell him today..
Vasundara is overhearing their conversation.She thinks:What is the secret between Shiv and Paayal?

Rahul and Paayal go to the church.Paayal prays.Rahul extends his arm.Paayal holds his arm and they go out.They are in the church compound.
R:While you were praying I noticed your face.You were not happy.Something is disturbing you.What is that?
P:When you extended you arms to catch me I got courage…so I will tell you…I studied in a convent school.That is why I came here to talk to you.Because here you can find only peace.Rahul…Shiv is in love.
Rahul is shocked:What?How can he?
P:Why are you getting angry?You also fell in love.Shiv has no right to fall in love?
R:Who is his girlfriend?
P:She is not his girlfriend.She does'nt know that Shiv loves her.
R:Who is she?
P:Gauri.
R:Who is she?
P:Our Gauri.
R:Our Gauri means…our maid Gauri?
P:Yes.
R:How can he fall in love with a maid?
P:Why not?You only told me that Gauri is a good cook…she is like your sister..
R:That is true.But mom will never approve this relationship.
P:She will..if you try…please Rahul…your brother's happiness is in your hand.
Rahul is upset.

Vasundara goes and sits near Paayal.
V:Paayal,what is happening in this house?
Paayal is shocked.She thinks:Did she know anything about Shiv and Gauri?
P:What are you asking mom?
V:No need of hiding anything from me.I don't want anyone to fool me.Tell me…
Paayal is tense.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#4
its differnt ...... plx cont sooonnnn.............i lyke it.....................
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Posted: 15 years ago
#5

lovely update!!! awaiting the next update!!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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jasmin its really very cute ff.i just loved the way shiv supported gauri n went against his mothers wishes.seems like she is very cunning lady.keep up the gud work yaar n will be waiting for moreeeeeeee ff's for our shivgauri
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Posted: 15 years ago
#7

Sunshine Part 3






Paayal:Shiv…
Rahul comes:Shiv loves Gauri.
Vasundara is shocked:What?That bloody maid trapped her.Otherwise he would not have fallen for her.
R:Mom,if Sshiv likes her,why don't we conduct their wedding?
Vasu shouts:No!You wanted to marry Paayal.I did'nt stand against you.Because Paayal is from a good family..very good financial background.But what does Gauri have?Gauriiiiiiiiiiii
Gauri comes there with a smile.
Vasu shouts at her:How dare you snatch my son Shiv?
Gauri is shocked:What are you saying ma'am?
V:Get lost.I have dismissed you…now onwards you can't work here.Leave my house.
She is shocked. She cries:Please ma'am,don't do that.We will suffer if I lose my job.
V:Suffer…that is your punishment.You deserve it.
G:I have not done anything wrong.
V:Snatching my son will not be wrong for you.But in my eyes it is a crime.
Vasu pushes her out of the house.Gauri cries.
Rahul and Paayal are helpless.They feel upset seeing the sight.
Gauri who has lost all hopes faints.Shiv catches her.

Shiv phones Paayal.
P:A horrible incident took place today.
She explains everything.Shiv is burning with anger.
Rahul talks to him:Shiv,don't worry,I will sort out the problem.
S:Gauri fainted on the road.I took her to our hotel.
Rahul is shocked:What?Where is she now?
S:She is with me now.
Rahul:Oh!
Shiv puts the phone down.
R:Gauri is with Shiv now.
Paayal is shocked:What?I can't understand what is happening now.
She is tense.

Gauri is sleeping in the bed.She opens her eyes.She is scared to see Shiv besides her.
G:How did I reach here?
S:Cool down.You fainted on the road side.So I brought you here.
G:We both alone in the room?
S:No,I called your mother here.She just went out to buy medicine for you.
Her mother Kavita enters the room.She is relieved.
Kavita smiles:You opened your eyes.I'm relieved.
S:Don't worry about losing the job.I will compensate the loss by marrying Gauri.
They are shocked.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wowowow loved it plx update and a long one.................................hehe
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Posted: 15 years ago
#9

Sunshine Part 4








Rahul and Paayal are on the beach.They look at the waves.
R:Beach is a place we never get tired of.
P:Yes,its so beautiful..
R:Like our love.
She smiles.
R:I feel that these waves are narrating our love story to the people who come here.
P:Nice imagination.

Shiv and Gauri dress up for the wedding..Gauri is shedding tears in her room.Shiv goes near the door.He sees her shedding tears.She sees him.Gauri stands close to the door
S:I know that its very difficult for a girl to have a sudden wedding without knowing personally the person she is getting married to.But I promise that I will make you happy always.
Gauri:Whatever I know about you is more than enough.You are marrying me…that itself is a great thing.
She wipes her tears.She comes out of te room.She is numb.
They get married.They go to Nanda house.All are shocked.
V:How dare you marry this maid?
S:Now is not a maud.She is my wife.
V:Oh!Disgusting.
Vasundara goes inside.
Rahul:Paayal,receive them…
She comes with a lamp and receive them.

Rahul puts powder on his face.Paayal laughs:You are going to sleep now.Now why are you putting powder?
R:To become handsome.
She laughs.
R:When I saw Shiv and Gauri as a newly wed couple,I feel like going back to our wedding day…we were also a newly wed couple.Why did time pass so fast?
She smiles:So you are trying to dress up like a bride groom?
R:Why not?You also Paayal...
He puts powder on her face.
P:What is this Rahul?
They both laugh.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#10
hahaha very cute......... waiting for next part.....................

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