Sunshine:Shiv Gauri ff - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
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aw ok comment time: i have to say i really enjoyed reading an ff which i didnt have to wait for as such i love the fact that when i began reading it day the ff was complete really. reading it all together was totaly something else. really liked the story and my frav moments had to be firstly when shiv tells gauris mum that he will complansate the loss of her job with marrying her. love that. that comment in its self gave off the character sketch of what shiv is. a sense of authority on what he wants totaly shows its self and that i though was amasing. ..loved the fact that he could take that decision of marrying gauri and not carring on vasus thoughts at all.
the fact that he very well knew that he loved gauri yet still his love was one sided it was coming from him and not her. he didnt expect her to just fall for him. he understood totaly all those feelings for gauri. the second scene that i loved was just before the wedding shiv talks to gauri and tells her that he understands how difficult it is for her. that was a really nice bit. As for pyal and rahul they seemed like a really nice cute couple a little bit more of them would have been nice. i liked the fact that the story was effective in potraying two sides the whole vasu evil and also shiv and gauris love story plus p and r!! awesome i was routing for both couples to be happy throughout my read of the climax...
i really loved specifics of this ff..the two scences i mentioned were fab and i almost cant decide on my frav character i think it has to be go to both payal and rahul to be honest for me they formed a really nice to read supporting role for shiv and gauri.

i really enjoyed that thank you!!!!!! im off to read you and mine!! thanks..your going to get me hooked i think😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i liked the story and ma fav characters are ofcourse sg ...but i m litlle disapiont u were able to do alot with it but u ended it very quickly hope to see more from u in ur othere ff......... good luck for them :-)))))))))))
cheers........................................
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Posted: 15 years ago
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SOOOO SWEEEET!! dats ws short bt cute n nice!👍🏼⭐️👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24
lovely story jasmin
i like it

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